Manan SS.... Pyaar ka imtehan Part 30 on pg 136 updated .. 1st Nov - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Eid ki 2nd installment

sorry in advance for mistakes

Caller: Bomb blast k bare me janna chahti ho na?

Nandini: kon bol raha hai?

Caller : Kya yeh janney se tumhe tumhare sawalon k jawab mil jaen gey? Nahi na ! to bus itna jan lo k tumhare har sawal ka jawab mere pass hai.aur agar tumhain apney sawalon k jawab chayen to kal college k baad ********************* is pate pe pohanch jana.

Aur haan aik baat yaad rakhna apni os pagal party ko is me shamil nahi karna. Nahi to ... anjam tum khud soch sakti ho.

After that beep beep beep and call ends

Nandini: POV

Now what can I do.yeh to mujhe pata chal gya hai k yeh sub Harshad aur Nyonika ne mere liye plan kiya tha but manik os ka kya.os din k baad se koi nahi janta k manik aur cabir k sath kya hoa? ... Now I know Nyonika ne jo kuch bhi hum sub se bola wo sub jhoot tha ab mujhe har haal me sub kuch pata lagana ho ga.Lykin apney friends ko batae bina kya yeh sahi hai? Un sub ne mujhe is time kitna support kiya ,mera kitna sath diya.

Kya main un se yeh sub kuch chupa k sahi karon gi? ... Yeh sub wese hi itni mushkil se apni life sambhalne ki koshish kar rahe haan...kya is time pe in ko in sub baton me uljhana sahi hai?

Lykin agar inhe batane k baad in ki life danger me a gyi to... kyo k jis kisi ne bhi mujhe phone kiya ose in sub k bare me pata hai!... nahi nahi main apni waja se in ki life khatre(danger) me nahi dal sakti. Aur agar is sub k bare me nyonika aur harshad ko pata chal gya k main wo sub janney ki koshish kar rahe hoon aur yeh sub mere sath haan to in ki life pe danger aur barh jae ga... nahi main esa nahi kar sakti... Ab jo karna hai mujhe hi karna ho ga.

Here Fab 3, Aryaman and navya

Mukti: guys tum logon ko kal se nandini ka behavior kuch weird nahi lag raha.

Navya : haan ! hamein bhi feel hoa nandini kuch ajeeb se behave kar rahe hai.

Aryaman : guys plz! May be wo kisi baat ko le k tension me ho give her some time .(self talk: but mujhe nandini se 1 baar baat kari chaheye )

Dhruv : ya guys I think aryaman is right. Plz give her some time agar os k baad bhi esa hi hoa to hum sub os se baat Karen gey. OK

All noded

Here in Canteen

Harshad received a call

H: kab se wait kar raha hoon .kahan the tum aur kam hoa k nahi

Tum ne kal ose wahan hi bulaya na.

Haan ok

Haan thek hai agey ka plan main tumhe baad me batata hoon.

Harshad with his evil smirk: "Nandini ! now it's your payback time."and left from there.

Mady was also there and he listened all this crap . He immediately typed something on his phone and send it to someone.

Now nandini went towards gang and said

N: sorry guys wo kuch kam tha so late ho gayi and ya mujhe tum sub ko kuch batana tha

All with questioning look : what

N: Actually kal mai college nahi a paon gi

All: what ... Kyo... kahein ja raho ho kya... tum thek to ho...what happened

N: RELAX GUYS! Actually kal na Meri Amms se baat hoe aur un ne aik aur well-known music teacher k bare me bataya to kal mujhe un se milne jana hai.

Aryaman : haan to ... koi baat nahi main chalta hoon na tumhare sath.

Nandini: immediately said NO! wo kya hai na aryaman... Agar tum mere sath chalo gey to yahan meri duties kon dekhe ga tumhe os mady ka to pata hai na .wo koi na koi problem zaror create karne ki koshish kare ga . to yahan bhi to koi hona caheye na.

All other agree on this so guys see u day after tomorrow.

All gang: ok see u

Nandini left from there but All other gang while crossing mady

So kal nandini to nahi a rahe but hum sub ko time pe yahan ana ho ga (mady listen this part and now thinking)

MADY:

Arey yaar yeh veena vadini chahti kya hai... Yeh kal nahi a rahe aur udhar wo harshad kal k liye kuch plan kar raha hai.Boss kuch zabardast locha hai.

Here nandini in her house thinking about her old time with manik while crying.

About their love, about their fighting, about their confession and all that golden moments they spend together.

O o...

Bekasi hai, bebasi hai
Bekaraar hai aarzooo
Rabba mere tu..
Rabba mere tu..
Zaraa sa tu aasra de
Zaraa sukoon tu dilaa de
Meri duaa ko tere karam se
Mere Khuda ab tu mila de
Tu milade..
O o...

Dard bhi de, par dava de
ArzYion ko hosla de
Meri duaa ko tere karam se
Mere Khuda ab tu mila de
Tu milade..
O o...

Aashiyana har thikana mera tanha
Raahton ka mill saka na ek lamha
Tanhaai parchhai hoke aai mere rubaru
Rabba mere tu..
Rabba mere tu..
Soona jo dil hai phir basa de
Jeene ki ab to koi wajah de
Meri dua ko tere karam se
Mere Khuda ab tu mila de
Tu milade..
O o...

Boond bhar ki pyaas meri
Tu hai dariyaa..
Mera hissa hoga kitna, ek qatra..
Meri aahein teri raahein takti hain
Aur kya kahoon..

Rabba mere tu..
Rabba mere tu..
Mujhko bana de yaa mitaa de
Banda tera hoon tu faisla de
Meri dua ko tere karam se
Mere Khuda ab tu mila de
Tu mila de




Next Morning

Nandini prepare herself for this Manik k bare mein pata lagao mission mentally as well as physically .

She bought a recording chip.So that she can record all what will happen there and save a copy of this recording in her account ! she also installed a personal safety application in her mobile and add all friends numbers in emergency contact list.

Before leaving she prayed to ayiappa

" ayiappa plz sub kuch thek karna.app to jante ho na k mera manik kay bare me janan kitna zarori hai.plz plz plz help me and give me strength."

After prayer she left for that place .

In college

Mady saw all gang except nandini and said : Arey wah! Ajj wo hamari so called Miss President nazar nahi a rahe. Kya hoa dar gayi.

Aryaman: hey MADDDYY be in your limits dude ,ajj to nandini bhi yahan nahi jo tujhe hum se bacha sake.

Mady: Huh! Miss veena vadini nahi hai.kyo President ship ka shook khatam ho gya kya. Ya meri dhamki se dar gayi.

Aryaman: kya kaha ... tu ne ose dhamki di (now aryaman hold mady's collar ) kya kaha tu ne bol.

Mady: relax side hero relax. Tujhe bari fikar ho rahe hai oski. Side hero hai side hero ban k rah

Aryaman wants to punch him but dhurv hold aryaman and said

Aryaman choro ose. You now na wo yeh sub mess create karne k liye kar raha hai.plz ignore him ! nandini bhi abhi yahan nahi hai aur wo apni responsibilities hamein de k gayi hai so plz control yourself.

They all leave from there except mady.At same time mady saw harshad on phone and listen

Harshad: haan main ***** pe kuch time mein pohanch raha hoon... jaise hi wo pohanchti hai tum mujhe msg kar k wahan se nikal jao gey understand.

Aur is k sath hi harshad bhi wahan se gaib ho jata hai.Now its mady's turn

Arey baap re yeh locha to bht hi serious type ka hai and he again msg something to someone and leave from there.



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Edited by cute-aly - 6 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Oh dear you started this story on very interesting point.
Every one wants to know about manik.
Witch cv. are not giving.
I want to see nandni shattered after manik not there. But we
Didn't get it from cv..till now.
But the way you described her condition after know about manik.
That's it. ..very emotional😭😭..heart wrenching😭. You Penn down
The way we want. ..thanks for sharing this unseen side of nandni.
You wrote this chapter very beautifully.
Keep it up the good work.
Stay blessed.
God bless you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
cont soon...want to know what will happen next
how will she she find abut manik and will be able to save herself frm harshad or will maddy will help her...cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Firstly I really hope our Nandu is safe
Secondly yeh Maddy ne suna that's good...maybe he will save her...as long as nandu is safe...dats imp...
Mostly I want cabir and manik to be alive ans they shud be there for her !!
Maddy har baat kisse msg kar RHA tha ??
Yeh Maddy villain hai ya good character?

So curious !
Nail biting situation !
Enjoyed the update :)
Very interesting !
Thank u for the update Aleena :)
Keep writing !
Edited by divtan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
amazing update...
so much mysteries...hope harshad doesn't harm nandu...
please reveal manik's disappearance soon...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
planning plotting by harahad
yeh harshad na born loser hai
Hope manan meet soon
Loved the update
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Eid Mubarak appi
coming to the update its amazing
waiting to know what happen to manbir
pls make harshad not to harm our nandu
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Hey..thnkq 4 d pm... nice update... a bit emotional 2... hope nandu don't fall in ny prblm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Hi just came across this story
It's interesting

Is maddy texting manik?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Thnkx for d pm and its good

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