#3 MANAN SS ~ YOU BECOME MY STORY Chap21-140 New thread Hyper link-157 - Page 104

so beautiful.finally they came Mumbai.cool journey is begin.so excited.I think that will be manik at the door.thanks for nice update.waiting for next part.please update soon.

Heyyy wonderful update dear the journey was awesomeee...

Update was awesome pretty. U kill us by keeping suspense at the end. Maniks way of explanation for love was superb n his songs Loved it to the core. Plz update next part soon, waiting for the journey...

i knw i knw der will be manik only... another shock for nandini... hehe...
cmng to d update... it was JHKAAS...
keep updatng...
keep smilng... 😛

awesome update dear...

It was awesome and about the door bell it was manik hai na

Yeah dii it ws long bt i toh loved it sooo much u kno!!! Di u write soo cutely dat i feel lyk yaar hw i wish i cud write so cutely...but heck! I suck at writing!! Acha leave it..i kno k my di writes beautifully by which m inspired!! So much of love n hugs to u dii!!
Acha comin to d update...
Huff...phirse manik ws soo furious n worried...it ws justified n yeah nandi is a stubborn head!! I loved manik's sarcasm lots di!! Awwiieee nandu annoyed by manik's behaviour...n that really annoys wen ur bestie or loved ones behave lyk dat!! Aah..that's too annoying!! U kno di i had written all over 100 pages book sorries to my bestie...ziddi kahiki!! Nandu's thoughts on manik were vry well written!! It ws soo adorable!! Manik strange malhotra..Mr.Strange Malhotra...di frm whr do u get these cute names!!??? Nandu looked at manik wen another train passed n that ws a pure love scene!! The game ws awesome!! Muku-navya were impressed too!! Great!! Truly great!! Love...wow man!! Soo beautiful explaination of love!! Di sachi batao frm whr do get these pure lines?? Im so so so in love wid it!! Aww i so love those choti choti gestures u add which look so pure n beautiful!! U r amazing di!! Yep home is d best place!! Neighbour aunty! Ussi time i started smiling so widely k if i wud smile more my lips wud crack!! N that shock has to Mr.Stranger i.e Mr.Kidnapper i.e Mr.Manik Malhotra!!
Update soonish di! Love u..

shock shock shock what shock..??

Mr.Stranger Malhotra is reallly awsum yrrr . Da way he was scolding nandani i was lyk Awww da way he defines love Wow man impresive nd song prt was really cute. i really luv da choice of ur songs it totallly suits da situation . chalo lets see nandani manao mission kha tk pahuchta haii

Angry manik is always a treat to watch.. hehe