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IT WAS SUPERB!!!! I AM TOTALLY FLATTEND... LOOOVVEED IT!!!!!!! AND LOVE U ALSO YAAR!!!! AND WO PLEASE TRY TO POST LONGER FROM NEXT TIME... PLEASE JUST TRY... I JUST WISH MANIK NANDINI JALDI SE FALL IN LOVE LIKE THE FILM BLUE LAGOON... WILL BE WAITING FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE!!!!!


Thanq vry much.I will try to update long and I didn't see the movie blue lagoon but I am happy u loved my story n for manan to fall in love it takes time sooo u have wait for that😊😊
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👏👏👏awesome update continue soon but longgg chapter⭐️
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👏👏👏awesome update continue soon but longgg chapter⭐️



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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow awesome update...
really interesting...loved manan's cute fights...
hopefully they understand that they need to work together soon...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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wow awesome update...

really interesting...loved manan's cute fights...
hopefully they understand that they need to work together soon...
keep up the good work and continue soon...



thanq and haa they will work together😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice story...
I like the concept...
But obvious manik aur nandini ko akela chod do toh fight toh hogi hi...aur woh bhi ek khali island...hehhehe...😆
Waiting for next update...
Liked the first chapter...
Keep it up...👍🏼
I really appreciate your writing...👏
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Awesome
This is very interesting plot
I love this plot
Totally different
And you are also amazing writer
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Awesome

This is very interesting plot
I love this plot
Totally different
And you are also amazing writer
Continue soon


thanq and that means a lot to me...
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Originally posted by: apurva10

Nice story...

I like the concept...
But obvious manik aur nandini ko akela chod do toh fight toh hogi hi...aur woh bhi ek khali island...hehhehe...😆
Waiting for next update...
Liked the first chapter...
Keep it up...👍🏼
I really appreciate your writing...👏


thanq 😊😊😊
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BELATED HAPPY VINAYAKA CHAVITI.. I am sorry yesterday i was busy isliye no update.THanx for ur support and here goes nxt chapter.enjoy reading
CHAPTER 2:




They both started walking towards the Forest once again to find out from where the sounds are coming. They both in two different places felt like they are walking from years but unable to reach the spot where they can see a tree house with lights in it.
From there standing position they could see everything near to them and that beautiful bright tree house a mile away.
But when their individual attempts to reach the tree results in vain.
Both found it weird and miserable that from past 2hrs they couldn't find anything good to eat nor to drink, not even the destination path.
Above all the distance they see is neither increasing nor decreasing.
Suddenly both heard a voice, they headed in that direction and were astonished with the beauty of spring season around.
While both walking backwards bumped with each other and fell down.
They both were surprised to see each other and also relieved as they got each other company.
They both sat down making themselves comfortable on grass, relaxed for few minutes. They found some juicy red sweet tomatos in bushes, both grabbed one and shared. After such silence and peace they stared at each other.

Nandini pov:

How kind, cute and helpful this monster boy today.
I'm so glad I found his company.
Nandini started smiling and said did you found any path manik?

Manik pov:

How cute this girl today?
Is she always so beautiful with a heartthrob smile ?
Or I have lost my senses in this land ?
Listening to Nandini voice, he came out of his thoughts and started pretending as he didn't listen .

Nandini (calmly with no strength):
kya hua kuch mila yeha se nikalneka..?(sarcastically) humesha bolte rehthe ho ki tuje sab pata hain ab kya hua.?

Manik(trying to be serioud) : ha ha tu tho kuch bolti hee nai na you are such innoncent baby ho hain na.. (Looking at her tired cute face and said) tu bi tho humesha kehti ki tumhare ideas ki wajese hee hum problems se nilkalte hain ab kaha gaye tumhari innovative ideas.. ? (nandini looks angrily towards manik) waise bi kaise meligi tuje.Kuch ideas ane ke liye akal chahiye wo tho tuj mein hain hee nahi...
Manik laughs.

Nandini : ( how innocent he is looking, what a smile he got !! :* awww...)
Again back to her senses, muje akal nai hain?? (Trying to be angry) Tum tho smart ho na phir tum rasta kyu nai doonda ?
It's just because of my ideas we both get saved Mr.monster,
humesha tumhari wajese hum problem mein fus jaate... sab tumhari ghalti hain

Manik:naih tumhariii...

Nandini:nooo bcz of u

Manik:no bcz of u

Nandini:u

Manik:u

Nandini:u

Manik:u

Nandini:manikkk

Manik:nandiniii

Nandini:fine and i dont wana speak to you.
She leaves from there.

And again they start walking in opposite direction...
But to their fate it is of no use.
( Both think I wish I have a company. Their heart feels like both are world's best friends for that day and missing each other alot)
At every path they could see each other, this happens for 4times, 5times , 6 and so on.
Eventually manan giving up their ego (as by know they are totally drained out)
After sometime

Manik:Nandini

Nandini: manik
(Both at a time)
Manik : yeah ! What nandu ?
Nandini : ( what he called me nandu? 0_0 )
Leaving it, nothing manik, you called me for ?
Manik : you also called me, so you tell me first.
Nandini : hmmm... (Silence from her with a smile, signing to manik you have to tell )

Manik: okay, let me tell.
did you notice something?

nandini: what?

manik: every time we both walk in opposite direction but from nowhere we again bump into eachother

nandini:yeah! u noticed one more thing ?
we both want to reach that tree house but as we walk in opposite direction, find each other at some distance.
But both dont find any path.

manik: yeah!!

after that both remain silent for few seconds to tell lets do things together. thinking hows that possible to say this simple words and again they heard sound.

nandini : manik u heard that

manik: yeah!

nandini: what it can be??

manik: i don't know we need to check

nandini: but i am tired manik i cant walk

manik: me too but its getting late nandini we cant stay here whole night. You are not safe ( with concern towards her ) try to walk and i have one idea, without fightng we just will go together rather than individual.

nandini : ( she was from very longtime trying to ask the same) even i dont want to fight. ok lets do it as a team but plz after 10min can we start walking ( making a childish face expression) ?

manik:okay
( smiling to himself looking at her chubby low lying lips, how childish she is)
After 10min they started their walk without making any noise and slow walk...

After 15min both with help of each other directions ( no argument for first time) reached the tree house. With suprise, manan looked at each other as they walked for hours in same path they didnt reach but together they reached in 15min itself..

They both entered the house got shocked !!


what they saw??
will they able to solve the mystery of tree house??how they will survive??lets see..

and this is wrap of 2nd chapter.
I know its kind of streched but its just the begining. I hope u liked it.
Keep supporting me guys.
Thanku everyone.
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