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maddy98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1051

😆 manik ghar bhi aagaya 😛😛

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mannatchahal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1052

Nice...

Continue soon...

Manik at her home????

Will be fun to see her parents reaction...

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mananneetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1053

it was really an awesome wala update nd with as always a cliff hanger..!! bt this time i think i know who was that on the door..!
non other than our own "MR MANIK STRANGER MALHOTRA" 😉 i think he is her neighbour cant wait fr nxt update!!!
bt coming back to the update..i was really happy reading this!!!
that DDLJ moment luved it ... 😃
If i m river u r PANI i will dry without u!! if u r water then i m thirsty one i will die without u!!!
wah!! kitna acha likha aapne..really impressed..!!
it was so funny when nandu was cursing manik when he scolded her!!!
nd then that last part when manik flew a flying kiss to her!!
now cant wait fr nxt part..plz update soon.. 😳

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millie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1054

Asm.updt...
Manik's definatn of diff things lws surprises me...lv them...
At d end whn manik said" -Our Journey has just begin My Love..." it felt amazng..lvd it...
I think manik is gonna stay at nandu's neighbour's house...if it hpns it wl b a lot of fun...

Waitng eagerly fr d nxt prt...
Plz updt soon...

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windowseatbug

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1055

That was really fab.

Manik's concern for her when he somehow managed to get her back in the train.

I loved it.

Nandini's POV was so cute.

I liked the way he has made her realise his as well as her feelings throughout the trip.

Her all those behavioral changes towards him, I really liked it.

Hahah. And again a cliffhanger.

But I think its Manik.

Either he will stay at her place or somewhere in neighborhood.

Let's see.

Waiting waiting.

Thankyou for the update & continue soon 😊

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payal94

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1056

Awesome update

Manik hoga 😛

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khevnashukla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1057

Awesome update...angry manik..aww...u knw i personal love angry manik i feel he looks hot in angry...btw i jst had a request that get maddy in this and make manik jealous...it would be fun to read jealous manik

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