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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

wow awesome update...

great start...loved it so much...

very interesting...a manan version of 50 shades of grey...

can't wait for the story to continue...

its very interesting...cant wait to read more...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

I'm sure this will be as good as when arrogant meets smart...

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Diksha Anand

@DikshaAnand

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Congo for new ff
Fifty shades of grey story well I knw its story I have just started reading the novel and the starting plot is same...
But u did a great job
Aryamann is there in the story
Update soon
Will love to read it
Thanks for pm

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SehrMemon

@sehrmemon

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: neetimehta
It was awesome
m also in love wid story of ana and cristian
tell me one thing this story is gonna only as per nandini's side as per in book there was ana's p.o.v. Or u will add maink's Too??
please pm me
and yeah u r mindblowing
take care

Depends on how i go mostly it will be Nandini's POV but i will add Manik's too on some times...

And thankyou for loving it

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srija-n

@srija-n

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

wow very interesting start ...
beautifully written ..
plz cntinue soon ..
and plz pm me ...

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pinky

@kimnana

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

lovely i must say nandani smitten by his charm

their first meeting was awesome

ty for pm

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Dreamer05

@Dreamer05

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Hi...read the prologue and am excited about your story already. The premise you have chosen is a known one to most so it would be interesting to see how you shape your characters and the storyline differently...good luck

Also, just to point out..Hair in itself is plural..hairs is no word :)