#4 MANAN SS~ YOU BECOME MY STORY Thread5-146 CHAPTER 23-148 - Page 23

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Posted: 9 years ago
Ajab lehar hai ye padosi! Hahahaha.. It ws damn funny :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
Itne din baad itne sare updates ek sath padi just because of stupid exams...manik lost his grandfather dats why he left nandu..pata hi tha mjhe there would be a big reason and manik is such sweet person how secreatively he organised goa trip...how much he love her care for love of his life...i love the part when he saved nandu from sliping and hugged her tightly without giving any damn to sourrnding...and ab to nandu ki mom b impress ho gai h bande se waise nobody can resist his charm...bas nandu maan jaaye and iam waiting for manan movement eagarly
loved the update
keep smiling and update soon plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesmme blossom update...!!!


Neighbour love..zz!!! I guessed it right ..!!!! Ab th Manik ne nndu Ki mom ko bi pata lia ..!! Luvved ot
Aur has that ssong .. Appropriate. One..!! Den ridde .. Sccooty ride...!!!
Jt Luv the way u pen down ..!!!
Bs ...keep on vng nw mmore manan scenes ..!

Thanks fr the pm...
And has wwen u udate next do pm.me plezee.z!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
too good just loved it.falling in love more with story.keep doing👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yaayyy...!! Manik is nandu's neibour...nw it wl b grt fun...
D sml.clashes btwn manan wl b amazng..
Manik ne to aate hi aapne sasu ma ko pata liya...hihi...he had acomplished d most difficult task...baki ka km ...matkab nandu ko patana to he wl do without by wry...
Waitng eagerly fr d finl confesn..

D song ws fab n lso d scooty ride...

I think u wk gv us a nw entry in d nxt chp...
Waitng eagerly fr it...I think discharactr wl mk manik jelous...n wl b a grt frnd of nandu...

Plz continue soon
hanin12 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
owsm update dear...
thanx 4 the pm...
mohitgpt60 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Clean bowled ... super awesome😊
superb song selection!!!!

how do u manage to amaze us everytime with ur update !!!!😊

m not getting words to praise u and ur writing
its damn amazing 👏

eagerly waiting for next update...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey kavya...!! SUperbbb...!!
I really love this Manik...:)
Totally fun !!
Ajab padosi hahaha it was awesome...!
& their lil cozy moments awww love it :)
AGAin vespa ride how beautiful...!!
Keep rockng dear...!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome






Fab









Mind blowing








Funny








Cute








Excellent









Wonderful






Rofl manik song, mukit n nandu conversation




Hawww. Ab kon manan stranger love story kabab may hadi bannayko aiya
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ohhh freak kavya...
like seriously...
U wrote so well...like really well...
After reading this part I really missed my neighbour in Indore...who was my sweet frnd before my papa got transferred...

A little secret abt that neghibour...after coming from there...he became my 1st crush...hehehh...

Coming to d udate...it was soo cutee...
Chup chup ke romance jab mom was pas ho is so best feeling...aur frr this is toh our manik...how can he ever miss any chance...

So d update was so so good ...



Yaaiieee...yupieee..now toh I will get pm n...??
Well that I always get...nd thanks for that

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