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Pehle toh I'm so sorry. I'm really late in commenting & I didn't comment for the last chapter! I was busy as I had my exams! But I'm thoda free & glad to see two updates! Regarding them they are so Perfect as always!
Chapter 9: Finally every misunderstanding was cleared! Nandini saying she loves him & then also telling him that he loves her, leaving Manik shocked. He finally let's out all that he was feeling & was confused about! Nandini maybe a kid but she knows how to act maturely. She knew leaving Manik now would lead him to become the angry Manik again. Loved the way she explains to him to share his pain, but is also ready to wait, till he himself confesses! Manik on the other hand knows he hurt her so much. So he does ask her! Nandini wanting Manik to be the old Manik.. And he agreeing! The part were she doesn't allow him to kiss cause she is angry 😛 She sleeping holding him cause she was scared he would go & he giving surety he won't leave ever! Then he wanting to decorate the room besides his for Nandini! He was so glad to know Nandini thinks of him in her dreams! He hears her aya butterfly & the next thing Manik does is ask his butler to get a Butterfly & box of Chocolates. He definitely wouldn't have gone for the meeting, if it wasn't important. He wanted to see her reaction of the room! He definitely loves her a lot & in a way wants to apologise for his behaviour of misunderstanding her. Gosh Manik is so cute! He arranged everything for her. Nandini waking up in her fantasy room, exactly how she wished it to be. So cutely asking the butler what is he doing in her dream. After speaking to Manik she knows its all real & he did it for her. The note on the chocolate box made me go all Aww! He knows her to well. Then Mohan Dada following Manik's orders of not letting her in the kitchen! Manik's secret of the Fab 5 band! Nandini seeing the whole room & also coming to know Manik can sing. Then the Goldfish in her room! I can totally imagine it & her happiness! Manik coming in time to carry her to feed the fish! And then the Kiss! Gosh he asked permission! I'm falling in love with this character of Manik!
Nandini does ask him to sing for her & Manik in a minute guesses she seen that room!
Chapter 10: Then Nandini singing Aaj Main Upar & asking Manik if she sings well! Gosh shes so cute, adorable & innocent. Then she sitting on Manik's lap & promising not to disturb him! Manik wanted to know why was she so quiet! But her answer really stole my heart! She won't ask anything that will upset Manik! Then her anger cause Manik is boring & involved in work. The Biryani teasing & he telling her that he also doesn't like her Gussa! His warning to keep the house clean so that she doesn't hurt herself as she walks Barefoot at home!
Manik watching a cartoon movie for Nandini! Then tucking her properly in bed! His conversation with Maa shows he loves her a lot & she has become his life! Manik promising to keep her happy always & telling Maa that he in a way is adopting her & will get married to her soon! Cabir is definitely one happy person seeing Manik this way! He knows Manik needed someone & Nandini is perfect for him! Cabir telling him to tell her the truth about Fab 5! And then Manik admitting they arent dead! Nandini hearing it & goes from there crying, wondering why Manik lied to her! Manik still doesn't want to open up cause he can't see her in tears! He smartly changes the topic by asking her to come with him to Pune! The journey to Pune... Shes so bored cause he is so involved in his work! And then dozes off as she isn't used to this travelling! She sees Jack! Maybe she will now know what is the reason the Band spilt!
Awesome work as usual Mawara! Keep writing 😃
Chapter 9: Finally every misunderstanding was cleared! Nandini saying she loves him & then also telling him that he loves her, leaving Manik shocked. He finally let's out all that he was feeling & was confused about! Nandini maybe a kid but she knows how to act maturely. She knew leaving Manik now would lead him to become the angry Manik again. Loved the way she explains to him to share his pain, but is also ready to wait, till he himself confesses! Manik on the other hand knows he hurt her so much. So he does ask her! Nandini wanting Manik to be the old Manik.. And he agreeing! The part were she doesn't allow him to kiss cause she is angry 😛 She sleeping holding him cause she was scared he would go & he giving surety he won't leave ever! Then he wanting to decorate the room besides his for Nandini! He was so glad to know Nandini thinks of him in her dreams! He hears her aya butterfly & the next thing Manik does is ask his butler to get a Butterfly & box of Chocolates. He definitely wouldn't have gone for the meeting, if it wasn't important. He wanted to see her reaction of the room! He definitely loves her a lot & in a way wants to apologise for his behaviour of misunderstanding her. Gosh Manik is so cute! He arranged everything for her. Nandini waking up in her fantasy room, exactly how she wished it to be. So cutely asking the butler what is he doing in her dream. After speaking to Manik she knows its all real & he did it for her. The note on the chocolate box made me go all Aww! He knows her to well. Then Mohan Dada following Manik's orders of not letting her in the kitchen! Manik's secret of the Fab 5 band! Nandini seeing the whole room & also coming to know Manik can sing. Then the Goldfish in her room! I can totally imagine it & her happiness! Manik coming in time to carry her to feed the fish! And then the Kiss! Gosh he asked permission! I'm falling in love with this character of Manik!
Nandini does ask him to sing for her & Manik in a minute guesses she seen that room!
Chapter 10: Then Nandini singing Aaj Main Upar & asking Manik if she sings well! Gosh shes so cute, adorable & innocent. Then she sitting on Manik's lap & promising not to disturb him! Manik wanted to know why was she so quiet! But her answer really stole my heart! She won't ask anything that will upset Manik! Then her anger cause Manik is boring & involved in work. The Biryani teasing & he telling her that he also doesn't like her Gussa! His warning to keep the house clean so that she doesn't hurt herself as she walks Barefoot at home!
Manik watching a cartoon movie for Nandini! Then tucking her properly in bed! His conversation with Maa shows he loves her a lot & she has become his life! Manik promising to keep her happy always & telling Maa that he in a way is adopting her & will get married to her soon! Cabir is definitely one happy person seeing Manik this way! He knows Manik needed someone & Nandini is perfect for him! Cabir telling him to tell her the truth about Fab 5! And then Manik admitting they arent dead! Nandini hearing it & goes from there crying, wondering why Manik lied to her! Manik still doesn't want to open up cause he can't see her in tears! He smartly changes the topic by asking her to come with him to Pune! The journey to Pune... Shes so bored cause he is so involved in his work! And then dozes off as she isn't used to this travelling! She sees Jack! Maybe she will now know what is the reason the Band spilt!
Awesome work as usual Mawara! Keep writing 😃
