#3 Manan ff : You live in my soul(THREAD 4 PG 1)

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sadiya51

@sadiya51

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#761

Wow the flashback story was so good
Bechara manik...he still don't want to believe that neyonika is not his mother
I don't know if he will accept raima or not
I'm sure nandini will handle him
Neyonika's heart didn't even melt for a second

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sabi_anamika

@sabi_anamika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#762

so emotional chpter

waiting next chapter

update soon

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#763

Thanks for the pm!

Omg I never ever expected that twist!

That manik is illegitimate child of Raj

That was a really shocking truth!

Manik is so broken now! I really feel bad!

N nyonika she still didn't care

I hope nandini takes care of him and brinngs him out of thus

Trauma!

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#764

awesome update...

loved it so much...

so much revelations...i didn't expect that manik was an illegitimate child...

it was so painful to see manik breaking like this...

i can't believe that neyonika was so selfish...she doesn't deserve to be a mother...all she did was just more people...

nandu is the best wife any one could have...forgeting all her pain she became the strength of manik...she needs to praised...

manik no matter what will consider neyonika his mom...but i also want to see raima and manik's bond building in the near future...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

i hope you get better soon...recover from your accident...take your time with your updates...

Edited by sharon.babu - 9 years ago

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anshika garg

@anshikagarg126

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#765

Omg what was this
Uff shocking it is
Nice update
Dear please take care of urs
Get well soon
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
:)

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stars_fireflies

@stars_fireflies

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#766

Omg it was amazing update kaju I felt like m watching it in front of my eyes .. Like seriously.. The combination of words was so appealing that it has power to draw the effect of a/v .. Only uh can do this really m speechless..

So coming to the update .. Yr Simone Singh is so beautiful nd classy like nyonika nd has all the qualities to be manik mom .. Perfect choice bt it came ad a shock to me that nyonika is manik's step mom ... Oh man ... I gt daily new shock with this story . it's incredible.. Yr nyonika .. How cunning she is ??? Her every word was giving immense pain to manan nd us also seeing our beloved in such shattered condition.. U penned it down so so intensely.. The revelation of their past came as another shock raima Raghav!!!!! Omg that's y all this fiasco happened.. Thats y that jerk Raghav killed Raj nd that's y nyonika is behaving like this .. Yr or bhi shock baki h kya ...

The most heart broken thing was the way manan shattered.. Especially manik. Yr uska halat to dekhi Hi ni jaa rhi thi .. Kaise likh leti ho tum . like how???? So much hatred nyonika hide in her heart for poor babies .. Shit man!!!!... Manik dialogue were hell emotional nd heart touching.. The way u described pain truth lie in between the update was superb marvellous..

Waiting for next part impatiently. .

I tried to read between the lines lil lil lol hahahahaha.

Again a master update by uh .. Superbly written

Thanks for pm

Continue soon but only after getting well properly

Take care

Love uh humesha

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kirti0123

@kirti0123

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#767

Finally truth revealed... Manik is so heartbroken... Khair use to nandini Sambhaal hi legi use to... Dono Ek Dusre ka Sahara h... Ab finally filhal koi raghaw ni koi nyonika ni.. Kuch din tk koi suspense ni hoga... Story me... Nd update was superb as usual.. Nd take rest yr.. Get well soon.. OK bye continue soon.. 😊

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FairyGamer

@FairyGamer

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#768

sorry i m lae

socking chapters

new entry

hmmm

how is ur fractures

hope u r fine

a/h u managed to write a very sensational chapter

loved it

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ChocolatePie14

@ChocolatePie14

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#769

IT CAME WITH A SHOCK!!!! I NEVER IMAGINED THIS WOULD BE REASON BEHIND THE MISHAP!!!!! THANKS FOR THE UPDATE... LOVE KAJU...

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aditimanan

@aditimanan

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#770

Kaisi mom hai nyo i so hate her
Manik he was so shattered yr
Itna sab hone ke baad bhi he loves hr as maa bt she is so hrtless
I hope nandu sambhal le manik ko

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