#THREAD 1 Humsafar.. Editing started... note on pg 144

First Previous

Page

102

Next Last

Frequent Posters

ankita_t

@ankita_t

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: sabi_anamika
wow awesome
bichara mere mNik ko kya kya sehns parra rah hey nNdu k khatir..hehege but really interesting punishment
eaglry waiting for next chapi
jaldi jaldi aana plz
take care

Hi,

Well even i feel sorry for him 😆 next chapter will be soon...Sorry for the delay, was travelling a lot.

Quote

ankita_t

@ankita_t

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: Snehasn
Ankita this was just wow...i loved each and every sentence... Specially manik's good night and morning with kissing and hugging her pics.. We don't need the persons around us always to shower our love.. It's about feeling them around us... And her morning threats... Its awesome...gosh!! Devika she's such a chipkoo...bappa hii bachaaye manik ko... hehehe nandu's last part lines manik KO pagal banaake rakh diye hai... Baby... Uff... I'm getting very naughty thoughts...continue soon.. Take care stay blessed

Hi,

Well you are absolutely right, you really don't need that person in front of you to shower your love...hhmmm Devika isn't a chipkoo, its Nandini's mind behind her actions😉 Bappa will definitely rescue his child Manik, though he can't help much, but will turn the situations for sure😉...

Hahahaa well the last line is a bit of mystery for Manik...he won't get to know it soo easily...😆

Thank you for the appreciation, it's very kind of you...

Next chapter will be up soon.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

ankita_t

@ankita_t

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: sharon.babu
awesome update...

loved it so much...
the new avatar of nandu is amazing...
nandu is taking the initiative to seduce manik...and be sensuous...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

Hi,

Thanks a lot for the comment and kind words...

The new avtar is not only because now Nandini wants to live, but also is because of Manik's effect on her, which she is unkown off...

Well, she seduced Manik or not we'll come to know in the next chapter😉

Quote

ankita_t

@ankita_t

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: dhillon90
Awesome
Amazing
Superb
Fantastic update
Manik baby hahahaha nandu kya punishmnt di hai...abhi toh bss shuruwat huyi hai...lonavala tkk manik tera kya hoga...lovd it...continue soon

Hi,

Thanks a lot...😊

Well, yes its just the start of their journey, but let's see how Bappa will play his cards too to save Manik as much as he can 😆...

Quote

ankita_t

@ankita_t

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic
Wow amazing...
Nandu being bold...manik shocked Nandu rocked...
I want ki Nandu at least should give manik importance...
I don't like Nandu and rayan being close...u know na being a Manan die hard fan..
And ha make Nandu jst a little jealous...
And ha jst some suggestions nothing else..
Luved it...
Thnx for pm..
Update soon...

Hi,

Thanks a lot 😊

Well I know for sure Nandini can't be jealous of Devika, but yes you never know what the journey has ahead for Manik and Nandini😉 Aryan is just friends with Nandini...Suggestion was good, infact i have something in my mind after the journey track regarding your suggestion, so wait and watch 😊

Quote

ankita_t

@ankita_t

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: Hudah18
Really u r a great writer read all chapters in a go its just fabulous
And its awesome keep writing

Hi,

I am glad you liked it, hopefully i can live upto your expectations ahead too 😊

Quote

ankita_t

@ankita_t

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: megha94kumari
haha... nyc punishment .. BT abb iss punishment ka tym nandu ko milna chahiye... lyk use jealous feel kra kr... v want to see jealous nandu

Hi,

Thanks a lot...Well, Nandini has just started to open up...hhmmm she can't be jealous of Devika coz Devika is one who can't use her brains...😆 But, yes the journey track will surely have some sparks, so keep reading, hope you'll like it😊