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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kitkat5756

Meri jaan di bohot sorry hain thori Kate ho gayee hain comment dene mein ... I don't know y but my phone is giving me pain post karne mein prob kar raha hain ... Bohot writers ke story mein post nahi par rahi ...di is actually very very sorry mera bacha for not commenting earlier

Update was awesome meri pataka...bohot maza aya parhne mein ...uss harshad ki toh main nandu ke style ak solid punch dena chahti hu USka dath sAb thorke bahar lane ka maan kar raha hain ...emotionless animal hain woh jerk... Kisike bhi dil buri tarah se Pehle torta hain then full attitude ke sath roam karta hain har jaga aur shameless ki tarah behes karta hain ...samajh ta kya apne apko loser kahika...ak yeh harshad loser aur dusri wo churail nyonika ufff nak mein dam karke rakha hain ...par humari Sherni nandu ne kya class ki hain uss loser ka ... Manik and cabir wanted to know but nandu didn't say anything ...hahaha manik ki ignore karna kitna mushkil hain yeh nandu ko pata Honi chahiye...manik barbar puch raha tha what's the matter aur nandu ignore karrehe thi ...par manan moments were awesome neck kiss hahaha...nandu ne sahi sunaya Qutub Minar ko Jo wo Pehle nandu se kaha tha...superb meri jaan...tu apna Jo man mein ay wohi kar hmmm manik ki dark secrets later no prob...we want to know nandu's secret and reason of her mother's suicide & harshad aur navya s secret ...manan want to share their probs , want to be each other's solace hmmm I know meri pataka will bring our manan together slowly ...

Love u a lot meri chotu sa pataka ...thanks for the lovely update and pm...update soon ...with lots of love and hugs



its ok Di
..

but ya I was waiting for your comment ...

n thnx .
I m glad uh liked it ..

love uh
akanksha
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mairaallauddin

Awesome update

He kissed her neck and then at the door he said that next target will be ur lips
And then when he went out he said that still some people say they don't get affected by me
And the last part nandini said iski building mein hi giraungi that's true
Superb update
Loved the update
Plz Plz update the next part soon



thnx dear ..
will update soon ..

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suji_suji

Hi
I just came across this story..
I read all the parts in one go..
U penned it so beautifully..
I just loved it..
Pls continue soon..

Love
Suji :-)


hello
I m glad uh liked it ..
will update soon ..

take care
lots of love
akanksha
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry sorry even after ur PM i was nt abl to read the ur FF ...
Bt i read it today in on go nd it's really dammm..., owsm Nd interesting...
Plz keep doing PM nw i ll read Nd comment also
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Posted: 10 years ago
baby really sorry fr nt commenting fr 2 updates amreallybusy in my colage works n little bit busy in hme so am jst reading u r updates nw so tht after reading ly immedaitely wnt to comment so tht became bit late so sorry next time will nt to like this
nw cmg to updates there was awesoem updates so was too really naving great skills in dreaming abt every chacter god bless u wth high in u life love u fr tht
manan was too shock to see in furnutrie shop eachothermanik was thinking tht she was following him fr collage nanud was too shock to listen abt tht
he was jst drag her am he was asking her same she will get affect her r nt
nandu was too tense se him like tht everytime he will end up something like tht
nandu was too tense abt her friend hw she was cmg to face tht jerk again in her life
nandu want to be wth nanvya to make safe frm evil eyes
she gave perfect ans on eu r famous nandu ka punch to bantha he fr tht jerk
hw stupid tht idiot havig a mask to be good fr her infrnt on nanud
cabir n manik was too shock to see infrnt of them
manik want to knw abt tht
so he followed her nandu jst ignore him
n gave same ans to him hw he gave to her
bt our nanughty manik never to be nasty wth nandu
jst he have his tricks toshut her mouth
and he was warinh abt next part
nandu was too shocks in her life daliy
continue soon
thnks fr pm
stay blessed
kep smiling
may god bless u
lots of love n hugs

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Posted: 10 years ago

each part was asm di ...
but da mst funny one was qutab minar hahah😆😃🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww nice updates..
Qutb minar lol! Nice name fr manik 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awooosome
wawotastic
fabulous
update
waiting for the next
part to
read
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Posted: 10 years ago
jealous manik will be so nice to read ...life is made up of most of things we can't control
update soon ty for pm

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AsthaVerma92

Sorry sorry even after ur PM i was nt abl to read the ur FF ...
Bt i read it today in on go nd it's really dammm..., owsm Nd interesting...
Plz keep doing PM nw i ll read Nd comment also



its ok dear ..!! :)
n I m glad uh liked it :)

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