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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
this qutub minar really needs to renovate its building ..especially the top floor ...its empty ...fill some cement in it ...otherwise this building will collapse ...🤣 he was irritated as she was not effected by her ...the way he made her admit that she kissed him lollz
ty for pm

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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Afila1993

Woww nice start dr ...
Tis is my first cmnt in ur story ...
It was awesome...
Naughty manik ... 😉
Waiting for the next update...
Always stay blessed nd happy


awww dear thanks for commenting
glad uh liked it ..
hope to see more comments from uh
tc
love
akku
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: kitkat5756

Baiby srry for late comment Kan pakarkar srry... Big Wala thanks for the pm and amazing update... I really enjoyed it thoroughly... Meri pataka it was an atom bomb Wala update ... Koi kya ak person ko Qutub Minar nam se bulata hain kya ?? Kaha se lati hain Aisa unique idea awesome ... Meri pataka ke dimag main unique ideas ke kami nahi hain mashallah... Today's best part was the dialogues wah kya dialogues the mind blowing bohot jyada maza aya Teri updates par kar ... Big Wala thanks itne mazedar updates dene ki liye ... Big Wala hug 🤗 and kisss ... The last part was really shocking manik smirk's uffo ak din hum mar hi dalega awesome... The cheek kiss was really unexpecteD and sweet ... Dil khush kar dia... Mmmwaahhh mera bacha u make me proud again ...

Meri pataka Eid Mubarak :) Allah tujhko wo har khushi aur success de Jo tu deserve karti hain ... Humesha khush rehna aur khushi batna...khushiya batne se aur barti hain ... Love u iTna Sara :) ... Tc ... Aur ha apna dhyan rakhiyo aur please get well soon baiby... With lots and lots love anD hugs... Yeh comment aj meri taraf se tere liye eidi ..hope u will like mY bakwas :)


kiss ;)
not a miss
luv too
n eid Mubarak
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: soothu


this qutub minar🤣love u manik


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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: sweta639

plzz post next part egarly waitng its awesome ur plzz cntnue fast plzz


thnx
will continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: DikshaAnand

Wow it's amazing
The kiss and the whole scene hehehe 😆 maaza aa gya


:) ;) :p
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
hello peeps !!
thnx for appreciating last part ...especially that kiss coz that was the weird imagination of my gutter mind ...wanted sm new ways to shut nandus mouth ...i m glad u guyz liked it ...so will try more ways for sure ...and sorry for not replying to your comments
OK so now here you with the chapiii...



PART 3


NANDINI POV -:



I was walking in the corridor ...thinking about what just happened...mtlb ..how could I kiss him ???
but I didn't kissed him ...to he also didn't kissed me ...mtlb I didn't kissed him ..he didn't kissed me ...but still we kissed ...

arghhh ...

this qutub minar ...

huh !!

oh shit I need to go in the class ...I made my way to the philosophy class ..but the next moment what I saw made me numb ..I was not able to walk ..my legs were rooted at their place ..was that he ??? but what is he doing here ..?? no he can't be here ...I saw him ..he was standing bit far from me ...I ran towards him bt when I reached there he was not their ...ayiappa...was that ???

no nandini ...stop it ...he can't be him ..I chucked my thoughts ... and left for the class.


I entered the class and saw that the teacher was still not their..I sighed in relief and moved to sit ..


I saw mukti and abhi at the last ..that qutub minar was also
their..

I saw him and he winked at me .

I glared at him and he smirked ...

ayiappa ...that smirk again ...
I was wrong ...he don't renovate his building ..becoz this building can't be done just by renovation ..its a gone case ..its need to collapse and then need to be built again ...oh god seriously what the hell I m thinking ..mtlb ..this guy ..huh ..I should go in the architecturing field rather than mechanical ..


my chain of thoughts was broken my mukti loud voice ..she was calling me to sit with her. I reached there and took a seat beside mukti .we four were sitting in a single row I was sitting beside mukti and then abhi and then manik ..oops ..qutub minar ..


n finally a lady teacher entered the class ..she was preety ..simple and serene ..she was wearing a saree ..'gud morning guys ..hi I m neeta batra..your philosophy teacher .

.ok so ..let's start ..' umm what is friend ship for you guyz ' she said and pointed towards mukti who was kinda busy cuddling with abhi .she straightened herself and stood up and was bludshing profusely .mam smiled slightly seeing her ..I must say she was a cool teacher . 'so pretty girl ..what's friendship for you ?? or what do you mean by a friend ??she asked mukti .
mukti thought for a while and then answered 'mam a friend is smone who knows all about you but still loves you ' she said with a smile . 'Ok.. .I m impressed ..what's your name dear ?? she asked mukti ..'mam mukti ...mukti vardhan ' mukti said mam nodded and guestured her to sit


.then she pointed towards abhi and he stood up ' ok so u tell me what do you mean by love ??' abhi smiled and said looking towards mukti 'love is the only emotion which will never ditch you ' he said and this made me drown in deep thoughts .I don't remember what he said further coz I was in my own world ..love ..a four letter word ..which can never ditch you ..


seriously ..is it so?? love doesn't mean soulmates ..I also loved my mother that was also love ..but she ditched me ..she left me all alone in this cruel world ..bt still I do believe in love ..my thoughts were disturbed again as mukti shook me

..'what ?? I asked .she guestured me to look forward .I looked forward and saw mam was pointing towards me .I stood up with a faint smile .' yeah dear you tell what is love for you ?! ' she asked .

I smiled and answered 'love ...love is that beautiful thing ..which will make you fall in love with everything ..every damn thing ..'For many love is a two sided coin .It can strengthen or stiffle . expand or enfeeble , perfect or pauperize .When love is returned we soar .We are taken to heights unseen where it delights , invigorates and beautifies .When love is spurned we feel cripple ,disconsolate or bereaved ...love it is beautiful .'..but I was cut off in the middle by the sudden thud

.I looked towards the owner and saw ..he was looking very angry ..his eyes were red. he stood up and shouted 'love is beautiful ...wow ...and he left out a sarcastic laugh ..'love ...its all crap ...this beautiful love of yours na ..will just get crushed by this world with so much of brutality ..'it is not love ..its BRUTAL LOVE


..he sat and left the class ..pheww!! how was it ..do tell me ..silent readers plz ..

and that quote was of Colleen Houck

now bye ..

exmass hn
tc
lots of love
akanksha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
It was nice update . please pm me next time to before updating the story . thankyou 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Hmmm.
Manik and his coconut attitude.
Love the update.
Thanks for the pm.
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjanbapidas

<font size="4">It was nice update . please pm me next time to before updating the story . thankyou😊</font>


dear I sent you the pm ..
didn't you got it ??

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