MaNan SS//Lips Do Lie//Link for Thread 2 on pg 150 - Page 65

Hi dear nice update manik is a suspense pls next part soon

Thattt was a ...steamy update :P ...hehehe n the kiss *_*...;)...hawtt... What is with this manik man... Smjh hi nii aataaa... Something romantic sweet possessive ...n then suddenly ignores her... N rude...:/>.< ...when he threw her out... I reallly wnt nandu to make him understand her worth yr... N what exactly u did in the end... Justtt loved the whole from lunch ... Till the end...:D ...I was lyk... Yeh Hui naa baaat...:)
Do cont it...:D ...
N two things yr??
1. As you said... Whetever manik does ...has a motive...so kya dat means being with nandu ...??? Motive ?? :/
2. can you tell me the name of your other ff...?

Oh god...
Nandu went to get her bags from Manik's room alone n he was in shower...
Their kiss... The hotness ...ufff
Manik is so strange ... Actually mysterious...
Haww usne nandu ke bags kamre se bahar phenk diye...
Ab yeh mukti kis bare mei baat kar rahi thi??
Dhruv in a band wid harshad...nooo
Ohho jealous manik...yayyy
Kitna warn kar raha hai yeh...bt y?
Awesome update
Loved it
Thnkz 4 the pm

hey.. amazing again.. your English is amazing...!!! can I get some tips as a student please..!! :( :( moreover..!! If u ever write a book.. please tell me 1st..!!! :) ;)

Who is this manik yaar...
He is definitely different...and nandu,,she has some feelings for him but do manik has the same feelings?????
On top of everything I m seriously enjoying this story... This story is some what different from others... .
So plz keep writing and update the next part as fast as u can...always a jealousy manik is a fun to watch...what will he do now as nandu was going out with duruv...I'm sure this will b great fun ...
God bless u dear...

Aahhh i just love this Manik. So demanding yet mysterious :D Looking forward to read more :)

Hiii didu
Wow such a fast update
amazing update
Hehehe... Nandu's luggage exchanged hua toh wo bhi manik k saat hi...didu i remembered this dialogue "agar aap kisi cheez KO poore shriddhat se chahoge toh poore khaynaath usse aapse milane ka try karega( sholly dii I don't know what's the exact lines)
Wow phir se kiss... Hmmm mazaa aagaye... Damn ye banda toh kuch soch teh hi nahi kuch karne se pehle... God he's so obsessed with her plum rose...
Haha nandu ka koshish manik KO jealous feel karwaane k liye wo superb teh... Manik JAL bhi gaye "JAL KHUR KAHIKE"
Ho didu ye dhamki kya teh... Aap sachhi is topi waale ka bones break karwayenge kya... Do that dhi it'll be fun
Hmmm... Yek muknik koi mission pe hai kya?? Ye kounse chip kho gaye aur kya sacchi woh manik k back pe bullets k wounds teh kya???
Uff so many questions... Didu answer na
Aur haan please provide index with page numbers na I've very bad habit of reading same story again and again plss
Accha didu enough of my blabbering...
Continue soon
Take care

Hey,, I like dis ff it is very interesting
N Ua writings too gud 👏
Pls continue soon

Impressive update...luved d manan interaction...it was really amazing...😛...aate rehena..aur chaukate rehena...byee fr now keep smiling n expressing