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diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: neeharika__
😊😊
dis was me in d enitre update
so preety lines so besutiful
n😳dis whn manik blushed n nandu said even i lyk
oye balle balle maza aagyaq

Well mujhe bhi bahot

Maza aaya likhte hue😛

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diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: shanuqureshi
Hey diya...
Update was mesmerising dear... lovely... 👏 👏 😳
Nandini is enjoying her bike ride... aur usko kya welcome...
Too good... superb...
Manan convo... the way manik clear all her doubt ... mind blowing...
Aww manik is blushing 😳 aur nandini usse tease krti hai... awesome dear... aur last m finally nandini confess krti hai i like u too... aww ...
dear this is not good yrr yhi pr hi finish kr diya...
Plz update soon... um waiting for ur next part...

Beautifully pen down this part ... well done ... great job...
Keep it up...
keep smiling...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
see u soon...
lots of love...

Thanks inaya

Am glad you like it😛

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diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal
Omg...soo cute manik blushing aww lovely
Manan convo...very nyc beautifully written
Manik is soo sweet n understanding...nandu also started feeling for him...
Awwsummm chp...superbbb

Thanks😛

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diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: Manansamkhan
its amazing ..

love it ..
the manik malhotra is blushing ..

wow , awsome superb fab ...

u penned it amazing...

stay blessed ..
cont soon ...

Thanks😛

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diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: Danny92
Nice update
The way he understands her unsaid words nd the way he answered her was super
The manik malhotra is blushing oh God
Continue sooonnn

Thanks

Well u can say ur

Best friend knew u better than anything😛

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diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: Afila1993
Wowww awesome update Dr...
Manan was as always so cute...
It was nt tat short dr...
It was so sweet update..
I loved this very much...
Manik understand nandu very well...
He loves her very much..
Slowly slowly nandu was also falling for him..
Awww manik malhotra is blushing... 😳😳😳
Thanks for the pm dr..
Waiting eagerly for the next update Dr...
Always stay blessed nd happy

Thanks dear😛

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diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Thank you SooO much Guys for ur lovely comments and likes...so here I come with another short update ...so here u go...hope you guys like it ...

ENJOY😛

Part-3(A)

Nandani : u knew manik I like ur blush ...I think I like u too

Manik couldn't believe in his ears ...whatever he is hearing is all true or he is dreaming ...manik was so shocked by her sudden confession but on the other side ...his happiness has no bounds but still to confirmed ...he asked her

Manik : Nandani what did you just say

Nandani realized what she said...she smiled but she thinks to tease him

Nandani innocently said: Manik maine kya kaha ...what are you saying?

Manik : Nandani tumne abhi jo kaha ...please repeat it

Nandani was trying hard to control her laughter

Nandani : par Manik what should I repeat ...I don't understand what are you talking about

Manik was so impatient ...he thought maybe she forget it ...so he thought to remember her

Manik : arre tumhe yaad nahi acha u said am sweet right

Nandani smiled : yaah u r very sweet

Manik : uske baad tumne kya kaha

Nandani : arre uske baad toh maine kuch bhi toh nahi kaha

Manik sadly said: Really

Nandani makes a innocent face said : Really

Now manik was sad ...he thought maybe he is dreaming ...but just then he heard nandani's laughter..he looked at her in confusion ...nandani pulled manik's both cheeks

Nandani : ...hehe...oh god manik ...u r sooO Cute ...Scriously look at ur face yaar ...I was just teasing u

Manik : so u were teasing me all the time ...

She nodded her head as yes and still laughing

After some time she saw manik who was angry ...she knew this time ...this prank is too much ...so she instantly holds both ears and cutely said : sholly

Manik smiled looking at her cute antics and smiled

Manik : God main toh tumse naaraz bhi nahi reh sakta

She hugged him and smilingly said : Toh kon kehta ha naraaz hone ko ...u knew when u get Angry naa ...u were like ...like

Manik raised his eye brows and said: like

Nandani : like saddu ...jo tum ho

After saying this she just run away ...manik realized what she said ...he too ran behind her...

Manik : Nandani ...Nandani stop

Nandani : catch me if you can manik

Manik : Nandani stop yaar ...look am very tired

Nandani : oh really itne main hi thak gaye

Manik : Nandani Please stop

She looked at him ...and he caught her by waist

Manik : caught u

Nandani : This is cheating manik

Manik smiles : well u r the one who said ...EVERYTHING IS FAIR IN LOVE AND WAR

And this is love ...friendship ...then how this is called cheating

She turned and manik holds her waist ...

Nandani : u knew what u r such a monster

Manik : I knew but I would love to be ur monster

She placed her hands around his neck and said

Nandani smiled:Flirt kar rahe ho

Manik : well voh toh pehle din se kar raha hu ...par notice tumne aaj kiya ha

Nandani looked at him in disbelief:Really

Manik smiled : achha ab bolo

Nandani : kya

Manik : Tum jaanti ho

Nandani : tum kya sunana chahte ho

Manik : jo tumne kuch der pehle kaha

Nandani smiled and said : well toh Mr. Malhotra for that u have to work hard

Manik : Nandani this is cheating yaar

Nandani : well tumne hi toh kaha everything is fair in love and war ... so now I will see how u make me convince to confess my feelings

Manik raised his eye brows and said : ohh like that

Nandani : yes ...acha ab chalo we are getting late maa papa wait kar rahe honge

Manik starts the bike ...nandani too sitted on his back ...but this time without saying anything she back hugged him ...manik smiled... both were happy ...but the reason of this happiness was love❤️

Manik pov :

I knew nandani ...u too love me ...now am sure ...now I will make sure nandani u will soon realized ur feelings ...and confessed ur feelings to me

Nandani pov

Today am sure manik ...no one can love me the way u love me ...but I want u to work hard ...I want u to win ur love ...I want to give that place manik ...who was always reserved for my dream men ...please Manik win that place ...

So guys how's it

I knew ...I knew

Bahot short tha

Par regular update main

Main itna hi manage

Kar sakti hu ...hope you

Guys understand

Hmmm

Well what you guys think

Itni jaldi ghar pahoch jaayenge

Naaa

U will see more fun