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Mawara 😭
Pls update naa yr it's too late
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Chapter 6 A


Nandini's POV


It was a happy Sunday. Last night Manik Sir himself dropped me at orphanage. I was feeling much better now. I woke up and after getting fresh I walked out of my room.


"Good Morning Maa...!"I shouted happily in Maa ear.


"Aiyooo..! Nandu..! Thora tou ahista bola kar..!"Maa said angrily.


"Maa..! Ap bhi Manik Sir wali batain kar rahy ho..!"I said sadly making a pout and Maa smiled.


"Waisy Nandu..!"Maa said teasingly and I look at her. "Main dekh rahi hoon aj kal har baat main tu Manik Sir Manik Sir kar rahi hai..! Chal kya raha hai hmm?"Maa asked looking at my face and I blushed.


"Kuch nahi Maa..!"I stammered.


"Chal..! Theek hai na bta..! Par main tery liye bohat khush hoon..! Manik mjy tou bohat acha laga tha..!"Maa knew everything aww..! I just hugged Maa tightly.


"Thank you Maa..!"I whispered.


"Bus tu khush reh..! Sachi Nandu tery face pay ya glow..! Myny aj tak nahi dekha..!"Maa's words were heaven for me. I kept hugging me for long time and then suddenly I realized that it was breakfast time and Manik Sir will surely miss his breakfast.


"Maa..! Main Manik Sir kay ghar ja rahi hoon..! Kuch kaam hai..!"I instantly said and without having my breakfast I rushed to my room. Suddenly I remembered that I don't have money. I felt a pat on my shoulder and saw Maa standing.


"Ya kuch paisy rakh lay ziada nahi hain..! Par abhi itny he hain mery pass..!"Maa said politely and I again hugged Maa.


"Thank you for everything Maa..! Ap na tension ni lo meri salary aa jye ge na tou tension he khtm ho jye ge..!"I said winking at her and she smiled. Then I safely placed the hundred rupee note in my pink butterfly wallet. "Ok now I am going..! Good day maa..!"I shouted and run outside.


It was 10 am when I entered Malhotra Mansion. There was no butler there as they had an off at Sunday. I happily walked to Manik Sir's room and knocked. To my dismay there was no response I opened the door and sneaked in. The sight was so breathtaking..! Manik Sir was sleeping on his stomach only in his tracks and the black cover of the bed was not at helping to cover his dashing eagle star tattoo. His hair were lightly fluttering due to cold soothing air of morning. I put my bag on the chair and walked towards bed. I was hesitant but then finally I got the courage to sat beside him...! The usual frown of his forehead was not there..! His face was peaceful I gently ruffled his hair and smiled..! One thing was clear he too was alone..! We both needed each other..! The difference was the only thing that I had told him everything about myself but he..! Hmm I didn't knew the story of his side..! I have to make sure that he express himself to me..! He had so much pain in his heart although my condition was no different but I want to release his stress I want him to be stress free..! I want him to smile every second..! I was feeling so sad for him at least I have Maa but he tou have no one. I slowly leaned forward and kissed his hair. But suddenly within a blink of eye I was in his arms and I gasped loudly on his sudden move. He was awake..!!!


"Ap jag rahy ho?"I merely whispered as I was almost buried in his bare chest while his eyes were still closed. He lazily opened his eyes and gave me a lopsided smile. He gently caressed my cheek with his thumb looking lazily in my eyes while my breath was going all wild although we had kissed but his proximity was too much to handle.


"Haan..! Jag raha hoon..! But I want to sleep more..! Tum bhi so jaoa..!"He said smilingly and pulling me closer he adjusted the blanket over us and closed his eyes again. I was so amazed on his "haq jatana" session but at the same time was happy but I frowned as it was morning now..!


"Ni..! Ap nay time dekha hai..! It's 10 am..! Kitna soyen gay..! Get up na..!"I said angrily and shook his shoulder but no effect on him..! "Sir please na..!"I said sadly and made a sad pout.


"Shhh...! Sleep..!"He said lazily and palmed my eyes.


"Me ko ni sona na..!"I said angrily shoving his hand away and bit my lower lip in frustration because Manik Sir was really in no mood to get up. Suddenly an evil idea came in my mind and I smiled. "Ok..! Don't wake up..! Mjy kya..! But ap ko bta doon kay myny breakfast nahi kiya hai..! Because I wanted to do it with you but ab ap he ni uth rahy ho tou ok..! Kya ho ga ziada say ziada mera sugar level low ho jye ga na..! Its ok..! Ap ko kya farak parta hai..!"I said with a faking sadness,shrugging my shoulders and as expected he opened his eyes with a jerk.

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Manik POV


She said that she hadn't ate her breakfast I opened my eyes and look at her in disbelief.


"Are you out of your mind..!"I shouted and she smiled naughtily.


"Yup..! I am..! Now if you want me to eat something then you have to wake up and eat with me..!"She said winking her eye and I frowned.


"You stubborn girl..!"I said angrily pulling her cheek and she laughed. I too smiled and pull her in my embrace. She hide her face in crook of my neck and hugged me back.


"Sir..!"She whispered in my ear this time in a serious tone.


"Ji?"I asked patting her hair.


"Ap kabhi mjy choor kar tou nahi jaoa gay na?"She said sadly and I sighed the little poor soul was in pain.


"You trust me?"I too questioned and I felt the grip of her tiny fragile arms around my waist became more tight.


"I do..! You are the only person in this whole world to whom I trust more than myself..!"I heard her pure confession and smiled.


"Then..! There is no need of thinking all this ok?"I said breaking the hug and caressing her hair. She smiled and kissed my cheek.


"Thankyou..!"She said smilingly and I too smiled.


"No need..! Acha main fresh ho kar ata hoon phr hum breakfast karen gay..! Don't you dare to step down of the bed..!"I said showing her my finger and she made a sad pout.


"Breakfast kon banye ga?"She said raising her eyebrow and I opened my cupboard to get my towel and dress.


"We will eat in some hotel..! Tum koi kaam nahi karo ge..! You are already weak..!"I said turning towards her.


"I am ok..! Kuch nahi hua mjhy..!"She said angrily.


"Nandini..! I am the boss here..! You have to follow my orders..! Understood?"I said in my all time bossy attitude and she grit her teeth in anger.


"You are so kharoos..! I hate you..!"she shouted angrily and crossed her arms on her chest.


"I know..! Acha haan mjhy yaad aya I have got something for you..!"I said casually and then I pulled a heart shape chocolate box from my cupboard.




I walked back towards the bed. Nandini angrily turned her face and I sat beside her.


"Ooo meri tantrum queen..! Look at me na baba..!"I said lovingly and she look at me. "I am doing all this for your health..! Ab ya narazgi khtm bhi karo aur eat this chocolate..!"I said pulling her chubby cheek and her eyes twinkled on hearing the word chocolates.


"Wow..!"She shouted excitedly and pulled the chocolate box from my hands. She quickly opened the box and her excitement was something which was making me go all insane. I gently pecked her forehead and she smiled at me.


"Never get older Nandini..!"I whispered in her ear and she kissed my cheek. I had asked her to never get older because her cuteness was something which was making me fall for her again and again. "Acha ab tum ya chocolates khaoa me ata hoon ok..!"I said to her cheerfully and she nodded. Then giving her a last glance I went inside the bathroom. I took a quick shower and came out of room. I saw her licking the chocolate pieces and she was too much engrossed in watching some kind of cartoon movie on my 32 inches LED. She didn't look at me I smiled on her never ending cuteness and walked towards the dressing table to gel my hair.

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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Chapter 6 B


"Sir..!"She called me stretching the word "SIR" as usual.


"Hmm..!"I said turning towards her.


"Ya movie dekhye na..! This garden..! So pretty everything is..!"She said excitedly pointing her finger towards the screen. I smilingly sat beside her and look at the screen. The garden was exceptionally beautiful. It was some kind of fantasy princess movie in which the prince and princess were walking in a garden hand in hand.


"It is beautiful..!"I said nodding my head but the spark and cuteness in Nandini's eyes was something which I wanted to see forever. A plan hit my mind and I smiled. "Acha tum yahan betho main aik call kar kay ata hoon..!"I said to her and walked to the balcony to execute my plan. Then I walked back to the room and she was done with the half box of chocolates.


"Nandini..! Tum pagal ho..! Myny tmhy islye chocolates nahi diya thy kay tum aik sath he sary kha lo..! Itne chocolates aik sath nahi khaty health pay effect hota hai..!"I shouted angrily and snatched the chocolate box from her hands.


"Haww..!"She made an angry pout and stood up on the bed.


"What haww? Chup aik dam..! Chalo breakfast kay liye chalain..!"I said casually and placed the box back on the table.


"Jaisy superman kay costume me red chadi pehna compulsory hai kya is trha ap ka har wkt ka gusa aur ya angry look compulsory hai?"She said angrily placing her hands over her hip bone and hearing her words I frowned.


"Matlab? Ufff tum bohat bolti ho..! Abhi breakfast karna hai ya ni? Ya main akela chala jaoan?"I asked picking up my car keys and wallet.


"Jana hai..!"She said kiddishly and wore her pink shoes. Oh I forgot to tell you she was wearing very cute knee length pink frock with matching bow pink shoes for a change her long hair were open.


"Tou chalo jaldi say..!"I said smilingly and she held the finger of my right hand like a baby. I smiled and walked out with her.


"Hum khana ja rahy hain?"She asked looking at my face as I was totally concentrated on road while she was listening to the music.


"Breakfast karny..!"I told her smilingly.


"Aray but itny sary hotels guzar gaye na..! Tou?"She said angrily.


"Patience..!"I said strictly and she made a sad pout.


"Kharoos..!"She murmured under her breath and I heard that.


"Suna myny..!"I said with a faking anger I thought that she will apologize but her answer left me baffled she said;


"Suna na..! Tou ab yaad bhi rkhye ga..!"She said showing me her eyes.

"Aray baba ab is man naraz hony wali kya baat hai? Bus 5 minutes sabar kar lo..!"I tried to chuck the fight and she look at me curiously.


"Surprise hai?"She instantly guessed and shouted. With that I sighed how can I forget that she had very sharp reflexes.


"Chup..! Just wait..!"I again tried to shut her but she was NANDINI..! How can she shut her mouth.


"Ap nay na nahi bola that means surprise hai..! Yayeee,..!"She shouted near my ear and I sighed in dismay.


"Tumhara kuch nahi ho skta..!"I said helplessly and she smiled sheepishly.


"Haan tou ab aise he hoon..!"She said smilingly.


"Aur mjhy aisy he qabool ho..!"I whispered and she went all crimson with that she looked away. I too again concentrated on the road biting my lower lip. Soon we reached the place and I halted the car there. "We are here..!"I said to her and she look outside.


"What is this place?"She asked in an astonished tone..


"It's Malhotra's garden..!"I told her proudly and she look at me in disbelief.

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Nandini's POV


"Malhotra's garden?"I repeated in hell shocked tone and look at him. He was looking at the entrance which was breathtakingly beautiful..! Pink flowers..!



"Yeah..! I know it's not that beautiful which you were watching in that movie of yours but yeah ya bhi utna bura nahi hai..!"He told me shrugging his shoulders and I was like is he kidding?


"Its perfect..!"I shouted excitedly and hopped in his arms.


"So I think you liked it?"He said happily hugging me back.


"I loved it..!"I whispered in his ear. I wanted to tell him that I love him but I stopped as I also wanted to do something special for him.


"That's great..!"He said breaking the hug and held my hand. "Chalo first breakfast then I will show you around..!"He said smilingly and we walked slowly under the harbor. The smell was so refreshing and soothing..! I felt that I am in heaven..!


"Itne chup q ho?"He asked taking me in a side hug as being quiet was so unusual for me.


"No one had ever done so much for me..!"I whispered sadly resting my head on his chest.


"Main kar raha hoon na..! And I promise tumhri har wish pori karoon ga..! Each and every wish of yours is an order for me..!"He said kissing my hair and my eyes got teary. He was something..! I just showed him that movie garden,I tou didn't wished for a place like it but he brought me here..! How much he will do for me when I will ask him for something in real..!


"Thank you..!"I said smilingly with teary eyes and he rubbed my tears away.


"Shhh...! I said na no need..! Tum bus smile krti raho..! Mery liye..!"He said in a serious tone cupping my cheeks and I nodded. "That's like my good girl..!"He said smilingly pulling my cheeks and I laughed this time. "Come let's eat breakfast..!"He said and we walked towards breakfast arrangement area.




We reached the table I smilingly sat on the chair as he pulled it for me. Then I look at the breakfast and my eyes popped out.


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Chapter 6 C


"Ya kya hai?"I shouted angrily.


"Breakfast..!"He said casually pouring juice in my glass.


"Ya breakfast hai? Ya sausages..? Brown bread? Jam? Marmalade? Orange juice? Eggs? Yukhii..! Me ko ya ni khana..!"I said angrily pushing the plate away.



"This is the most healthy breakfast ever..! Myny doctor say discuss kiya tha kal raat she told me that this breakfast is best for your health..! Aj say tum koi unhealthy cheez nahi khaoa ge..! Sirf healthy cheezian..!"He told me in a serious tone and I was looking at him as if he was talking in some Greek language which was falling like bomb on me.


"But mjy Choolay Pori khani hai..! Masala Chicken khana hai..!"I sad making a sad pout it was my last try maybe he will melt on this but how can you forget Nandini Murthy he was THE MONSTER MANIK..!


"No..! Koi choolay pori nahi..! Yahi breakfast khana hai..! Chalo now be my good girl..! Eat this..!"He said smilingly and gave a bread slice fully covered with marmalade. I made a bad face as I took a bite. "Come on it's not that bad..!"He said in cheerful tone and then he cut the sausage with knife and fed me.


"Mj say aur ni khanya ja ra na..!"I said angrily as from last 30 minutes he was feeding me those HEALTHY things. Now I was regretting that why I decided to have breakfast with him but then I mentally slapped myself as he was doing so much for me tou I can eat HEALTHY breakfast for him too.


"Acha ok..! Ni khaty aur khush?"He finally said and I sighed.


"Bohat..! Abhi mjy garden dekhna hai chalain na...!"I exclaimed as I wanted to run away from that healthy breakfast as soon as possible.


"Ok ok fine..!"He said smilingly and picked up his coffee cup from the table. Then we both stepped down the breakfast arrangement area.

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Manik's POV


We walked to the area of the garden and she was as excited as a kid. I was holding the coffee cup in my left hand as she was holding my right hand.


Bholi bhali pyari,
Sunder nainon wali,

I look at her lovingly..! Her eyes were beautiful..! Face devoid of any makeup still she was an angel..! She was a fairy dressed in pink..! Who was sent for me maybe by God Himself..! I was so much in love with the tiny fragile girl who was merging in the beauty of pink and white roses.

Baatein hay uski nirali,
Kuch kuch nakhron wali..!

"You like pink roses?"I asked her sipping my coffee as I sat on the bench kinda thing which was also covered with pink and white roses.




"I love flowers..! I wish me har wakt bus flowers kay beech he rahoon..!"She said cheerfully and sat beside me. I pull her for a side hug and she wrapped her tiny arms around my waist.

Sun le piya,

Kehta jiyaa,
Tu na mila,
Toh kuch na milaa,

I was looking at her with all love and she was playing with my right hand fingers. Maybe she was in some deep thought..


"Now what's going on in your tiny head?"I asked placing the cup aside on the grass.


"Nothing..! I am happy..!"She whispered kissing my palm and I too smiled.

Paake tujhko,
Khona na chahoon

Then I adjusted myself ;although with lots of difficulty; in her lap and she smiled at my act.


"I can do it na?"I asked holding her hand again.


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Chapter 6 D


"Of course..! You can..!"She said smilingly and ruffled my hair.


Teri baahon mein,
Sona main chahoon..!

I closed my eyes and nuzzled in her stomach. She cocooned me in her arms and i felt so much peace and warmth in her touch. Her touch was as affectionate as a mother..! Her touch was full of lover's concern..! Oh God I am in so much love with this girl..!

Teri meri yaari,
Mujhko hai jaan se pyaari,

"Koi baat hai?"She asked me running her fingers in my hair.


"Haan..!"I said smilingly and she too smiled.


"Kya?"She asked me.


"You are very special to me Nandini..!"I said looking in her eyes.


"You are very special to me too Sir..!"She said smilingly and I frowned..! AgainSIR..!


"Don't call me Sir..! Take my name..!"I said happily. She blushed and looked away.

Bholi bhali pyaari,
Sunder nainon wali..!

OH GOD..! She was blushing in just taking my name then what will happen if I will try to get intimate with her..! The naive soul..! Awww..! I just want to eat her alive..!


"Come on..! Take my name..!"I again said this time naughtily and she shook her head. Then she shoved my head away and run from there. I smiled and got up to follow her..! Aj tou main tum say apna naam bulwa kar rahoon ga..!

Mann yun kare,
Uske dil ko chura lu,
Honthon ko chhoo ke,
Neendein uda lu,

She run taking short steps and I followed her in a slow pace. She turned to look at me and showed me her tongue naughtily. She run towards the fish pond with waterfall..!



I approached her and again sat on one of the benches near the pond. She kneeled near the pond and took some water in her palm.


"Sir..! Look goldfish..!"She exclaimed as soon as she spotted a goldfish swimming in the pond I smiled on her never ending excitement.


"There are more Nandini..! Why don't you count them for me?"I asked her as I walked towards her and she bobbed her head like a child who got an order from her father and she in real started counting the fish. I sat beside her and admired her while she was counting the fish.


"15..! There are 15 fish in the pond..! Goldfish..!"Her happy shouts broke my trance.


"Wow..! You are very good in counting too..!"I praised her smilingly and she was more than happy. Then I slid more close to her and held her hand. I can clearly notice the effect of me on her as her breath was going all wild..

Jane na doonga,
Waade karunga..
Rab se main tujhko,
Maang loonga..!a.a.a.a

She was about to get up due to shyness when I pulled her again towards me and she fell over me. I was lying straight on the grass and she was over me..!


"Feeling shy?"I asked smilingly and God..! She was red tomato by now..!


"Sir please..!"She merely whispered as my hands caressed the curves of her waist.


"Please? What?"I asked tucking her hair behind her ear and she blushed more.


"Let me go..!"She said shyly.


"I will never let you go Nandini..! Never ever..!"I said purely and she instantly look in my eyes.

Bholi bhali pyaari,
Sunder nainon wali..!

I switched our positions and now she was under me. I kissed her eyes gently and she clutched my hands tightly. Then I kissed her both cheeks and her heart was thumping so much wildly in her chest that I can hear the dhaak dhaak of it..! Then I leaned closer to her lips which were shivering due to anticipation..! I wanted to kiss her until I smooched the blood out of her lips but I knew that I have to go slow..! Otherwise wo dar jye ge..! Bhaag jye ge..! So I was about to capture her lips when..


"Man-Manik..!"She whispered panting heavily,eyes closed.I dumped all my going slow theory in the dustbin and smashed my lips over hers. For the first time she had taken my name without SIR then celebration tou banta hai na boss..!! I kissed and kissed her madly pouring all my love until she wriggled under me going all short of breath...! I left her and kissed her forehead...! Then I laid beside her and she snuggled in my chest..! I wrapped my arms around her..! Her eyes were close and her hot breath was fanning the crook of my neck..! I was constantly caressing her hair and running my fingers in her hair..!


"Sleeping?..!"I called her after a long time as she didn't talked to me.


"No..!"She whispered. "I am feeling this moment..!"


"Me too..! Aik aur baar mera naam lo na?"I said in a pleading tone and she look at me shyly.

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Nandini's POV

His plead was so cute and demanding that I felt myself melting all the way..


"Please..! Aik baar aur..! It sounds so good from your lips..!"He again pleaded and I smiled.


"Manik..!"I again whispered and I saw a different spark in his eyes. I cupped his one cheek and kissed his forehead. He hugged me tightly and I readily gave in..!


"Nandini..!"He whispered.


"Ji?"I too whispered and ruffled his hair lovingly.


"Will you marry me?"He asked in a serious tone and I felt my breath stuck in my throat..! Did I heard it right? Manik Malhotra wants to marry me?

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Throw chapples on me..! I am late..! I am sorry..! Mera koi qasoor nahi bhai log bht guests thy sachi..! Chalo g koi ni..! Now tou I am back na? So koi tension nahi...! Acha here is the update of dheere dheere..! Hawww Manik proposed Nandini..! Wo bhi itnaaa jaldi? Nandini many ge? Haan? Ni? Tell me by your sweet comments..! And tell me by your comments that how much you all missed me..! COMMENT LAMBAAA..! Otherwise me bhi lehaaz bhool jana haan ge..! Acha you liked the update? Pictures? The song is from FALAK SHABIR's ALBUM JUDAH..! BHOLI BHALI..! I know most of you bulky 99% are unaware of this song but trust me it was so perfect for the situation kay main apny aap ko rook nahi pie..! Please comment and hit like button..!

Keep smiling..!

Keep shining for your love ones..!

Lots of Love..

Mawara

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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U were awesme outstanding marvellous fantastic... These waiting seriously it worth to wait for ur update... The way she is behaving was very cute and bubbly... I can imagine that nandu... Even manik was too caring and lovely...the way you are portraying the characters are tooo gud buddy...keep it up sweety... Love you loads and loads...
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Fabulous
Marvellous
Brilliant
Awesome
Great writer
Best se bhi best 👏
Seriously the wait was worth it !
Keep writing
Update soon
Eagerly waiting !
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Oh thank so much dear for such a long update after a long time n i m going it now
N comment again after reading n sachi dil kush kr diya itna big update de kr.. thank u so much again... n plz post the parts of it's love also
N thank u again
Keep smiling
Love mehak


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MUJHE TERI ZAROORAT HAI (MANAN DARK SS)
TUM HI HO (MANAN FF)


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Beautiful yr
It is realli so cute love sotry yr
I loved how innocent nandu is fallinf for manik
Cont soon
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its really beautiful yr just loved plzzz try to update next part soon

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