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Awesome update

Loved it
Update the next part soon


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Thank u all for ur likes and comments it means really a lot. here goes next chapter. happy reading
chapter 4:

Now are you fine nandu?

Nandini : yes. (Getting back to sense, suddenly moves away from manik )

Manik : okay you wait here and I will look around to find a way to go out from here.

Nandini : yeha se tho, we can go in the same way as we came in. Issmey doondna kyu ?

Manik : acha ! Aisa hai kya Nandini ji (with a sarcastic smile ). Tho ab raasta dikhado.

Nandini pov :

(with a turmoil expression) hmm,, pointing her finger, kaha hoga ? Kaha se aye hai hum.

She goes straight and found no door anywhere. Yeha kuch bhi nai hai tho, hum aye kaise hai ? (She thinks scratching her head )

Then widening her eyes and a weird smile looks at manik.

Nandini : manik, yeha se door kaha gaya ?

Manik : aww... Ms.Murthy ko nai pata ? Door yeha se ud gaya raat ko, tumne nai dekha kya ?

Nandini : ( thinking it go be true ) arey aise kaise ud gaya ? Phir wapas kaise ayega, with a confused look she asks manik.

Manik : (bursts into laugh ) you are such a dumb.

OMG ! Tum kaise ladki ho ? Dimak bhi nai hai , chalu ayi research Karne.

Nandini : umm... Making a low pout. She remains silent.

Manik : chalo, rehne do. Let me check , if there is a way out.

Nandini :angrily manik again alone ? kab suderega tu humesha mein mein karte ho, kabhi kabhi "hum" boliya karo. Saat mey karenge.

Manik : tumhare saat ? Kuch nai hopayega. You dumb :p

Nandini : ( shouting near his ear ) you Monster...

Manik :arey... nandini araam se, kyu chilari yaar? mein yehi hu. Right now, front of you.

Aise hi nikal gaya, i didnt actually mean dumb (trying to escape Nandini anger)

Nandini : aise tho, tell I'm sorry.

Manik : what ? ( with irritated look ) why should I ?

Nandini : you say me dumb ? Correct yourself. Call yourself dumb, not me.

Manik : ( in little serious look ) oh ! Common. Take a chill pill. Don't give so much self importance Miss.

Nandini: (an erupting volcano mood) you know what Mr.akdoo, I always get better marks than you. You are here with me in research. I'm not with you. Did you get that ? If I m not there then you can do nothing.

Manik : ( in anger ) what ? I proposed the idea of research here. It's my own brain which made us success so far.

Nandini : Then u gonna change manik. I made this project approved and its me who made efforts to convince every one.

Manik : shhh... Stop nonsense.

Nandini in anger, leaves to kitchen.

She sits down, leaning to a wall, with her hands wrapped around her half lifted legs.

Manik pov : hmmm.. Arey manik, kya kar diya tune.? Tumhe pata hai nai, usse ghar pe koi kabhi kuch nai kehte. Sirf tum hee ho, Jo aise karte hai. Pata nai. Shayad wo sahi bhi thi. She made a lot efforts to convince every one, friends , her's and my parents.

Going near Nandini after 10 mins.

Manik : kya gussa khatam hogaya ? Or should wait here for some more time ?

Nandini still silent. Theek hai maharani, postpone your gussa for sometime. What you do is, save or delete this anger somewhere in ur pocket or brain, waise wo khali hai na, (with a smile) and open it or restore back after going out from here. Okay ?

Nandini starts smiling at his words.

Nandini: tum bhi na, kuch bhi kehdete ho. Save karo, delete karo. Pagal ladka ( she smiles, placing her small hairs back with her hand )

Manik : okay ab chalo, saath mey chalenge.

Nandini :( getting up ) fine chalo jaldi.

Both reach hall. And manik opens basement door on floor, where he expected a ladder or stairs present to go down.

By the time manik is finding a way to open that old hard wood door , nandini started packing all eatable available into her bag. suddenly manik shouts ,

Manik : nandinii..

Nandini :( with sudden jerk) kya hua manik? ab mein ne kya kiya, kyu chilaa raheho?

Manik : tumne kuch nai kiya, par ye ghar ... yeha dekho, kuch nahi hai yeha, hum neeche kaise jayenge ?

Nandini : haan!! ( walking towards him) Yeh ! Aise kaise hosakta? Hum itna upar kaise hai? ( they are about 60feet high from the ground) both wondered, how come a small tree with a house ( which was not more than 20feet high) grew so fast and so high.

just imagine this view from top

Both with a clutter stare at each other.

Manik : ab hum.kya karenge ?

Nandini : peering down the passage, mujhe kya pata ? ( with a disappointment )

Manik : yeh kya kar rahi ho ? Be careful, gir jaogi.

Nandini :arey manik, aj yeh kya hogaya ? Mera itna fikar hai ?

Manik : ( being caught as he is concerned about her ) wo wo wo...

Nandini : wo wo wo, ha bolo, kya hai wo ? ( laughs silently )

Manik : hahha ( imitatingly ) has liya ? Ab jyaada mat socho, I'm concerned about my debt. Jo tumhe mujhe dena hai. Waise bhi aliya aur mukti kush hojayenge, unke chocolates chori nai hote agey se. Phir bhi chalo, tera bhai wo abhimanyu royega mujhpe. Isiliye.

( intros, mukti and Nandini are family friends. Mukti is also 21 year young girl who pursued a job as fashion designer in London. They were brought up together , as their mums are childhood buddies.

Aliya : she is working as a journalist in BBC for present. Though her interest is to be a traveller and discover many new places. She also making efforts to connect with better discovery or natural expedition team. Aliya is Nandini neighbor. When around age of 10 they met each other on holi. That beginning of friendship lasted long.)

Nandini : how mean you are ? They never think like that. Anyway Wo sab bhi saat mey hote tho kitna acha hota. Hain na ?

Manik : ha, kyu nai, hum yeha picnic manane Jo aye hai. Hai na ?

Nandini :( she finding herself silly) chalo, koi baat nai. After we going from here, will make a get together. And you also must join us. Don't skip like you skipped from past few years.

Manik :( again in silence) don't take that topic. Please, leave.

Nandini: okay, okay, I'm sorry. Let's first focus on way out from here.

Manik :( with a doubted expression) nandini, tum subah wo food stuff, kaha se lekar ayi thi ? Tab tum kaha se gayi thi ?

Nandini :

woo na,

actually

Manik, wo sab,

Manik : haan haan, jaldi bolo.

Nandini:

mein ne tumhe ye kab kaha ki, mein bahar jaake lekar ayi thi. I opened windows to see the view, tho sab pass mein hain, they are hanging on branches, so i just plucked it.

Hahah, use brain manik, which you don't have. Hahhaha.

Manik gives unbelievable look to nandini.

He shuts the door and sits back on the bed.

Nadini also sits beside manik. Manan starts thinking.

Suddenly nandini shouts with an adulation,

Nandini : manikk

Manik : (with a sudden jerk) kya hua bhoot dekliye kya ?

Nandini : naiii buddhu, waha upar dekho na

Manik looks up and found something like an opening to go up.

Manik : (with a look of hope) haan shayad door hain (in low voice).

Par tum chilana band karo Nandini, mera khan fhat jayega ek din.

Nandini : acha acha theek hain ab jao jaakar dekho, kya hum waha se nikal sakte hai?

Manik : haan ok

Manik finds some old wooden ladder in a kitchen to one corner, with nandini help he climbs on to the ladder carefully, starts trying to open the door. Though it was a stubborn wood, he could break through it.

He peeped out with his two arms and head outside the passage.

Nandini : ( being curious) manik kya hua kuch mila? bahar jaane kha rasta dikh raha hai kya ?

Manik : wow!!! Nandini, it is so amazing. tum kabhi yeh dekha bhi hoga ? What a climate looking at his right side.

Nandini : kya?? Kya bolre ho manik pagal hogaye ho kya ?

Manik: what a alluring beauty this place has. How lucky we lost ourselves here.

Nandini: yeh, tum kya bole jare ho. You are happy that we are here in this island. Oh! God, did u lost ur mind looking out there ?

Manik with a excited cry :

Manik : unbelievable, to my left the complete view is different. Do climate ek saat. Wow, such a vague place this island is.

Nandini : yeh island mey sirf ped hai, while we are wandering before reaching this home, I found nothing better or scenic view here.

Manik :nai baba, thats different. Yaha water ki taraf sunny hain, complete bright, shiny, monsoon climate aur forest ki taraf full to fog hain, as if it is going to rain. amazing view .

Nandini :kya sach mein ?

Mujhe bhi dekhna hai, hato hato.

Manik : thodi der rukho na.

Nandini:

( pulling his pant down)

mujhe bhi dekhna hain manik.

Jaldi niche utaro, jaldi

Manik :okay okay, wait.

He gets down.

Nandini climbs over ladder but unable to reach up. She keep trying but fails. ( manik laughs to himself looking at her helplessness) later with a baby face she looks at manik.

Manik : ab kya ??

Nandini :wo mujhe thoda utao na plz, I couldn't see.(she says in a childish tone)

Manik (smiles ): acha, mai kyu karu?

Apne wo , wo naam kya hai ? Shahid kapoor ko bulavo.

Nandini: arey, wo shahid kapoor tum hee ho. Utana please.

Manik : mai ? Yeh kab hogaya ?

Nandini: wo, abhi abhi hogaya. Cut your questions and paste them in other situation malhotra. We don't have much time. ( with an innocent face she speak)

Manik : (yeh, aur iski bachon ki harkat) okay.

He lifts nandini standing two stairs lower to nandu's, taking balane on ladder with legs and body, lifting her with hands.

Manik: tum kitni moti ho? Kitna khaati ho ?

Nandini : chupkar. Kuch bhi bolte ho. Dekho mai kitni patli hai.

And she starts trying to reach the top

But still nandini unable to see the view

Looking at her, the way she is struggling manik starts laughing an says

Manik : nandini tum kitna bi koshish karlo tum tho ho hi chota packet ( continues laughing more and more)

Nandini gets angry and glares at manik and says

Nandini : tum lumbu, bamboo stick ki tarah lamba ho tho kya sab tumhare jaise honge kya?

Manik (controls his laugh):acha okay okay, rona maat abhi. niche ao mein phone pe pic leke dikatha huu. Utaro neeche.

Nandini : hey,, acha hai. Chalo maaf kardiya. (smiles and nods)

Manik brings nandini down. He climbs up , takes a pic then gets down.

As soon as he step down, nandini snatches the phone with excitement.


The glance at pics makes nandini exclaim : wow ! manik this is really amazing.

Manik:

Ab khud ke aanko se dekhlo. uper se ek rasta hain par thoda risky hain. Kya karenge ?

Nandini :its okay manik, hum saat hai na. (Holding manik's hand) Chalo, jayengi. Humare pass aur koyi rasta bhi nahi hai.

Manik feeling boosted with her words and touch, again climbs up.

Nandini follows him and manik gives his hand to pull her up (there is an eye contact between manan, a blush on Nandini face)

As it is little steep over top, manik hand rests on Nandini waist and Nandini hands on his shoulders.

That one moment in everyone's life, make us feel so lucky and precious when we are embraced in our loved ones heart and hands.

Both slowly and carefully move from there and could see a beautiful world around them.

Both shout once in excitement.

And suddenly,

Manan : oh!! Nooo...

That's it guys for the day..

Sorry for late updates.

It's my exams time. So, I couldn't make it soon.

Only your love and support make me write the chapter parallel to my exam practice.

Hope you love this part.

Keep supporting with likes and comments, that boosts me up to write more and more, also to make an early update.

Love you all. Thank you so much everyone.

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Yours

Kiranmai.

Edited by kiranmai_angel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
awesome update...
loved it so much...
their cute little nok johks were so adorable...
glad they decided to work together...
the island is so mysterious and eventful...i think they are in an illusion where their deepest desires are being met...
can't wait to find out what happens next...keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...

loved it so much...
their cute little nok johks were so adorable...
glad they decided to work together...
the island is so mysterious and eventful...i think they are in an illusion where their deepest desires are being met...
can't wait to find out what happens next...keep up the good work and continue soon...


thanq😊😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanq😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice updaate..bt its very confusing...kaisa ajeeb sa island hai...!!.
waiting fr suspense to reveal.update soon.. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mananneetu

nice updaate..bt its very confusing...kaisa ajeeb sa island hai...!!.
waiting fr suspense to reveal.update soon.. 😃


thanq😊😊😊 thats y it is called mysterious island😉😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
very very mysterious island!!
and u knw what i love mystries
waiting for nxt part
desprratly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
woww ..mysterious. .loved the


I luv it..

itsss awesome. ...
I really like it ...itsss soo nice to read...


keep updating like this. ..

update soon. ...
waiting
waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. ...

thanks for this beautiful update..

Thanks for pm too...

Loadsss off love...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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woww ..mysterious. .loved the


I luv it..

itsss awesome. ...
I really like it ...itsss soo nice to read...


keep updating like this. ..

update soon. ...
waiting
waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. ...

thanks for this beautiful update..

Thanks ..

Loadsss off love...

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