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millie

@millie17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Wow..2chptrs ek sath...bonus...thnk uuu...
Awsm updt..
Nandu's condtn made ne sad too...heart wencng ...
But nw evrythng is ok...
M sure manik wl dig harshad's grave nw...as he cares d most fr his F*Ly in d wrld n harshad hurt them...
Beta harshad...sambhal jao...b careful...ur end is vry near...hihi...

Seems lik all d men kno about harshad n d girls r blank about it..
Waitng to know about their reactn once they get to kno ...

Plz continue soon...

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aayuktasingh

@aayuktasingh

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Very emotional update...everyone 's state of mind was so nicely penned...this update was sumthng for which v can sabar ka fal meetha hota h ( typical hindi u see ) but seriously loved d update want to know harshad 's story cntinue soon :) :)

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Rasna

@princi_tia

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

very emotional update dear. It is indeed too heart wrenching part. I couldn't imagine nandu, fab5 and other members like that. Nandu was so shattered , only manij can heal her. They are truely made for each other . This update really depicted their pure love, trust and dependency on each other. You gave two updates at a time so bada waala thank you.
Okay so this all is done by harshad, now i am waiting to see what punishment he would get from manik after finding him.
All the very best for your exam and update when you will be free, till then we can and we will wait so don't worry .

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nami169

@nami169

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

amazing update.

starting was very cute and romantic

i thought they stay in a near by hotel and have fun.

but suddenly when i saw SHOT i was like what,

firstly i was confused afterwards it strike me that he was actually shot

anyway today's update was a big shock.

really emotional one.

waiting for knowing the reason for which manik was shot

update soon.

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shubhshash

@shubhshash

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Super emotional update.. but too good...really loved it...!!awesome...

Ohh god...really cried reading this update...

Loved the way u showed the depth of manan's love...superb... really felt bad wen nandu fainted...😭

But wat is this suspense?? How is mukti related to harshad? Ohh god...I reallly hate him😡

Eagerly waiting for your next update...really wanna knw tge mystery behind harshad..

Chalo bye tc...😊

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anaita arora

@fireflies10

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

amazing update and vo bhi double dhammkaa 2 chapters ek sath ab harshad toh gaya kaam se loved it continue soon

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pinky

@kimnana

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

nice update ...so much in love with each other

i really love his feeling when he sees her smile ...they go together like copy n paste ...

harshad u r dead for sure ...heart wrenching n emotional update

ty for pm

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aroy90

@aroy90

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Splendid writing

N congrats for this new thread

N honestly saying u truly deserve this

😊

Keep smiling

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sri_valli

@sri_valli

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

first if all congratulations for this new thread and a biiiggg thank U for 2 updates...very emotional update...u explained every characters state very well...harshad the vilian of the story came...now its time for some revenge...waiting to see manik in action...

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Danny92

@Danny92

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Congrats fr the new thread

Nice update

They all wer so happy after the wedding nd all their happiness few away in seconds

Manik was shot nd his life was in danger nd everyone is shattered by seeing him like that u hav written everyone's felngs so well cabir nd navyas talk was gud he shared his pain with her among all nandinis condition was most painful

So there is some twist in the story which is related to mukti nd all of thm nd harshad is the one who shot manik

Continue sooonnn