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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Totally amazing.
Keep it up!
Update soon. Please?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you SooO much Guys for ur lovely comments and likes Am glad that you Like my work and guys some of u wants to knew about why what happen to manik ? Why he left all of sudden so guys this plot is starts from when manik and fab5 perform last time...after there performance manik left everyone and went pune and started lives with his dad ...so without any delay have is ur Update...ENJOY😛
PART-1

In India:

Manik is sitting in his room and doing some office work...His dad came to his room and said

Rohit (manik's dad):Manik

He looked at him and smile a little and said

Manik : dad mr. Abroi is very happy with our presentation
and he wants to deal with us

Rohit:oh wow ...that's great...am proud of you my son

Manik : Thank you dad...dad u came here all of sudden is everything okay right?

He asked worriedly bcz his dad Never come his until or unless it's very important

Rohit:Manik don't worry Everything is fine ...its just that I want to talk to my son

Manik : yaah dad say ...what is it?

Rohit:I knew u never talk about it today I want you to talk to me...manik whatever happens in two years back its
not ur fault son not even Her son...why are you punishing urself And her too

Manik : dad I knew it's not her fault aur agar ab main chahu bhi toh kuch thik nahi kar sakta...I tried a lot to reach Her but ...she left the city ...Even main ...ghar gaya tha uske par ...par vaha bhi koi nahi tha
sab se pucha but they don't knew anything about her...
I knew am at fault dad ...but I can't do anything
Am helpless dad...am ...helpless

Tears were flowing from his eyes and Rohit can't see his son like this...

Rohit:Manik sab thik ho jayega beta

Manik : kuch thik nahi hoga dad ...bcz of my one impulsive act ...I did a big mistake dad...and I deserves the pain ...she must be hate me dad
And I can't even blame her bcz she is right in her place I ...I left...her all alone...I broke her trust dad

Rohit:Manik I knew beta u r wrong but son don't loose hope am sure you will find her and get her back in ur life

Manik : dad she will forgive me naaa

He asked her dad ...today in this two years first time his eyes were shining Bcz of some hope to get her love back in his life and how can his father deny

Rohit :Yes my son ...she will forgive U

He smiled and hugged his dad and said

Manik : Thank you dad...u knew dad she always said

NEVER LOOSE HOPE

Rohit : she is right son...she is right

His dad broke the hug and said
Rohit : Manik life main sacha pyar bahot kismat vallo ko milta ha and u r very lucky son u find ur true love
l knew son she must be mad at u but don't give up on her
Son and find her bcz

Finding ur true love in this cruel world is
Rare

Manik : I wouldn't dad...I will find her

Rohit : That's like my son

He left from there and manik said

Manik : I will find u Nandani ...I will find u

Smiled and makes some calls


in London:

A girl is sleeping peacefully on her stomach in her king size bed ...her phone is constantly ringing
But she is so lazy to pick her phone...but it irritates her a lot so...she placed pillow on her ears...someone Came to her room and saw her sleeping peacefully smiled and said

Person :Good morning baby doll
But no response
Person : baby doll Good morning
That irritates her and she picked up the pillow and hit the person
Person : oouuchhh...baby doll am just wishing you

Nandani :Go to hell with you

Person : That's so rude baby doll

She get up from the bed and said

Nandani : uhhh...Karan am going to kill u

Karan:arre baby doll am just trying to wake u up
And u didn't even receive my calls ...how mean

He angrily (faking) said(karan is nandani's only friend and her p.a too ...both shares a very good bond...he knows everything about her )

Nandani : oh really...u knew what u can't see me in peace naa

She angrily said to which he chuckled and said

Karan :Afcourse I can see u in peace ...but baby doll this is not the right time...we have to go to the airport ...we have a flight remember

he said cheerfully to which she realized that she has to go to india for her concept ...she said in low voice

Nandani : yaah...I remember

Karan:Good now get up u lazy head...and get ready ...and am in downstairs after that we will
Leave

Nandani : okay

Nandani get off from the bed and went to the washroom...after taking a long half an hour shower she came out of the washroom and wear a florer knee length frock ...do some little make up
And come downstairs

Karan:oh my my someone is looking like a doll

She smirks and said :shall we leave

Karan:afcourse ...Let's go doll

Both reached the airport and after a long hours journey there flight land ...both came out of the airport and went towards the car but karan seems like confused and asked her

Karan : baby doll we are two right...and we are going in same car then why pointed towards the car
Are here

Nandani : bcz wr are not going together ...am going somewhere else...so I asked manager to get another car for me

Karan : What???...u r not going anywhere and that too alone...no u can't

Nandani angrily said

Nandani : oh common am not a kid ...and this is not the first time am driving ...why are you reacting like this

Karan : I knew doll u can drive but its india and it's not Mumbai ...where u knew everything ...it's pune
U don't even knew about anything and I can't leave u alone

Nandani : look am leaving and u r not coming with me and that's final

She said irritatingly and grabbed the car keys and left from there...she drives the car in full speed and
Playing music in high volume and on the other side
manik also left from office early and drives the car

Manik pov:
where are u nandani? U knew today I feel like u r very close to me but where are you? Why am so restless
Kya ho raha ha mujhe
Suddenly his car broke down and he come out of the car...

Manik : shit! Shit!shit!esa bhi abhi hona tha yaar ab kya karu

He saw A puppy is lying on the middle of the road and a car is coming towards him in high speed ...he rushes towards there and picked up the puppy and tthe car stops and the voice ...yes she is my nandani...yes she is

Nandani pov :
I was enjoying my ride suddenly I saw a man came in front of my car ...I immediately hit the break
And get off from the car

Nandani : oh hello ...what the hell are you doing
In the middle of the road? If u wanna die go somewhere...hello am talking to you
God kaha phas gayi ...listen whatever you are just get the hell out of my way...
Manik turned both saw each other and shocked

Manik : Nan...dani...Nandani

Tears are flowing from his eyes and he hugged her tightly But she didn't hugged her back after sometime he realized and broke the hug and said

Manik : Nandani

But she didn't react a bit...her face is expressionless...he didn't understand... he is about to say something another car stops and a guy come towards them and hugged Nandani

Karan : baby doll u okay naa? U fine right?
She looked at manik who is shocked...and said

Nandani : Am fine karan

karan:okay come let's go u r coming with me and no more argument bcz this time am not going to listen to u...come

both move towards the car nandani didn't even see manik for a once and soon Both left from there
and manik was all shocked


That's it
I hope you guys like it
but guys there is a lot of
things are coming
how manik is going to apologies her?
did she accept her apology
or he have to do a lot of hard work?
I will give you all the answers
So for that
stay tuned
And hit the like button and comment on it Too

LOVE
DIYA

Sukanyadhar12 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
It was amazing update .please post the next part soon . pm me next time .😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Haaa..nandu toh hates manik cz she dsnt knw y he left her...we also don't know..
Tell us noh Diya...
And today u made dem meet na..bass's ussme khushi..
Thank u :)
Continue and update soon !
Waiting.
Edited by divtan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Hiii diya...
Update was awesome...amazing...
Father and son conversation was superb...
Manan face to face after 2 years ...
Manik hug her but she didn't hug him back...
That scene is very nice...
I like this update...
When u get time plz update next part...
Thnx for pm.
Be happy..
God bless u..
lol

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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Hmm seems interesting keep me posted!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
awesome update...
read all the updates in one go...they were amazing...
wondering why manik left...hope they meet each other soon...
keep up the good work...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Amazing update.
Pls update the next part soon
vaishnavigarla thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
nice update
manik hugged nandu
but she didn't responded
thanx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Mindblowing update
manan first face off
amazing

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