MaNan TS : The First Meet With Her; With Love (Part 2 - PG 21)

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poonz26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

your thoughts and your imagination are beautiful and your thoughts are presented so beautifully by you. i am ardent lover to your writings, beautifully written

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Afiiiieee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Assalamu alaikhum.. Eid Mubarak dr...

It was an superb romantic update Dr...

This ts was different dr...

I loved it...

It was like an gift for Eid for us...

Waiting eagerly for the next update.

Manan meeting for the first time excited...

Always stay blessed nd happy...

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Pragya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

woww wow wow...

ur ff ws olreadi amazing n nw ds TS is awesome...

so adoring penfren to love relation dey shared...

liked ol d letters so amzing...

beautifully pened down...

updte d nxt part soon

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sugarforu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Hey Juhi,

It's always a pleasure to read ur story n I love the way u write. After reading ur ff Life with Nandini, I was under an influence that u r too good in English n thought that same won't be the case with other languages, but ur Hindi is commendable.

I like d positivity u have in ur stories. U never need villains n mishaps happening in ur story... I mean ki they focus more on d depth of emotions more than d drama. Which I appreciate d most as this makes ur story different n outstanding.

Lastly I would say I liked ur this TS very much.
But... But... But...
I would appreciate more if u would have written it as a story /ff, rather than a TS as I would like to read a long story as this storyline has many aspects which u could enhance.
I know I'm sounding greedy to have asked for a long story instead, but b it.

Lastly to sum it all I as always liked ur TS.

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crazydreamer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Yaar It's Fantabulous
I toh just loved it
and soo sorry kehte hai naa bina jaane kabhi bhi kisi chij ko judge ni karna chahte.. So SORRY for that actually when I started reading that time I think ki itni stories hogyi hai ky padhu kya ni then i think padh hi leti hu and when i came to know about story i really felt good that tym as I read this...
It was Superbbb keep smiling tc
ty for pm 😉 😛
btw I'm just kidding maine vaisa kuch socha hi ni mai saari stories ko chance deti hu 🤣
It's really a awesome story update soon will wait for next part 😉

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Alishakhna1998

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

amazing...just fab

continue soon
eagerly waiting

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SSimra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

eid mubarak

it was beautiful

expressed lovingly

just loved it .

waiting for their meet

plzzz continue soon

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mairaallauddin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Awesome update

Beautiful update

Superb update

Loved it

Update the next part soon

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RUBI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

BEAUTIFUL ...

I M SPEECHLESS ...

KYA LIKHU ... TUMHAARI ISS PIECE KI TARIFF MAIN ...

UR WORDS R JST CUM 2 D HEART ND TOUCHED ME 2 D CORE ...

SAME CHARACTER BT ONLY MANAN IN UR VISION ... A SPLENDID WORK OF URS ...

WHEN READNG ,,, I WS AFRAID IF IT NT END N A HPY NOTE ...

BT WHN READ D 4RST PART FULLY NW WAITNG EAGERLY 4 D LAST PART OF THEIR UNITE ... OR SHOULD I SAY THEIR BEGINING OF TOGETHERNESS ...

U DID NT MENTION WHERE MANIK STAYS WHCH TAKE 23 HOURS 2 REACH NANDINI ... ND U ALSO DIDN'T MENTION HIS AGE ... PLZ MNTN IT N D LST PRT ...

LUCKNOW ... D CITY ITSELF DEPICT D ELEGANCE ND AURA OF MANAN'S PURE ND BLESSED LOVE ...

AAPKI NANDINI ... TUMHARA MANIK ... HAYE !!!!!!!!!!!! I M TLKNG ABT DS AURA ND ITS CHARM ONLY ...

CANT RESIST 2 KNW MORE ... PLZZ POST IT 2DAY ITSELF ... WAITNG EAGERLY ...