MaNan SS: IS THIS What Our Destiny wants part -29 pg-105 24/04/15 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21


Chapter 2

At College Canteen..
"So guys Freshers ke sath Masti bd me karenge abhi unhe hamara talent dikhate h" cabir said in his cool dude avatar..
"hmm.. Its been long days since we had an open air jam session" alya said with a smile..
"dn lets go"mukti said..to which every1 agreed..
"Umm... Guys u all procef i will be dere in 5 min"manik said and left...
"Ise kya hua??"mukti asked..
"hmm..Kuch toh hua h..kuch ho gaya h" cabir sang teasingly..
"What??"mukti and alya exclaimed..
"what?? Nothng nothng... Lets go" cabir said avoidng dere questng session...
~~~~
Here Nandini arrives at SPACE..
Chacha~ "Nandu tmhari registratn ki sari formalities ho chuki h... Now i will take a leave u enjoy haan..."
nandu~ "ok chachaji..."
chacha~ "take care nd kch prblm ho toh call me.. Ok??"
nandu~"ok... Bye"(smiles)
chacha~"bye" (smiles and leaves)
Nandu~(to herself) aiyappa main kya karun ... Kaise dhundho... Kissise puchu??.. Nai nai ye log kya sochenge... Aiyyoo...Manik kaha ho tm..
~~~~~
Here Manik cmes to fab 5 jam room... Nd takes out a bracelet frm his Jacket's pocket...(d manan bracelet)
Manik~ (to himself) dnt knw y bt aisa lag raha h jaise u r near me...yahi kahi ho tm... Pata nai tmse kb mil paunga...
~~~~
When she was busy with talkng with herself... A girl came nd strikes with Nandu... Nd she was panting as she was running...
Nandu~ hey wat happened?? R u ok?? Y r u running??
Girl~ hm thk h... Wo... Wo...
Nandu~ relax... First take a d3p breath...(she obeys her) nw tell me..
Girl~ umm... Hello... Hm Navya Navya Naveli...(forwards her hand for hand shake)
nandu~ (takes her hand) me Nandini Murthy...
Navya~ new??
Nandu~ haan...wo..
Navya~ hm bhi... Ye sb choro waha... Fab 5 r gng to perform..
Nandu~ fab 5??
Navya~ haan... D super band...
Nandu~( mumbles) Manik...
Navya~ come hme unka performance dkhna h...
Nandu~ hmm...
They goes at d backyard garden of SPACE...
~~~~~
Here every student was cheering for Fab 5 ...
"FAB 5!!! FAB 5!!!" Dey were hooting...
Fab 4 enters at d stage except Manik...
The crowd stops shoutng... Nd start doin dere Khuss~Phuss...
Sme girls were talking abt d cuteness of Dhruv... Whereas sme boys were talking abt d hotness of Mukti and glamour of Alya..At d same tme most of d girls were like "Yaar ye Manik kaha ha"...
Navni reached dere nd saw d crowd and dn deir eyes fall on d stage nd dey saw d fab 4...
Nandu~(thinks).."Manik... Kaha ho tm"...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Chapter 3
Written by~ Barkha Sharma
Every1 was excited for d performance nd dere was pin drop silence...
Dn after havng an eye cntct with each other... Fab 5 starts deir performance...
Every one was surprised dat without Manik dey r gng to start...
Alya starts playing her piano nd dn cabir matches her with d drums..
Dn a voice comes...
"MAIN SARFIRA MUSAFIR, HAWAAON PE CHALUN,"
Manik appears from behind Fab 5 ...
"YAARON KA MAIN YAAR HOON, HAAN HAS KE SAB SE MILUN.."
He sang encircling his arms around Cabir nd cabir cntinues to beat his dreams with a smile..
"INN KHALI KHALI JEBON MEIN, IRAADE BEHISAAB HAIN,"
He move forwards nd shows her jeans pocket with a expression dat dis is empty with a smile...
Nandini feels very much happy after seeing him performing in frnt of her after so many days.. Nd her eyes gets teary..
" INN CHOTI CHOTI ANKHON MEIN BADE BADE SE KHWAB HAIN"
He cntinues singng..
"SAZAA DE MERI RAAHEIN TU, KHOL DE APNI BAAHEIN TU"
He sang and picks his guitar up..
"AA RAHA HUN MAIN
ZINDAGI AA RAHA HUN MAIN
KAR LE AA MUJHSE DOSTI
ZINDAGI AA RAHA HUN MAIN..(X2)" He sings happily while playing his guitar like a rockstar..
Nandini was just lookng at him without blnkng her eyes as if she will blink her eyes he will disappear bt unfortunately Manik was nt able to see her as she was far frm him nd dere was huge crowd..
"DIL KI SUNI HAI MAINE TOH
DIL KI HAI MAIN SUNUNGA
PAGAL SA JIYA HUN MAIN
PAGAL SA HI JEEYUNGA"
Manik sings while closing his eyes and dn he sees Nandini when he closes his eyes nd a smile appears on her face..
"MUJHE KYA JEET HAAR SE
MUJHE HAI PYAAR PYAAR SE"
He sings while looking at d crowd nd every1 waves there hands in air...
"AA RAHA HUN MAIN
ZINDAGI AA RAHA HUN MAIN
KARLE AA MUJHSE DOSTI
ZINDAGI AA RAHA HUN MAIN..(X2)"
manik again sings passionately like a rockstar...
Mukti and Dhruv plays his guitar passionately while Alya presses d keys of d piano with a smile ...
Cabir beats his drums to d fullest ..
"UTHA DO AASMANO KO
UTHA DO AUR BHI OONCHA
MAIN APNE PANKH TOH KHOLU
MAZAA TOH AYE UDNE KA"
Dhruv sings nd cmes near Manik and manik smiles...
"MUJHME HAUSLA BHARA
MUJHE TU AZMAA ZARAA"
Manik and Dhruv sings while moving deir heads in rhythm which shows dat dey were enjoyng so much...To which Mukti Alya and Cabir smiles while playng deir instruments..
NavNi also smiles after seeing dis...
"AA RAHA HUN MAIN
ZINDAGI AA RAHA HUN MAIN
KARLE AA MUJHSE DOSTI
ZINDAGI AA RAHA HUN MAIN..(X2).."Manik and Dhruv Sings passionately like Rockstars nd end deir song...
Every1 gves a huge round of applause to dm ...
Nd dn Fab 5 leaves to deir jam room...
Navya~ Haye kitna acha performance tha.. Haina??
Nandini~ hmm...
Navya~ acha nandini hum tmse bd me milte hain hame na kch kaam h... Chalo bye!!
Nandini~ bye...
Nd Navya leaves...
~~~~~
"aiyappa main manik se kaise milu itna bada college h nd half
n hour me meri class h... Lets leave it to my destiny... Let me c wat she wants" nandini mumbled to her self while she was in d 3rd floor corridoor of SPACE...
Nd here Our Hunk Manik also enters to d corridor nd was busy with her cell phne due to which he was taking little little steps..
Both Manik nd Nandini was walking in d same corridor towards each other without noticing each other...
Nandini was walking while mumbling sme thng to herself, she had'nt noticed Manik and dn BOOM!!!
Both Manik and Nandini strikes with each other..
Manik~ what d he--
Nandini~ Dikhta nai -- ( both speaks at same tme bt stops after seeing each other)
Nandini~ (mumbles) Manik!!
Manik~(mumbles) Nandini!!
Both were smiling bri8ly nd were lost in each others..
Manik~ tm yaha kb?? Kaise!!
Nandini~ wo...wo...main (she uses her hands to explain him smethng)..
Before she could speak more Manik pulls her in a bone crushng hug...
At first Nandini was surprised bt dn she also hugs him...
Manik was feeling solace in her arms .. Same thng was happening with Nandini... Both of dm were cntinuosly thanking their stars nd destiny..
After few secnds Manik broke d silence..
Manik~ I Missed You so Much!!
A drop of tear escape through Nandini's eyes nd she felt dat today she is d Queen of d World...
Nandini~ I missed you too!!
Through her voice Manik sensed dat she is cryng...
Thanks to god dat d corridor was empty nd dere was no1 to c dm in dat state except one pair of eyes nd it was Soha Khuraana... After seeing dm like dat she immediately leaves angrily...
Manik dn breaks d hug...
Manik~hey y r u cryng!! Now toh jaisa tm chahti thi vaisa hi hua na..from now even destiny wants us togedr...
Nandini~ M nt cryng buddhhu..its tears of happiness...(sm
iles
Manik~ u haven't changed a bit... U nd ur logics..(smirks)
Nandini~ tum bhi toh nai bdle na... U still care for me...
Manik smiles..
Both gets lost in each odr eyes ... Nd shares a romantic eyelock..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wowww yaaar itsss sooo awesmee!!! Nxt part jldi post krnaa!! N han plzz ek request h plzzz dnt ceeate any fight or msundrstandng btween manan due to dat psycho soha plz plz prettty plzz..abhi th thk se mile bhi nhi h yar donooo... N if u will keep ur storyy simple n loving den allsoo u gonna rock dear n we all will love it!!!! Bura laga th maaaf krdnaa srf suggstion h !! Ok thnks byee!!! Suprb!! :):):):)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Finally
Manan meet
God such an
amazing
Update
Vaise I
Really don't
Believe in
Destiny
But now I
Guess maybe
I too believe in
destiny
...hehe...
and thanks for
giving double update
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part
Love
Diya😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Yaar its awesome...
But post long parts na...
And thoda jaldi plz...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Sooo cute.
Manan meet and its sooo nice.
Thanks for the pm.
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Finally manan met
pls post next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
wow! This is really v interesting story...
Read all 3 parts together.
Finally manan met...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Nice updt..
Finally they met...
Jst hope dat soha dosnt mess up evrythng...
Hope to see lv in d air n lots n.lots of manan romance with tons of teasng frm our cabiraa...

Plz continue soon...
N thnx fr d pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Fab update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx fr d pm

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