Manan ff LOVE BRINGS HATRED ALONG(LINK TO THREAD 2/PG1) - Page 44

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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally d whole truth is out infront of nandu...
The emotions seems so real...
I myslf felt lik cryng...
U r an awsm writr...

Nw lukng frwrd fr d convo of manan...
Will he b abl to console hr..? Will c forgv hr.
? Will they b togthr again..?
Wl b waitng fr d nxt updt to kno all these ans..

Plz updt d nxt prt soon...
N thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
haapy to knw tht nandini got to knw the truth!!...
nw she has to decide whether trust manik r not!!...

n fr manik its high time!!>..he has to fight fr his love!!!

👍🏼 nice update yar!!!...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for pm
Great update
Both of them re in so much pain
Glad that nandini finally cried
Loved manbirs convo
Hope she will understand but can also understand if she doesnt
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART - 27(B) IS DEAD NOW...!!

Hello...!! So I am back... with the next part...!! Early naa... as I said...!! Better is the response early will be the update..!! And I am really great full to all of them who commented...!!
Thank you everyone for ur compliments and suggestions...!!

Before reading please listen to the song TU JAHA... MAI WAHA ... FROM MOVIE SALAAM NAMASTE...!!

Happy reading...!!😊😊
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As manik gestured them to leave them for sometime...!! They all came down...!! And settled in the hall of nandini's house...!! Then cabir finally asked navya...!!

Cabir: ab kya aap hame batana pasand karengi... ki aapne nandini ko sab kuch kyu bata diya ...( he said it very calmly... but in sarcasm... as he cannot shout... as nandini and manik will be disturbed...!!

Navya: Cabir... hum use batana nai chahate the ese achhanak...!! Par vo bohot gusse mai thi...!! Aur fir vo bar ki taraf jaane lagi...!! Humne use roka bhi par usne nai suni aur hame kaha ki hum chale jaye...!! Use laga humne sab manik ke liye kiya uske liye nai...!! Fir usne bohot sunaya...!! Aur bohot hurt thi...!! Ki manik ne use chod diya...!! Bina kisi vajah ke...!! Fir humse ruk nai gaya aur humne use sab bata diya...!! Aur fir jaise hi humne use sab bataya... toh vo bilkul blank ho gayi... aur fir vo rone lagi... aur apne kamare ki taraf Jane lagi... isse pehle ki hum uske kamre mai jaate usne darwaaza band kar diya...!!

( here navya told them everything... and then all of them were just hoping for better... that this should not affect her health and more problems between both of them...!!)
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In nandini's room-

As manik send them out...!! He sat in front of her...!! And then looked at her in guilt...!! As he knew what must be going in her mind...!! There was silence between them...!! He was pleading with his eyes to forgive him... and her eyes were just having questions...!! Questions which only he can answer...!! Then after a long silence... finally manik gathered the courage to speak... !! As he cannot feel weak...!! He cannot loose hope...!! He moved his hand forward to hold hers...and to his surprise she didn't denied him nor she pulled her hand back...!! May be she was too hurt to even react...!!

Manik: Nandini...!! Mai jaanta hu... maine bohot badi galati kar di... thi... tumhe chod kar...!! Par nandini... u cannot punish urself naa for that...!! Punish me nandini...!! Par please don't hurt urself...!! Mai maanta hu mai tumhe chod kar gaya tha...!! Par mera wapas naa aana meri marzi nai majboori thi...!! Mai wapas aana chahata tha...!! Tumhare pass...!!

( she was looking at him... trying understand his point...!! An dthen she said...)

Nandini: Mere paas...!! Tum mere pass aana chahte the...?? Ya fir apne Dosto ke paas...!! Jinke liye tum dur gaye the...!! Vo sab wapas saath aa gaye toh tumne socha chalo wapas chalte hai...!! Par isme where was I...?? Did u think of me...?? Ki how will I react when I will get to know...!! How will I survive...?? U just said that I am strong to handle it all...!! ( she said this all with continuous tears flowing from her eyes...!! But then she just wiped them by freeing her hand from his hold...!! And continued...) And... I was strong...!! Very strong...!! Till now...!! But see you changed me again...!! Just like u changed me the day u left me...!! Today I feel so weak...!! I feel so so weak...!! ( And she sobbed again...) I... I... fe.. felt... so... so... Un... unwanted...!! As ... every ... one... left me...!! I.. felt.. like I was ... never that important... to anyone...!! That's why...!! No body... no... body... ever.. thought... of me...!! As... if I am... I am.. a toy...!! With which everyone played...!! Till they didn't got bored...!! And ... then... I... I accepted myself... like... that only...!! Just a non living... toy... who is not... affected by any.. any damn thing... or person...!! Just lifeless...!! But see... now u came... came back to play with me again...!! But... n...now.. I don't have any strength...!! To bear... it all ag..again...!! I will... I will .. die... with...this pain...!!

(Manik was listening... and just crying...!! How much broken she is...!! But he cannot let her die like this he needed to heal her...!!)

Manik : Nandini... please... don't say this...!! U are very important...!! Without u I was nothing in these two years...!! I so wanted to just run and come to u...!! Mai bas tumhare pass aana chahta tha...!! Par...

( before he could complete... she said...)

Nandini: par... tum nai aaye...!! U never came back...!! I waited... waited but u never came...!! Then why now...?? Why have u come back...?? Haan... chale jao...!! Think ki we never met again... leave me the way I am...!! Because now I have come too far...!! TOO FAR...!! To come back...!!

Manik: ( cupping her cheeks... in his hands... and rubbing the tears) NAI NANDINI...!! BOHOT DUR REH LIYE...!! MAI YAHA TAK AA KAR PICHE NAI HATUNGA...!! U CAN NEVER BE THAT FAR...!! THAT I CANNOT REACH U...!! I WILL DO WHATEVER IT TAKES TO GET U BACK...!! I WILL GET U BACK...!! TO URSELF ...!! BECAUSE I LOVE U... WAY TOO MUCH TO LOOSE U AGAIN...!!

( As manik said love again nandini looked deep in his eyes...!! Thought she could see love... but was not ready to accept... or was still afraid to feel all that again...!! She didn't wanted more pain...so she said...)

Nandini : Don't drag me into all this...!! I cannot handle this...!!! Love and trust are not meant for me...!! The one who could feel love... and trust people...!! IS NOW DEAD...!! So don't waste ur precious time on me...!! It's just the face which resembles...!! But the inner person died long back...!!

Manik : Till the time I am alive that nandini can never die...!! I will bring that nandini...!! It's time for me to become ur light...!! Just like u have been my star...!! Pushing all the darkness...away... and spreading hope...!! Just give me a chance...!! This time I will not leave u...!! I will be there for u till my last breath...!!

Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan
Sang Sang Yu Chalu Tere
Jaise Tera Aasmaan

Both of them were looking deep in each others eyes... one with all her pain...!! And other with determination to be by her side...!! In all her good and bad times from now...!! Just like a shadow... of her own...!!

Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan
Sang Sang Yu Chalu Tere
Jaise Tera Aasmaan

Till now both were sitting on the floor...!! But then nandini was feeling really tired by now... as she had cried a lot today...!! Her head was paining...!! She was trying to get up but was not able to because of the sling in one hand...!!

Jo Dhup Nikli Chaya Ban Jaaunga
Jo Ho Tu Akeli Saaya Ban Jaaunga
Jo Uljhan Mein Ho Mann Main Behlaaunga...

Seeing her trying to get up... manik just got up... and in a swift move he lift nandini...!! And carried her to the other side of the bed...!! While looking straight in her eyes...!! As if telling her that... he will always be there to solve all her problems...!! Without her even saying...!!

Tum Aa Gaye Ho Toh Jeena Aaya Hain...
Khushiyon Ka Tumne Yeh Jaal Bichaya Hain...
Khoya Hain Khudko Yah Sab Kutch Paaya Hain...

Nandini was also looking at him...!! She ws feeling as if she got her life back...!! After two years...!! After loosing herself in the darkness... finally she got a ray of light...!! But she was not ready to accept it...!! She couldn't just believe him again so easily... not only him... but everyone... now she doesn't believe... in anyone...!!

Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan
Sang Sang Yu Chalu Tere
Jaise Tera Aasmaan

Manik kept her on the bed...!! And assured her again... sensing her insecurities...that he will be there...!! He made her lie down...!! Covered her with her black quilt...!! And sat near by her Bed on the floor...!!

Ho Gam Ke Badal Mujhpe Tham Jaane De
Bechainiyo Ko Mujhse Takrane De
Dukhti Ho Koi Baat Mujhpe Aane De

Manik was staring at her...!! Though she was tired but was still not closing her eyes...!! And was looking at him...!! So he just said... JUST LET IT ALL GO... FOR NOW... JUST FORGET EVRYTIING FOR NOW... AND FEEL THIS MOMENT...!! GIVE ALL UR PAIN TO ME...!!

Dil Sochta Tha Ke Koi Apna Ho
Koi Raaz Na Ho Jo Uss Se Rakhna Ho
Aankhein Na Kholu Main Shayad Sapna Ho

She was still staring at him...!! As if he would just vanish...!! If she looked away from him...!! In her heart she didn't wanted to loose him again... as after a long time she got someone whom she can say is hers... but she was not the one to accept it all so easily...!! Because according to her she was heartless... and if she was heartless.. then how can she feel what her heart was saying...!! But manik understood her...!! And said...I M NOT GOING ANYWHERE...!! JUST CLOSE UR EYES AND SLEEP...!!

Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan
Sang Sang Yu Chalu Tere
Jaise Tera Aasmaan

As manik said this he with his hands closed her eyes...!! Kissed her forehead...And then he held her hand...!! Kept staring at her...!! And unknowingly...!! He slept... with his head on his hand holding hers...!!
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Evening 7 pm-

All of them were still in the hall... talking... and sleeping on each others shoulders...!! While Mukti was sleeping keeping her head in abhi's lap...!! They were happy... as they had already checked... manik and nandini... they all were happy seeing the two love birds... who had faced a lot of problems in their lives...!! Were sleeping peacefully...!! Absorbing each other's presence...!! Here they were happy thinking thta everything is fine now...!! But was it really all fine...!!
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In nandini's room -

Both of them were sleeping...!! Then suddenly... nandini again started moving in her sleep as she again saw her past... which had always been haunting her...!! Then she started blabbering...!! I AM STRONG...!! tears were coming out of her eyes... but the eyes were still closed...!!

Manik was sleeping... till he felt some movement on his hand... and then finally he openned his eyes... only to see a sleeping as well as crying nandini...!! Then he heard her saying something... then he was sure her past was again haunting her...!! So he thought to wake her up...!!

He started waking her up...!! By calling her name...!! Finally she openned her eyes... with a jerk...!! Looked up to see the one who was waking her up...!! As she saw that face... she sat up on the bed... and after few minutes...

Nandini: GO AWAY...!! JUST GO...!! I DON'T WANT TO SEE U...!!
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So here I end this part...!! Finally manik and nandini confrontation...!! As most of u said both the reactions... so I have tried my best to show it that way...!!

And now again... cliff... what happend to her suddenly...?? What will manik do now...??? Though a step towards MaNan is taken...!! But will it lead to MaNan...??

Keep showing... ur love... towards the story by commenting...!! I have really tried hard to write the best I could...!! Please let me know did u like it... or not...?? Were u expecting something more good...??
Criticism is more than welcome...!!



AMAAYA...!!😊😊




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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks for pm.dear

Amazing amazing and very emotional update. .

Both talked there heart out. ..

Nandni was right ..

And he was also right on his side ..

You wrote very very beautiful and each and every word has the meaning.

You did justice to both sides. ..

Very well written. ..update.

Looking forward to seeing more. .

Thanks for sharing this amazing chapter. .

I . like this story very very much.

Stay blessed dear.



Thanks.




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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow .
This is the best till now..
Their confrontation was much needed..
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm update... i jst nandu is gttn bttr nw... othrws she wudnt hv let out hr emotions... waitn eagrlyyy fr ur nxt update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Too gud
Loved it
Their confrontation was so amazing
U described is so well
Y did she ask him 2 leave
Waiting for the next update
Update soon

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
No words.. Am just speechless.. Too gud.. The confrontation was just painful n emotional.. I don't want to say ki manik deserve this, manik shud go away from her or smthng lyk that.. Whatever it is only he can bring her back. If v think to punish manik for wt he did, it will be a punishment for nandini too.. The important thing is, eventhgh he left her, he was not chilling or having fun..he too suffered.. He also was in pain .. And now hez guilty too.. And I think, seeing nandini lyk this is the biggest punishment he could ever get.. He is dying everyday seeing her lyk this.. So I don't think he should go away or let her be lyk this. He needs to make things right. He needs to prove her that she is important.. She is special.. I think everyone should do that..
And I think its tym for healing.. And I want to follow the path whr u r gonna take us.. Coz u r the best
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Posted: 9 years ago
like the update...waiting to see their patch up
do cont soon

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