MaNan SS:- Baked with Love CHAPTER 11 UPDATED 13/01

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey plz post next part na plzzz

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Hadiqameraj

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4 days chalengay papers??? Mon to Thursday???

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No dear sirf Chaar din nahi next Thursday ko khatam hoga and yeah thanku all so much for wishing me on my birthday and sorry for not sending pms but i will surely do it

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Frizz & Angela

I am CBSE board exams so i anm nervouse actually we both are so we don't think we will be able tio manage so sorry

Edited by angelanadar087 - 9 years ago

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Jutta maro chappal maro because u have the right to do it people and yeah i am very very guilty for keeping you all waiting for so long par abb me kya karu

2Min me Pura gaana yaad hogayaPrem Ratan Dhan Payo
Paar yaad na ho saka bio... 😭 😭

I know woh shayari crap thi paar bio bhi usse kaam nahi he ... baass abb mene bohot keh liya aur tumne bohot padhliya abhi chapter padhoopadhoo...

Guys i and Angela are devils. We are addicted to vampires aur jo twist lainge na hum iss story me woh tum dekhte reh jaoge. I am turning a character into Vampire

Chapter 9

I ran from this class to other in search of Navya but could not find her. I was passing from the canteen when i heard weird sounds from there.

I came in and saw Fab-5 standing n a line catching thier ears with babyish expressions on thier faces. A giggle left my mouth seeing Manik there catching his ears and sulking.

They all immediately saw towards me while Navya like a small kid came towards me and hugged me tightly. " Navya tum thik ho na tumhe kuch hua nahi na " i asked checking her to find any bruise or wound

" Arre jab maa he toh kya gaam he " she replied enthusiastically. And pointed towards a lady in her 40s in a gujrati saffron color saree with a cane stick in her hand giving death glares to Manik

I went towards her and immediately tpuched her feet. " jeeti raho beti tumhi nandini ho na? " she asked in a chirpy voice to which i nodded." shukriya humari bacchi ko uss din bacchane ke liye warna yeh log toh rakhshas na tamizzz na lihazz " she told bitterly eyeing all of them

" Chalo uthak baithak lagao " she told angrily and banged the cane stick with the floor to which we all jumped a bit in fear while Fab-5 immediately obliged and started doing " Uthak Baithak "

" Aayiye aunty hum apko college dikha dete he " i offered her to which she smiled and agreed " tum log tum bhi humare sath chalo aur ha tum lambu yaha aao " ordered Manik like a " Mughal Empress "

He gave a irritated look and came in front of her " Lambu " I again pronounced that word and started giggling this time even the other members of fab-5 giggled with me to which Manik immediately gave me a glare indicating me to stop giggling

" Bade hero bante firte ho na , aaj sari heropanti nikalti hu " told Navyas mother. " Aunty kya dialogue mara he " told Cabir and giggled. " Tere ko kaan chodne ko kisne bola " she asked shaking her stick in front of Cabirs eyes.

He immediately caught his ears and sulked like a small child. " Haay , beta agar paise nahi he toh me paise deti hu paar apne app ko toh dhak lo " told Navyas mother and caressed Mukti and Alyas cheeks

they both pouted in anger while Aliya was going to pounce on her to which Dhruv immediately came and held her back while she was trying her whole best to come out of his grip

" Aunty chaliye na hum apko college dikhate he " I reminded her she nodded and we moved ahead with Fab-5 behind us

Maniks P.O.V

I picked up Alya & Dhruv and immediately reached college and as soon as I came in the canteen what iI saw angered me to such a extend that i caught hold of a nerd passing by and punched him hard.

" Mene kya kiya bigada tha jo mujh pe gussa nikal rahe ho " he immediately replied while i glared at him to which he just picked his books and walked off. While I walked away from there removing my anger on either walls, pots, nerds or peons.

End of P.O.V

We paraded through the whole college with Fab-5 behind us making sulky faces. " Manik " we all heard a scream. We all turned around and saw a lady in her mid 40s standing there giving death glares to Manik.

" How dare u ... " but her word were eaten when she saw Fab-5 standing like this there . " did i miss something " she asked and saw all of us. But her gaze came and stuck on me.

" you " she said and pointed towards me. " Me? " i asked her meebily. " yeah you ... you are that bakery girl right ? " she asked with an attitude. " no i am not i am the student of Space Academy " i to replied with attitude

" Don't show me attitude girl " she warned me " It suits more for you " i replied while Manik giggled. " You don't know who i am girl " she asked coming near me " I know, you are a lady with loads of attitude " i replied or snapped back at her.

Fab-5 was now giggling so was Navya. " you will pay for what you did , you orphan " she snarled at me " How dare you call me a orphan lady " i snarled at her. I was trying with all my will power to control my anger and not show my real face to them

" huh ! What can you do sell cakes or corrisants " she told and laughed. " I am Neyonika Malhotra mother of Manik Malhotra " she told me with a attitude. " This pride of yours will fall when your money will leave you " I told her and went away.

I ran from there. I soon came out of the college. I walked from there to the " Fir Forest " as soon as i came there i felt alive. My hazel orbs turned blood red, my body structure changed. I ran at my lightning speed towards the deeper side of the forest.

I went and pulled out the biggest trees possible and threw them away. " YOU BITCH ! WHO GAVE YOU THE RIGHT TO TALK TO ME LIKE THAT ! THANK YOUR STARS THAT IT WAS A COLLEGE OTHERWISE I WOULD HAVE DIGGED YOUR GRAVE RIGHT THERE" I screamed at the top of my voice.

Suddenly i felt another vampire around. His steps were definant but i was too sharp. I smelled the air around me. It reminded me of him . He was here

" long time no see beauty " I heard his voice. " I was busy " i replied " romancing a human huh? " he told and chuckled. " Its nothing like that " I immediately replied. " don't lie Nads i see everything even the future his name is Manik by the way " that voice replied.

"as if i didn't knew it! that's your problem, you should not see it then " I replied . I saw his figure appearing from the darkness. " You will never change " he told and hugged me. " you bet " i replied and smiled. " want me to go and suck that lady's blood huh? " he asked me

" No Aryamman i am fine My life, My rules, My revenge"i replied fiercely. " How is Mary ma? " he asked. " you know it you sent Abhi to see that only right " i replied back. " Caught me " he told and smirked. " Thirsty? " he asked me. " Nope i am fine you go ahead they all will get worried " i replied

" You mean Manik will get worried " he told and smirked " I meant Navya " i replied immediately. " But your mind tells me something else " told. " Go away or i rip you to pieces" i replied angrily.

" going away girl bye see you..." " Never " i finished him off and went away from there. I came directly to Pure Bliss.I immediately changed myself to normal. " Baccha tum thik ho na " i heard Mary Mas soothing voice.

" I am fine Mary ma nothing has happened " i replied . I kissed her cheeks and went up.I went up and took a shower. I felt the water sooth down my body...

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Major twist right ? abb me kya karu I love it. But I have valid reasons for it.

1) Never in any update i specified why Nandinis parents left her.

2) I never showed in any update that she has consumed or ate something

3) I never told this that this story won't have any supernatural element

I hope I will be forgived as i had promised thursday but gave the update on Sunday. And yeah next update tomorrow till that good bye

Love ,

Frizz & Angela

Edited by angelanadar087 - 9 years ago

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dhillon90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Wowww awesome
Amazing
Superb update
Navya ki mom ne kya band bajai fab5 ki...hahahahahaha lambu manik...nandu vampire hai...i lovd supernatural stories...nyonika tum toh gyi nandu toh tumhe nhi chodne wali...lovd it...continue soon