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CHAPTER 51

doctor=mr malhotra your son is improving very fast thats a good sign. but ha, ghaw abhibhi fresh ha so he needs bed rest for atleast one month.

ny=dont worry doctor, yeh bed rest me rahega iski guarantee main leti hu and this time manik ke dad bhi usse office nahi jane denge

m=mom now whats this?? main gharpe kya karunga i mean, dad bolo na ap kuch

raj=sorry son, this time um with ur mom

doctor=yes manik, tumhe complete bed rest pe rehna ha or else pain barsakta ha. maine nandini ko already samjha diya ha about your medicines and dressing things

m=doctor mujhe apni koi tension nahi ha, mere lie tension karneko yahapar sab ha. infact meri wife... woh toa khud hi doctor ha im sure apko takleef nahi hogi

nandini entered with cabir holding manik's discharge papers

n=dad... sare accounts clear ha. doctor hum manik ko ghar leke jasakte ha na??

doctor=nandini mane pehle bhi kaha ha ke manik abhi weak ha, uska operation kal hi hua ha and he needs rest. usse ek do din yaha rehne do par.

n=doctor i know, as a doctor yeh apke rules ke khilaf ha.. i know patient ko surgery ke bad atleast do din hospital me rehna parta ha but i assure you doctor manik ka khayal gharpar ekdam hospital jaise rakhenge. doctor yeh ap bhi jante ha ke ghar pe jo aram aur sukoon milta ha, jo shanti woh manik ko yaha nahi milegi. he is being restless thats why but i promise i'll keep on updating u

ny=doctor... dont worry meri bahu jo kehti ha woh karti ha

doctor=theek ha as u say nandini, and manik best of luck take care

m=thank u doctor


after the doctor left

ny=manik um warning u agar isbar tumne zidd ki ke tumhe office jana ha

m=mom mom relax... apko kya lagta ha mujhe nahi pata ke if main zidd karunga toa ap thorina mujhe jane doge

mu=exactly bhai dont u dare...

m=but dad... apke upar kamka pressure bar jayega nah??

raj=manik, still you're thinking about work?? beta pehle tum theek hojaw. and dont worry about work, cabir ha na...

c=yes when cabira is here no fear

n=dad...ek bat kahu??

raj=kya hua nandu??

n=dad... um really scared manik ke sath jo hua.. i mean dad.. agar kuch phirse

she began to stammer while completing the sentence. raj looked at manik and then at nandini

raj=nandu... tu mera strong baccha ha na?? dont worry kuch nahi hoga and hum sab ha na manik ke sath, tu ha.. nothing will happen to him

ny=nandini hum sab daar gaye ha manik ko esi halat me dekke but beta thank ur ayippa manik ab theek ha, and see woh ghar jaraha ha

nandini looked at manik with teary eyes who was smiling at her

n=hmmm

c=accha yeh sab gloomy atmosphere ko maro goli.. nandu behan come on,, mujhe bhook lagi ha mere sath canteen chal

cabir drags nandini with him

mu=nandini bohot daar gayi ha is accident ki wajase

m=i know, bohot zyada.. she will need a lot of time to overcome from this shock

raj=dont worry manik, she'll be okay.

ny=uski sabse bari strength tum ho manik, so when she'll see u becoming fine, woh khud apne ap theek hojayegi.


...

m=home sweet home

manik said entering Malhotra mansion with help of cabir and druv who were supporting him to walk. nandini and others beside him.

ny=manik tum upar abhi room me jaw aur rest karo. and yes once again no work

m=yes mom... ab nandini

n=ha??

he gestured her to come upstairs with him

mu=nandini tum bhai ke sath jaw, main aur alya we'll help mom

n=theek ha

nandini helped manik walk up to their room and made him sit on the bed. she was about to bring water for him but he holded her hand and made her sit on his lap

n=manik.. tumhe dard hoga...

she was about to get up but he made his grip tighter around her waist

m=bilkul nahi.. tum itni halki phulki ho tumhe godh me lekar mujhe kabhi dard nahi hota

she gave him a weak smile

m=sad ho abhibi???

nandini hugged him tightly and he hugged her back

n=manik..main bohot zyada dar gayi hu.. um really worried kahi kuch

m=ssshh jaan, calm down. main hoo na tumhare sath. why are you worrying? kuch nahi hoga and dad has assured u na? dont u trust dad??

n=i trust both of u manik but... when it comes to u i cant help myself

m=meri taraf dekho

he cupped her face and wiped the tears from her cheeks

m=main tumhare sath hoo na ? so bass yeh rona dhona band kardo.. tum mujhe theek dekhna chahti ho na???

n=hmm

m=so jaisa main kahunga karogi???

n=karungi

m=thats like my girl. main normal tabhi hopaunga jab meri jaan mere samne normal rahegi.. sabkuch pehle jaisa normal hojayega thats how i'll recover soon. help karogi nah meri???

she kissed his temple

n=kabhi nah kaha ha???

"knock" "knock"

n=main dekhti hu

nandini gets up from his lap and opens the door

n=cabir tum

c=ha woh nandini aunty tumhe neeche bula rahiha. tum jaw, main manik ke pass hu yaha

n=theek ha


after nandini goes out

m=kya hua cabir??

c=police commissioner uncle se abhi baat ki ha uncle ne

m=any news??

c=he is underground manik woh itna bara risk leneke baad ese hi khula nahi ghumega

m=damn itt !! i knew it... mane kaha tha yeh police ab kuch nahi kar payegi woh itna bara bewakuf nahi ha cabir ke mujhpar attack karneke baad woh esehi ghumega

c=but manik what can we do now?? on the other hand aunty mukti sab barbar puch raheha ke kisne kia yeh sab aur kyu?? we cant tell them anything.. nandini wasehi dari hui ha..baki sab bhi

m=nandini ko mane samjhaya ha... woh abhi kuch aur nahi puchegi

c=aur mukti??? usse kya kahega..

m=nahiii.. mukti ke samne yeh sab abhi nahi ana chahiye..uski shadi hui ha abhi abhi

c=dude i know, but main sirf yeh kehraha hu ke jab usse pata chalega ke yeh sab harshad ne..

SMASH

cabir and manik turn toward the door and see the broken glass of juice lying on the floor and mukti standing. manik got up from the bed and exchanged looks with cabir. she was shocked ..

m=mukti... meri bat sun

she turned around and ran away from there

m=shiittt!! mukti..

manik too runs behind her. everybody who were downstairs suddenly sees mukti was coming down wiping her tears and manik calling out her name and following her. mukti runs to her room and locks it

n=manik..hua kya ha??? mukti ro kyu rahi thi...

m=badme bata ta hu..mukti..open the door behna please

raj=what happened???

c=uncle i'll tell.. she heard me and manik talk about..

raj=what????

m=mukti please behnaa..

they hear a sound of breaking something from inside

m=shiit... i just hope she doesnt do anything. mujhe darwaja torna parega

ny=manik..tum nahi toroge... i'll bring the keys

m=mom dont have time

c=i'll break the door tu hath jaa manik samnese

everyone clear the way and cabir breaks the door kicking it hard. as soon as he kicks on the door manik rushes inside and shouts at mukti who was about to cut her veins. he snatches the knife from her hands and slaps her hard. rest of them standing behind were shocked specially nandini who had never seen manik being so much angry that he slapped his own little sister

...

there was complete silence in the living room. mukti was sitting on the couch between alya and nandini who were slowly rubbing her back. manik was pacing from here to there... cabir and abhi trying to talk to him but he was in no mood to hear anything

raj=manik calm down beta..

m=dad... see, this is why i didnt want to say anything to her, yeh samajhti hi nahi ha kuch

mu=ha main nahi samajhti.. main nahi samajhna chahti esa kuch jo apse related ho

mukti stood up bursting out

mu=bhai... when it comes to u ap acchese jante ho i cant keep myself calm and quiet. apne humesha mujhe har ek problem choti se choti kharoch se bachaya ha and today.. apki jaan khatreme ha, u were in the hospital, ap maut ke mu se bachke aye ho.. itna sara risk all because of me bhai..

m=ek aur word nikala mu se... toa sach kehraha hu baat nahi karunga tujhse, ab tu mujhe yeh sab kahegi?? itni bari hogayi ha tu??? bhai hu tera. tu humesha thi aur humesha meri choti behen rahegi, my baby... meri jaan and i'll always protect u cause i love u... never ever try to harm urself... aj agar tune khudko ek kharoch bhi lagaya hota then mujhe kaisa lagta yeh tune kabhi socha???

mukti bursted into tears and hugged manik tightly

mu=um sorry bhai..um sorry for hurting u... um sorry

m=ssshhh calm down kuch nahi hua.. sab theek ha samjhi?? stop blaming urself

...

manik and nandini came back to their room from mukti's room. once mukti drifted into sleep manik told abhi to stay back today at malhotra mansion and be with mukti. abhi agreed happily and Manan came back to there room. manik sat on the bed resting his head on the head board and nandini bought his medicines

n=manik medicine khalo

he took the medicine and again rested his head on the headboard. nandini climbed on the bed beside him and holded his hand. she didnt say anything and rested her head on his shoulder. both remained like this for sometime

m=kuch puchogi nahi??

manik broke the silence and looked at her. she smiled and kissed his cheek

n=nahi, cause i know ke jab time ayega tum khud mujhse share karoge

manik smiled how well she understands him. he kissed her temple

n=manik maine tumhe itna gusseme kabhi nahi dekha... aur aj tumne mukti ko thappar mara???

m=jab baat mukti ki ati ha mera mujhpe control nahi rehta nandini, she has always been my weakness . i cant tolerate her being sad or crying, aur aj apni akhoke samne usse woh knife ko hathme... i just couldnt control myself. !!! usne ek bar bhi nahi socha ke usse kuch hojata toa main kaise rehta?? mom, dad aur abhi???

n=manik calm down... tum itna stress matlo. sab theek hojayega, mukti is fine aur tumhare sath hi ha

m=yeh sab sirf ek insaan ki wajase horaha ha and i'll make sure ke he gets punished. harshad ko ab mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta..koi nahi

n=harshad????

...

Flashback

"it all started when we were in college. Harshad saxena, the guy jisse pehli nazar me hi mujhe accha nahi laga tha. arrogant, rude and self obsessed these are the things which describe him. woh humesha Fab5 ko neecha dikhata tha, used to underestimate and make fun of us. koi usse pasand nahi karta tha but there was something which made me suspicious about him even more aur woh tha uska mukti ke sath accha behave karna. hum dono ki kabhi nahi banti thi yeh har koi college me janta tha, we often used to get involve in fights. but mukti ke sath woh humesha acchese behave karta tha, even mukti used to be nice with him. as because it was related to mukti main kabhi kuch nahi karta tha cause i wanted to protect my sister. dheere dheere mukti began to fall for him and that is when i realized i need to expose him infront of her. jo mere maan ka vehem hain woh mujhe sabke samne lana ha with proofs. maine mukti ko warn kiya tha but as because mere pass proof nahi tha she was confused. ek raat he took her out on a date, usne mukti ki drink me kuch mila diya tha and she was not in her sense. but little did he knew ke mukti ne woh drink peeya hi nahi tha and acted of being faint. mauka dektehi woh hum sabko update deti gayi and we reached his farm house. i would have killed that b*****d ...he tried to rape her, uske nashe honeke fayda uthana chahta tha. reason u know what?? ekbar college me sabke samne i slapped him. uska revenge woh meri behen se lena chahta tha, thats why he had mixed drugs in her drink so that badme woh yeh proof karsake that she was not in her sense, jo hua ek mistake thi. thank god hum sahi time pe agaye the.. mukti ne usse sabke samne thappar mara.

this was not only the reason of him being our enemy. harshad ke papa and dad were rivals. dad humesha unse business me age rehte the, mr saxena wanted to defeat dad but unfortunately dad ko pata chal gaya tha unke illegal works ke bareme and so dad ne police ki help se unke sare companies band karwa die the. thats why saxena's wanted to take revenge from us. farm house par jo hua main usse wahi jaan se marna chahta tha but cabir and baki sabne rokh liya. i didnt want mom dad to get know about this so usse chor diya tha.. wahi meri galti thi nandini. kuch din ke bad he kidnapped mukti and uski demand this Main . main waha gaya jahan usne mujhe bulaya tha. woh mukti se zabardasti shadi karne wala tha, usse gun spot me rakkar he wanted me to sign the property papers ke uske naam mane kardiya ha. i agreed to sign them just cause he had his gun point on mukti. but sign karneke bad uska nishana meri taraf agaya. we had a big fight. mr saxena bhi the waha par. isse pehle ke woh mujhe shoot karte mukti samne agayi and she got hurt in her arm. at that time police came and mr saxena encounter me maar gaye. harshad was taken to the jail. jail me janese pehle he said ke woh wapas ayega, he will take mukti with him and mane bhi kaha ke jabtak main zinda hu, mukti ko woh chu nahi sakta "

m=since then mukti was always scared about him but i assured her ke harshad me jail ha. uske baad main london chala gaya. kuch din pehle dad ne bola ke harshad jail se chut gaya ha.. kaise woh nahi pata but he's out. thats why dad asked me to be careful cause we knew woh mujhpar attack zarur karega to take revenge.. and wasa hi hua. mukti aur baki sabse yeh baat isiliye chupaya gaya tha cause uski shadi thi, i didnt want her to be sad and scared.

manik finished the story and nandini hugged him tightly.

m=kya hua jaan

n=manik... mujhe daar lagraha ha, kahi harshad dubara tumhe..

m=ssshh kuch nahi hoga esa dont worry

n=manik main dubara uss phase se nahi guzarna chahti. i cant say mujhe kaisa feel horaha tha jab mane tumhe waha..ese hospital me... manik main

m=ssshh mane kaha na esa kuch nahi hoga and jaan u cant be like this. tum toa meri strength ho na?? i need ur support now most . tumhe toa mujhe aur mukti ko sambhalna ha. and trust me kuch bura nahi hoga. main kuch galat nahi hone dunga.

she knew he would fulfil his promise like always. she wanted herself to crash into his embrace but being the caring wife she knew how much he needed rest. so without stressing him further she made him lie down on the bed. but manik being manik cant sleep without hugging her close to himself. though she tried to protest but eventually she too knew without being in his arms she cant sleep and so keeping in mind not to hurt him more or put hands on his chest she snuggled close to him and after a heavy tiring day both the love birds drifted into sleep.

...

The next morning, nandini opened her eyes with a smile on her face. waking up in manik's arms is the best thing for her to begin her day with. she looked up and saw her hubby sleeping peacefully. she pecked his chin and whispered good morning in his ear. he moved a bit which indicated that he was in deep sleep but still he knew it was her. she unwrapped herself from his grip carefully so that he doesnt feel disturbed and goes inside the washroom for freshen up.

nandini came out of the room closing the door behind carefully and came downstairs. she was going inside the kitchen when she saw the back door of the house leading towards the poolside was open.

n=itni subhah pool side me kaun ha???

nandini went to the pool side and saw mukti sitting near the pool, legs dipped inside the water. looking around finding nobody nandini thought mukti needed to talk with someone.

n=good morning

nandini sat beside mukti giving her a cup of coffee. mukti smiled and took the cup

mu=good morning

n=itni subhah subhah???

mu=ha woh bass esehi

n=mukti tumhe pata ha na ke tum mujhse kuch bhi share kar sakti ho?? kuch bhi means anything

mukti smiled and nodded

n=tumhe pata ha mukti why i love manik so much? cause uske dilme sabkeliye itna saara pyar ha.. woh sabki itni care karta ha unconditionally loves all of us, shadi se pehle mane jab usse kaha tha ke mujhe time chahiye to understand this relationship, mujhe time chahiye hum donokeliye usne ek bar bhi mujhe mana nahi kiya, he didnt opposed me rather he appreciated me, usne mujhe support kiya and tabtak kiya jabtak main ready nahi thi to give myself to him completely. mujhme itni sari kamiyan hain mukti phirbhi i feel myself complete more than anything uska reason sirf ek nam ha, Manik

mu=thats why hum sab bhai se itna pyar karte ha and im afraid ke meri wajase unhe..

n=kuch nahi hoga, trust me mukti sab accha hoga

mu=nandu tum harshad ko nahi jantii.. woh.. woh kuch bhi karsakta hain

n=main harshad ko nahi janti but main tumhe janti hu, main manik ko janti hu aur itna mujhe pata ha ke manik tumhe aur hum sabko kuch nahi hone dega

mu=aur bhai?? bhai ke sath jo hua??? woh bhul jaye hum?? tum bhul gayi???

the ever strong nandini became silent. yes mukti striked at the right place. nandini was scared for manik, she was afraid that what if something again happens to him but no, she promised manik she wont be weak, she will support him and mukti

mu=nandu, who knows better than you ke bhai ko hospital me dekke kaisa feel hua, main wasa aur kuch nahi chahti aur isiliye

n=isiliye tum kal khudko marne chali thi??? yeh nahi socha ke manik pe kya beetegi?? agar tumhe kuch hojata toa kya manik khudko maaf kar pata?? mukti manik esa insaan ha jo dusrokeliye jeeta ha, humare lie aur hum manik keliye. we all are connected to each other. problems ko handle karneka tareeka unse door bhagna nahi hota ha mukti, unhe face karna parta ha. mujhe iss gharme aye hue kuch din hue ha but itna mane jaana aur samjha ha ke is gharme sabke dilme ek dusrekeliye unconditional love and care ha . thats why um saying, sab theek hoga. tum tension mat lo aur ghabraw mat.

mukti hugged nandini. she needed this hug and yes she was scared of everything

mu=thanks nandini...

n=your welcome always.

...

nandini entered the room and saw manik was still sleeping. she smiled and opened the curtains allowing the sun rays fall on his face. manik immediately covered his face with the blanket

m=jaan sone dona please

n=manik tumhari medicine ka time hogaya ha

m=ha toa badme khalunga

he said in a sleepy tone.

n=he bhagwan, manik kab bare hoge tum?? medicine ko lekar itni sari laparwahi

m=jaan please now dont become the kharoos dr nandini murthy

n=kharoos aur main???

m=hmmm

nandini stood infront of him putting her hands on her waist waiting for him to look at her but he was busy sleeping. she removed the blanket from his face and manik turned around to the other side

n=manik tum ese nahi uthne wale na? theek ha ruko main mom ko bulake lati hu

nandini turned to go but before she could even take a step forward she found herself beneath him, his muscular body hovering over her, his sparkling eyes mischievously staring at her and she cant help herself smiling at him

m=kya bol rahithi?? mom ko bulana ha???

saying he started to tickle her and the room was filled with her laughter.

n=manik please... stop i cant breathe

m=i missed this smile of yours

n=me too.

saying she fused her lips with his for a passionate good morning kiss. his hands travelled from her shoulder to her palms and pinned her hands on the soft mastress. the craving and longing for eachother after that dreadful incident made both of them even more impatient to be with each other. but nandini being the over caring wifey, she knew exactly where would they land up and knowing herself that much she wont be able to stop both herself and him..she broke the kiss with a lot of difficulties. manik was a bit surprised with the sudden back out of hers but he why did she do that

n=um sorry manik, but tumhari health mere lie is waqt sabse zyada important ha and we both know if one of us doesnt stop right now where we will end up which is really not okay for your health

manik smiled and pecked her lips

m=i know jaan, jab tum sick thi hospital me i also felt myself very much helpless but had to control just cause you were sick. so now looks like mujhe kiss se hi kaam chalana parega

nandini smiled and kissed his cheeks

n=acchi baat ha,now i can blackmail you for having medicines

m=blackmail??? kis baat ko lekar??

n=yehi.. jaldise theek hojaw warna... you'll have to wait for a long time

he raised his eyebrow watching her playing with him. he was about to say something when manik's phone rang. he moved aside letting nandini get up and took the call

m=ha cabir bol

c=sorry yaar, subhah subhah phone kiya.

m=are its okay.. chal bata kya hal chal ha??

c=baat yeh ha ke manik maine uss lawyer ke bareme pata kiya ha jisne harshad ki bail karwahi ha. saxena's ka official jaan pehchan ka lawyer ha but thing is that ke seems to be he is also underground.

m=i knew that, harshad is bar itni asanise koi clue nahi chorega jisse hum ustak pouch sake.. tu tension matle, i'll talk to dad and you also come over here for breakfast, alya druv ko bhi bata de

c=see ya

m=bye

n=kya hua???

m=kuch nahi, no news of harshad

nandini gave him the medicine and helped him to stand up

n=manik, mukti bohot zyada tensed hain

m=kya hua usse??

he was about to go to her nandini stopped

n=tum abhi mat jaw, maine baat ki ha usse, thora time lagega. its like you know ke jaise tum uske lie care karte ho she is also very much attached to you thats why

m=janta hu isiliye pehle usse yeh sab batana nahi chahta tha but

n=koi bat nahi, tum fresh hojaw, phir niche chalte hain breakfast karne

...

After breakfast session everyone settled down in the hall. mukti was sitting between abhi and manik and both of them clutching her hands

raj=manik, beta kya socha ha??

m=dad... ek clue just one clue i find about harshad thats it..

c=but problem yehi hain uncle ke is bar it seems like woh full proof plan ke sath aya tha.

dr=kuch bhi trace karna mushkil horaha ha.

mu=and we cant forget ke bhai ki jaan abhibi danger zone me ha

a=and even mukti is in the target.. humhe jaldse jald kuch karna parega

nandini who was sitting quiet for a long time, struck something in her mind

n=ek tareeka hain jisse harshad samne ayega

everyone's eyes were fixed on nandini now

m=what???

n=mukti !!!!
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