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richa2192

@richa2192

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Posted: 9 years ago

#611

Heya.. This is the first time that I am replying on this forum.. I love all your stories.. Tum Mile.. Sun Sathiya.. It's Love and now Dheere Dheere.. awesome work.. keep it up

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Danny92

@Danny92

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Posted: 9 years ago

#612

Emotional update

Dhruv nandinis childhood frnd he proposed her that was wat manik was he didn't wait to hear nandinis answer as he was nt in a state of mind at taht time and only knowng the half story he was hutng himself and cursing his fate but nandini she doesn't know anything abut that and she came to manik to know how is he but he shouted on her nd told her to leave him alone and both cried the whole night both r hurt one is hurt by thnkng that he is betrayed and the other don't know the raeson y he is behavng like that

And then 3 days passed thy didn't talk to each other nd that night the boys were behavng bad with her he can't take that he rescued nd took her to his house

She is right even she has the right to know y he is ignoring her I hope manik wil tel her

She told I love u to manik and manik is like did I hear it right

I know u wil set everything right

Watng fr maniks reaction

Continue soonnn

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Adya Agrawal

@Adya05

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Posted: 9 years ago

#613

It was just awesome di...!!

Bohoy badiya tha.. Con't soon..!!

Matlab jab time mile..

Aur please jaldi se yeh misunderstanding clear karva dena..!!

Bohot dukhta hai.. Emotional updates padke..!!

So jaldi-jaldi sab clear ho jaye..

Then... Then kya ?? Phir toh happily ever after.. Hehehe..!!

Vaise mere dimag mein ek baat aaye ki yeh toh four shot tha...

See aaj aapne seventh chapter update kiya...!!

Hehehehe.. Benefit toh hamara hi hai..

LOADS OF LOVE

ADYA..

Edited by Adya05 - 9 years ago

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chandni_as

@chandni_as

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#614

it was surely the most emotional update..you have penned down all the emotions beautifully..I really liked the update..waiting for the next part to know manik's reaction on nandini's I love you..

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tanishka.verma9

@tanishka.verma9

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#615

I dont think i am in a state of commenting after this chapter!! Well done mawara!!

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srija-n

@srija-n

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#616

um crying now ...!!
its was a very emotional part...
dnt know what to say !!!
u killed it di... their dialogs !! oh god !! so pure !! manik's actions... wow !!!
amazing update !! fabulous ...
awsm ...
beautiful...
One of d best update ...
Wanted to read more...
Plz cntinude soon lyk today u did ..
Great ... u r too good ...
LOVE

SRIJANI .. 😊

Edited by srija-n - 9 years ago

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sunset17

@sunset17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#617

Awesome... From tears u converted everything to a sweet smile...

Loved it..

Update soon

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Tiara115

@Tiara115

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#618

seriously yr emotional kar diya 😭😭 manik's inner turmoil and nandini's dialogues were the high point of this chapter .. 👏👏 and ya even the song was superb 👍🏼 nandini 's I love u was unexpected but I think now their misunderstanding will be creed soon

do update soon