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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its a small intro to my story so that u can understand them how they are with eachother before lan up in island.
Its been 2 yrs they are working together as partners.They went through many countries and discoverd many new things which the world doesn't know.They start randomly and endup in different new places.same way they started fr a new search in a atlantic ocean n unknowingly they reach this island.

Manik and Nandini are at good at their work,they didnt get time to explore each other.Manik doesn't like nandini's childish nature and nandini doesn't like Manik's bossy nature.With this issue they evry now n then endup with an arguement during the work and at last both continue with their respective work.


This how r MANAN before.Now lets see what will be happening with them?😊😊


I know u must be feeling boring while reading bt u must know the character before reading further.And sorry fr the crap.. i will update chapter 1 by evng I hope u like the story..It is a pure ILLUSION stry u can expect some adventure,solving mystries,MANAN small nhok jhok,cute scenes.IT is different frm other stories...

Just need your support to proceed further.
Please give me your feedback in the form of likes & comments. Negative or positive every suggestion is accepted.


Edited by kiranmai_angel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome story...i think it will be interesting...
is it going to be anything like the blue lagoon the latest movie cause it was good and it will suit manan...
can't wait to read more...update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The plot is interesting 😊
It's a kind request, please do not use abrev.
And yes, I would really appreciate your efforts for continuing in writing about Manan.
Please continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aiyoo!!!! I am so excited... I'll Be Waiting... LOVE YOU...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanq and sorry today i cant post because of forum rules as i am new but pacca at night 12 i will post 1st chapter
Edited by kiranmai_angel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome story...i think it will be interesting...

is it going to be anything like the blue lagoon the latest movie cause it was good and it will suit manan...
can't wait to read more...update soon...


thanq and sorry today i cant post because of forum rules as i am new but pacca at night 12 i will post 1st chapter
Edited by kiranmai_angel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anushi3012

The plot is interesting 😊

It's a kind request, please do not use abrev.
And yes, I would really appreciate your efforts for continuing in writing about Manan.
Please continue


thanq and i will try not to use abrev. and sorry today i cant post because of forum rules as i am new but pacca at night 12 i will post 1st chapter
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Originally posted by: ChocolatePie14

Aiyoo!!!! I am so excited... I'll Be Waiting... LOVE YOU...




thanq n sorry today i cant post because of forum rules as i am new but pacca at night 12 i will post 1st chapter
Edited by kiranmai_angel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanq all for supporting me.I hope u like.Finally
Here goes chapter enjoy reading
Chaptr 1:


There is an island where no one lives, it wasn't discovered by any till date.The island is surrounded by water from all sides. Here water is blend of colors and changes with sensitive change in weather.As in like if there is a strong breeze the water color turns to blue, afternoon it looks red,while night it changes to white which is as pure as a dove, when it rains the island fills with darkness, and spring season fills every part of island into green including surrounding water. The every small change in weather transforms the island into new world like HEAVEN on earth also to scariest place. There is one more important thing is, island weather changes very often. Time difference can be minutes,hours,days r years,it is unpredictable.

The most handsome boy and sweet generous Girl who got themselves lost in island are Manik and Nandini.They are vry busy in blaming each other that they didnt notice what and how the changes in water and weather taking place.

Manik : yeh sab tumahari wajese hi hua hain.. (going to say somethng bt cutoff and nandini in between)

Nandini : meri wajese oh! hello Mr.Manik Malhotra yeh sab tumahare wajese hua hain . U didn't listened to me n u r blaming me for all this?.I had told u not to take this route, par nai, tume tho meri har baath ka ulta hee lena hota hain, dekho ab tumhare wajesa hum yeha fusgai hain.

Manik : Acha!! -_- yeh theek hain ab sara blame mujpe hi dalo, kisne bolata mujhe distract karne ko, wo bhi jab mein map study kar rahatha,tumhari uss useless bathoo se meine map galat pada hai,. Upar se yeh ab pata bi nai a hum kaha hain (said angrily).
Damn it !! :|

Nandini : Mein ne distract kiya tume? u idiot mein tume help karna chahteti lekin nai tume tho khud hi padna hain, sab khud hi karna hain, top of it you always think that you know everything. Aise mein tumhare saath mujhe lekar kyu aye ho ? sab tumhara galti hain..( said annoyingly)

Manik (irritatingly) : U know What?? chod tumse baath karna hi bekar hain.
You such a dumb girl ever.

Nandini (angrily) : tho baath hi kyu kar rahe ho mujse? Jao tum apne raste mey hee, mein jaari Mr. Malhotra (saying this she left the place leaving angry manik behind)

Manik also left in opposite direction

NANDINI POV:

samjtha kya hain a apne aapko.. khud ghalti karta hain aur saara blame mujpe dalta hai idiot khahika. mein khud raasta dunde ke yaha se chali jaati hu , aur usse yaha hi sada rahne deti hu.
( I'm not so heartless, I will show that idiot, it's me Nandini who found the way and saved him -_- )

She started moving inside the island

MANIK POV :
pagal kardiya yeh ladki mujhe.. sab iseeke wajhese huwa, aur mai yeha fas gaya. yaar manik chod usse, chal dundte hai kuch raasta yeha se nikalneka.
Whike moving forward, uss nandini kuch se kuch nai hopayegaa sirf chilana aata hain usse.. ufff chod

N he too started moving inside island

after 20 min of walk both of them reached nowhere nor could find something.
After an hour they both drived themselves to a place where they can see a big forest with a tallest tree with a house on its branches glowing so bright just like lights in dawn of sun but both bewildered how to reach that place. Being exhausted, they settled themselves by lying down on the plain green grass filled with tiny water droplets soothing there side face for sometime, after few minutes they heard a melodious voice from some far place.
The voice has startled them.




Thats it for today I hope u all liked it.If there are any mistakes plz excuse my errors.
Please give me your feedback in the form of comments. Negative or positive every suggestion is accepted.
Just need your support to proceed further.
Thank you everyone.
Do comment and like.

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Edited by kiranmai_angel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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IT WAS SUPERB!!!! I AM TOTALLY FLATTEND... LOOOVVEED IT!!!!!!! AND LOVE U ALSO YAAR!!!! AND WO PLEASE TRY TO POST LONGER FROM NEXT TIME... PLEASE JUST TRY... I JUST WISH MANIK NANDINI JALDI SE FALL IN LOVE LIKE THE FILM BLUE LAGOON... WILL BE WAITING FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE!!!!!

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