MaNan SS:- Baked with Love CHAPTER 11 UPDATED 13/01

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CHAPTER 11

You are only a shame on us we don't need you go away

Transform her she is to much injured

Her blood is to much alluring i won't be able to control myself

She will the the weakest vampire of all

Plss don't...don't make me a monster plss

You need to be made to live

You will only be behind blood when you are transformed no relations will matter

A vampire always bes Strong npt weak i will train you "

I love you Nandini

I love you too Rahul

" you are no use to me silly "

" NO! "I screamed as i woke up. My whole body was sweating as i woke up. " this dream...why ?...why is my past not going away " i told to myself as i got up and went to the washroom

I came out and wore a black top with jeans. I tied my hairs back in a pony tail. I saw myself .

" you better ignore him today or i will kill you " my subconscious told me peeking up through her cat eyed specs. " yeah..yeah i will " i replied and walked ahead.

I came down and saw Mary ma cleaning the tables and putting on covers . Something was different . Yeah she was humming a beautiful tune of music. But she does this on very rare occasions?

" Good morning Mary ma " i told as i sat on one of the tables. " good Morning baccha tum itni jaldi kaise utth gaya " she asked while doing her work. " woh neend khul gayi toh utth gayi thi " i replied.

" Nands " i heard Kara . " Kara " i called out and went out and saw her. Aryaman and Kara came in. " hows you doing? " she asked. " fine just going to go and bake some stuff " i said.

" no this time i and Mary ma will cook and you will go to college " she replied. " as you wish but when i come back i want my shop and kitchen safe , standing and clean " i replied and giggled.

" Kara you have the scroll " i asked her as we settled on the sofa. " yeah here it is " and she removed a heavily designed golden scroll from her sling. I took it . Gosh! Its heavy

I removed its cap and came out a golden glittered paper tied with a golden string. To Mr Abhimanyo Thakar it read.I removed the string and enscrolled it.

____________________________________________________

Mr Abhimanyu Thakar,

I Aroo is pleased to invite you to Vietnam, so that you can attend a seesion in the Court of Pain. A serious issue regarding Thalia needs to be discussed.The Celestial Vampire Mrs Nandini Murthy has been sent greetings by MacKingnon

Aroo
(The Vincent of the Court Of Pain)

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" what do they need to talk about Thalia for ? " i asked. " we have no idea Nandini " replied Aryaman. " Baccha party chalo tumlog jaldi se college jao late ho raha he ni bab " called out Mary ma.

" ha Mary ma " i replied and we and Aryaman left.

[SIZE=5]***Space Academy***

We came in and immediately checked our schedules. " The History of Music " replied Aryaman. " Importance of Music in our daily life " i replied. We immediately left towards our classes as we were late. No very Late.

I ran towards my class and reached there. " May i come in sir " i told between my pants. Suddenly someone pushed me to the other side. I fell and was so angry that i was all ready to show my real side to that person.

I got up and saw It was none other than Manik Malhotra showing me his white 32 teeths. " you i will kill you , you moron how dare you push me like this " i screamed over him.

" you to want to stand there and create a commotion or want to come in and study " i heard the teachers voice. " Sorry sir " i replied. But Manik just walked in and sat on one of the benches

I came in and saw all the benches were full except for Maniks. I walked over and quietly sat beside him. I removed my books and started listening to what teacher was saying.

" hi Lilliputian " Manik told me. I shot him a glare and told " oh hi Eiffel Yower " and waved my hands at him.
" i am not any tower " he replied " same here i am also no Lilliputian " i told angrily.

" Manik what had i just told " asked teacher. He stood up " Mr Gugguliya sir " and everyone started laughing. " its Mrs Gudgolida " replied Mr what?

" i don't know what ypu had told. " he replied cooly. " so mrs who was talking with him. " its Nandini sir " i replied. " yeah you what i told "he asked. " Sir you just told that everything in this world is made up of music from a cars honking to a birds singing everything has rthym and everything that has rthym has music " i repkied

When i Finnished the whole class was just Gasping at me as if i was a alien. " you are human " asked Manik and everyone started laughing loudly [/SISE]

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FrizzAngie

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Posted: 9 years ago

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<font size="5"> CHAPTER 11

You are only a shame on us we don't need you go away

Transform her she is to much injured

Her blood is to much alluring i won't be able to control myself

She will the the weakest vampire of all

Plss don't...don't make me a monster plss

You need to be made to live

You will only be behind blood when you are transformed no relations will matter

A vampire always bes Strong npt weak i will train you "

I love you Nandini

I love you too Rahul

" you are no use to me silly "

" NO! "I screamed as i woke up. My whole body was sweating as i woke up. " this dream...why ?...why is my past not going away " i told to myself as i got up and went to the washroom

I came out and wore a black top with jeans. I tied my hairs back in a pony tail. I saw myself .

" you better ignore him today or i will kill you " my subconscious told me peeking up through her cat eyed specs. " yeah..yeah i will " i replied and walked ahead.

I came down and saw Mary ma cleaning the tables and putting on covers . Something was different . Yeah she was humming a beautiful tune of music. But she does this on very rare occasions?

" Good morning Mary ma " i told as i sat on one of the tables. " good Morning baccha tum itni jaldi kaise utth gaya " she asked while doing her work. " woh neend khul gayi toh utth gayi thi " i replied.

" Nands " i heard Kara . " Kara " i called out and went out and saw her. Aryaman and Kara came in. " hows you doing? " she asked. " fine just going to go and bake some stuff " i said.

" no this time i and Mary ma will cook and you will go to college " she replied. " as you wish but when i come back i want my shop and kitchen safe , standing and clean " i replied and giggled.

" Kara you have the scroll " i asked her as we settled on the sofa. " yeah here it is " and she removed a heavily designed golden scroll from her sling. I took it . Gosh! Its heavy

I removed its cap and came out a golden glittered paper tied with a golden string. To Mr Abhimanyo Thakar it read.I removed the string and enscrolled it.

____________________________________________________

Mr Abhimanyu Thakar,

I Aroo is pleased to invite you to Vietnam, so that you can attend a seesion in the Court of Pain. A serious issue regarding Thalia needs to be discussed.The Celestial Vampire Mrs Nandini Murthy has been sent greetings by MacKingnon

Aroo
(The Vincent of the Court Of Pain)

____________________________________________________

" what do they need to talk about Thalia for ? " i asked. " we have no idea Nandini " replied Aryaman. " Baccha party chalo tumlog jaldi se college jao late ho raha he ni bab " called out Mary ma.

" ha Mary ma " i replied and we and Aryaman left.

<font size="5">***Space Academy***

We came in and immediately checked our schedules. " The History of Music " replied Aryaman. " Importance of Music in our daily life " i replied. We immediately left towards our classes as we were late. No very Late.

I ran towards my class and reached there. " May i come in sir " i told between my pants. Suddenly someone pushed me to the other side. I fell and was so angry that i was all ready to show my real side to that person.

I got up and saw It was none other than Manik Malhotra showing me his white 32 teeths. " you i will kill you , you moron how dare you push me like this " i screamed over him.

" you to want to stand there and create a commotion or want to come in and study " i heard the teachers voice. " Sorry sir " i replied. But Manik just walked in and sat on one of the benches

I came in and saw all the benches were full except for Maniks. I walked over and quietly sat beside him. I removed my books and started listening to what teacher was saying.

" hi Lilliputian " Manik told me. I shot him a glare and told " oh hi Eiffel Yower " and waved my hands at him.
" i am not any tower " he replied " same here i am also no Lilliputian " i told angrily.

" Manik what had i just told " asked teacher. He stood up " Mr Gugguliya sir " and everyone started laughing. " its Mrs Gudgolida " replied Mr what?

" i don't know what ypu had told. " he replied cooly. " so mrs who was talking with him. " its Nandini sir " i replied. " yeah you what i told "he asked. " Sir you just told that everything in this world is made up of music from a cars honking to a birds singing everything has rthym and everything that has rthym has music " i repkied

When i Finnished the whole class was just Gasping at me as if i was a alien. " you are human " asked Manik and everyone started laughing loudly </font></font>

Edited by angelanadar087 - 9 years ago

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ruchi116

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Awesome update but it was too short n very less manan pls jaldi unka romance shuru Karo I'm to waiting jab manik KO pata chalega ki he loves a vampire tab how will he react after knowing the truth. Manik to nandu k hi sath rahega chahe nandu use kitna bhi dur karne ki koshish kare apne aap se.
Update soon the next part

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mousumi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

it ws osm.. whn u r going to continue... post soon

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#136

REALLY I love this story...
totally different from any other story...

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FrizzAngie

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Posted: 9 years ago

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hey guys i am really sorry for updating so late and upon that i was also not well but now we are stable so here's the update and i hope you will enjoy and do tell me if you all want me to countinue Are you mine forever?;-)

CHAPTER 11

I gave him a glare and sat down. " So Mr Malhotra have you done your homework ? " asked sir eyeing him suspiciously. " No sir i have not " he told with such a pride like as if he had won a jackpot

" you don't forget to eat then why do you forget to do your homework ? " he asked Manik angrily. " Woh kya he na sir homwork se bhuk nahi lagti na " and immediately everyone started to giggle including me.

" Shut up and get out of the class " he screamed. " Areey sir app toh bura mangaye me toh mazak kar raha tha " he told cheekly. " I said get out of the class " he again the screamed.

" Thike me aik shart pe jaunga, koi mere sath bahar jaiga " he told . " Jao lejao puri class ko ya jise bhi chahiye uss bahar le jao paar niklo class se " he again screamed and suddenly Manik gripped me wrist.

" hey leave my hand " i protested. " Sir gave me the permission to take anyone out for company and i choose you " he told me gleefully. " what ! Why me ? Take your friends but not me now leave me " i tried to remove his hand

" no you are coming with me and that's final." He told dragged me. " leave me" i screamed and again tried to free myself. I immediately caught hold of the bench. " urrgh can't you listen and obey " he told frustrated.

" I am not your bloody damn submissive to obey you okay now leave me " i screamed this time. He got annoyed and before i could realise i was being lifted from the ground. I came back to my senses and by that time i was in Mr Malhotra's arms.

He had picked me up in front of the whole class what the Hell ! " leave me " i struggled in his arms. He was clamly walking around carrying me while the students gaped ar me. He came near sir. " so here i have choose her and i am taking her with me " he said.

" Good choice bro very good choice " i heard Cabir's voice. I shot him a glare while he and other members of Fab-5 smirked at . Now i was feeling weird. I saw Manik was distracted . I immediately pushed and leaped out of his arms. I caught hold of the chalk and threw at his face.

I heard gasping of other students. As soon the smoke of chalk faded away i saw Maniks face covered with chalk dust. Fab-5 immediately got up and rushed towards him while Manik was glaring at me. I saw him and gave a smirk. " Consequences of making the wrong choice." I told winked at him

Before they could react i shot out of the class. " What up you " i heard thier voices. I ran through corridors with Fab-5 behind me. I reached the canteen. I saw it was crowded with students and it will take a lot of time find my way through them.

I saw Fab-5 coming near. I immediately without any thoughts ran and jumped upon a table. " hey what are you doing ? We are eating food here " i heard students sitting around the table muttering. " Sorry " i muttered and jumped to the other.

" There she is " i heard Maniks voice. I turned and saw they were struggling with the crowd. I immediately started jumping to other tables muttering a sorry at each. I saw only 4 more to go. I jumped and jumped when suddenly i losed my balance and was about to fall when somebody caught me.

I had closed my eyes in fear of falling but i didn't reach the ground. I opened my eyes and saw Precy. I stood starring at him with shock. " hey celestial " he told. " hey leave her " i heard Manik . Percy kept me on my feet and winked at me. My anger immediately rose . " What the Hell are you doing here ? " i asked him angrily gritting my teeth.

" its public place sweetheart " he told flirting with me. " Oh really i didn't knew it " i told sarcastically " that's why i informed you " he told. " hey who are you ? " Manik told. Immediately Percy turned his face towards them and smirked.

He came towards Manik but before that i stood infront of him blocking him. " Go away from here " i told. " MacKiggnon was right you have changed " he told. " its none of bloody damn businesses " i snarled. " Don't forget who i am " he to snarled. " no i don't know who you are " i snapped . " then remind you " he told and suddenly he pulled me and kissed me on my lips.

I was shocked and to numb to react. He sucked my lips and left them . He saw me and smirked. " Son of Mackiggnon or for you your Ex lover " he told and stepped back. My past came in front of my face like a wrecking ball. Tears came in my eyes. He turned away to go. I walked towards a chair and picked it.

" You bas***d " i screamed i screamed and threw it at him. I ran towards him . He got up but i kicked him in his gut and he immediately fell down. I kept kicking him making him scream in pain like he had made me . I picked up the plates with food and threw it at him

Suddenly his boys came and tried to catch me and stop me. Percy got and glared at with his blue eyes. His boys came and caught hold of my hands. I tried to free myself but i could not.

Percy came towards me and raised to hit me. I closed eyes ready for the blow, but it never came. I opened my eyes and saw Manik he had caught Percy's hand. They both were glaring at each other. " How dare you ? " Percy told. " you have no right to mess with our friend " told Cabir as he came forward. " yeah my bro is right " told Mukti as she came forward. " especially not with a girl " told Aliya and Dhruv. " so now leave her " told Manik

I pushed away those boys and went towards Manik . " you better do not interfere in our matter " told Percy. " But before that she is our friend and we will interfere " told whole Fab-5 in unison. " Nandu yeh kya ho raha he ? " i heard Navya. I turned and saw Navya was standing there with Aryaman.

Aryaman saw me and Percy. He saw and shot a glare and came towards. " How dare you come here again we told you to go away right " blasyed Aryaman over Percy. " yeh lo iss celestial ka boyfriend " told Percy in a irritated tone. I immediately came towards him and slapped him hard. " LISTEN IT'S WAS OVER , I HAVE NO RELATION WITH YOU AND HE IS MY BEST FRIEND NOT A MANIAC LIKE YOU DO YOU UNDERSTAND AND NOW TAKE THIS f**kING FACE OF YOUR AND GO AWAY FROM HERE I DON'T CARE A DAMN FOR MACKIGGNON " i screamed.

" i will take my revenge from celestial be careful and yeah best friends huh? , so listen she is my leftover happy " he told and blew a kiss at me and went away from there. I felt my whole energy drained. Those past memories which i had buried deep inside me and risen again. And now they were again causing that pain in me , killing me. Tears fell of my eyes . I fell over my knees and started sobbing loudly.

Aryaman immediately came and tried to console me but it was of no use. Even Fab-5 and Navya came but i pushed them away and ran from there. Hot tears kept streaming down my eyes as i ran through the corridors. " Nandini ! Wait ! Don't run away ! Nandink ! Wait ! " i heard them calling but i kept running not stopping anywhere.

I came towards a empty class and went in. I started sobbing loudly " WHY ? WHY ME ! WHAT HAVE I DONE FOR BEING PUNISHED THIS MUCH. WHAT HAD DONE FALLEN IN LOVE BUT WHAT HAD I DONE TO GET CHEATED WHY YOU MAD? ME A MONSTER WHY? BECAUSE OF YOU I KILLED MY OWN FAMILY WHY? WHY ? " i screamed and fell over my knees sobbing loudly.

" Even the same happened with me " i heard. I thrned around and saw Mukti standing there. " what(sniff)do you mean (sniff) ? " i asked her. She came and sat beside me. " when i had first time came i was a bubbly girl who was a part of Fab-5 . I was living my own life to the maximum. And one day i met Harshad. I fell in love with him at the first sight. He tall , handsome and good in studies. Manik warned me about him but i ignored. We both would talk , became friends and eventually he proposed me and i accepted. We were in a relationship for 2 years and one day i found him cheating upon(sniff) me with Maniks mom(sniff)from that day Manik started hating his mother and i love " told mukti as she wiped away her tears

" what happened with you ? " she asked. " pretty same i told while she smiled. I smiled and removed my tiffin and gave her. She saw me with a confused look. " open it " i told. She opened it and saw the Delicious chocolate cake which i had baked. " Cake ! " she squeaked and started eating. Suddenly the door opened with a blast and we saw Cabir.

" kidher he cakr ? " he asked eagerly. He saw it in mukti's hands and immediately jumped over her while i laughed. Others came in . Soon Manik,Navya,Cabir,Dhruv,Aliya & Mukti were fighting for the cake. Aryaman came and sat beside me. " you fine ? " he asked and i smiled at him.

" omg yeh kya halat bana li he apni. " i gasped and started laughing. They all were having chocolate cake pastured over thier faces. I and Aryaman were laughing catching our stomachs. Suddenly they all jumped over us and smeared the reat of the cake on me and Aryaman

" you know what this is the best day i ever had " squealed Mukti and hugged me. " yeah the bestest ever " and all of them hugged me. " thank you guys for that canteen " i told. " thapad padega Nandini " told Aliya " Abhi hum friends he na so kya he thank you sorry kuch nahi chalega " she told.

" ha point he " told Manik and winked at me " oh you shut up warna ek aur chalk box fek ke marungi " i told and they all giggled. " Nandini kya hum aur cake kha sakte he ? " asked Cabir. " Ha ha kyu nahi zarur paar hum pehle apna huliya thik karle warna Mary ma darr jaigi " i told and everyone laughed.

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So now its a long enough chapter to compensate and yeah is there someone or anyone who can make me a banner for my story plss guys don't be so mean and do like and give your comments

Love,

Frizz & Angela

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ruchi116

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awesome update loved it manans classroom scene was superb manik nandu KO le k bahar ja RHA tha n is me uske face pe daal diya n then fab5 chasing her n that jerk came n hold nandu manik has became very possessive for nandu he has fallen in love with her I hope he realizes it soon n then nandu n Percy's fight fab5 me sath diya nandu ka that's great n last scene was amazing sable face pe cake lag gaya n then cabir saying aur cake milega. Ur story is amazing dear I'm in love with ur story n ya update soon the next part jaldi itna time mat lagaya Karo waiting for next part n manan romance