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Posted: 9 years ago
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its very interesting...
can't wait for them to meet...
keep up the good work and update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
interesting
update the first part soon
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hey plz update the story waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hmmm sounds interesting yrr... Do continue... Will love to read 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys
Thanku for ur love and appreciation like seriously a big big thank you..
So here u go with the update

Chapter 1

MURTHY VILLA
BREAKFAST TABLE

Everyone is seated and are having their breakfast when sailesh breaks the silence.

Sailesh: Hamein aap logo ko kuch batana hai

Kavita: Ji boliye

Sailesh: Kal hamein hamari navya ke liye ek rishta aaya hai

Badi maasi: Accha! Zara ladke ki foto dikhana

Sailesh: Yeh lijiye!! He shows them Cabir s foto

Choti maasi: Ladka toh dikhne me accha hai par uss ki family kaisi hai??

Kavita: Haan ji, Kis family ka hai yeh ladka??

Sailesh: Boht acchi family hai- Malhotras hai. Pehle bachon ku foto dikhatey hai agar unhe pasand aayi toh theek!!

Kavita: Lekin bachein hain kahan??

Bacche: Ham yahan hai!! All shout in unison...Everyone is damn exicted hearing this news

Badi maasi: Shaitano sab sunliye na tumlogon ne!!

Nandini: Ji haan badi maasi!! Aur hamari taraf se toh haan hai Hain na??

Abhimanyu: Filhal ke liye toh baad mein mehi sab investigation karunga

Nandini: Haan karlena bhai!!

Sailesh: Tumlog ready rehna woh aaj shaam 5 baje aayenge hamari navya ko dekhne

Navya: Aai aai captain

Choti maasi: Ab jao ready hogayo!!

With this massive excitement everybody leaves the hall with their own mindsets preparing for the evening!!


Malhotra Mansion
Cabir's bedroom

Mukti: Abey oye kitna soyega!

Manik: Chal ab uth Bhabhi ko dekhne jaan hai!

Cabir: Pehli baat toh woh tumhari bhabhi nahi hai use sirf dekhne jaana hai abhi kuch pakka nahi hai so plz bhabhi toh plz nai haan aur dusri baat mein koi ladki nahi ki time pun sajne sawarney ke liye handsome munda hun jeans aur tshirt pehenlunga toh bhi mujh par fida hojayegi woh!!

Manik: Confidence i like it bro but na over confidence theek nahi hai so ab chal uth!

Mukti: Haan abh uth na dekh mein tere liye uski picture bhi layi hun...Cabir wakes up with a jerk to which they both start laughing

Cabir: Haslo beta jitna hasna hai haslo mera bhi waqt aayega jab batunga! Ladki utni buri bhi nahi hai hain na??

Manik: Haan bhabhi cute toh hai!

Cabir: Manikkk!!

Mukti: Ab cabir yeh joh tera gussa hai na usse dar nahi lagta sacchi mein! Accha ab uth aur tayyar hoja

With that everyone gears up for the preparation and the day passes in blink of an eye!!

Murthy Villa

Sailesh: Its almost time they must be arriving any moment sab ready hai na kavita??

Kavita: Haan saab ready hai an bas tension matlijiye!!

Sailesh: Nandu beta jab ham bulayein toh navya ko lekar aana

Nandini: Ji papa

Abhimanyu: Woh log aagaye!!

Sailesh: Tu upar jaa nandu

Sailesh: Aaye na bhaisahab

Everyone is extremely happy From the malhotras side Mrs and Mr Malhotra are seated on a tge sofa accompanied by buajaan On the other sofa Cabir Manik abd dhruv are seated On the other sailesh and kavita are seated with abhi and the other sofa Mukti aliya and badi bhabhi are seated

The elders involve in introducing their families and engaging in a friendly talk whereas the younger generation involves in cracking jokes on themselves and others

Mr Malhotra: Ab bhaisahab aap navya ko bula lijiye

Sailesh: Ji bilkul Abhi beta jao navya aur nandu ko lekar aao

Abhimanyu: Ji papa! He brings them to the hall and seats them on the sofa

Manik in cabirs ear: Wah bhabhi toh foto se zyada Khoobsurat nikli... cabir punches him slightly on his stomach

The Malhotras enquire navya about herself and her routine

Mr Malhotra: Bhaisahab agar aap bura na mano toh bacchon ku kuch der akele mein bat karne dein.

Sailesh: Ji bilkul Nandu beta jao Cabir aur navya ko upar le jao

Manik in cabirs ear: Yaar acchi hain chodna mat bhabhi ko!!

Cabir: Mere se zyada toh tu exicted dikhraha hai saale!!

Manik: Possesive and all haan!!

Mr Malhotra: Cabir beta jao

Cabir: Ji papa!

After a long 20 min convo Cavya return both seem happy and ready for this relation.

Mr Malhotra:Abhi ham chale hain!!

The malhotras leave the house both the famileies seem happy with this realtion but nothing is confirmed.

Malhotra Mansion

Mr Malhotra: Bhai mujhe toh ladki pasand aayi ab cabir yeh sab main tujh par chod raha hun

Cabir: Ji papa meri taraf se bhi haan hai!!

Manik: Toh phir der kis baat ki kal hi engagement karwa dete hain

Nyonika: Patience Manik aisa hi sab nahi hota hai ham ladke wale hai ladki wlaon ko time lagta hai jawab dene ke liye mein kal haan kehdungi aur unse date bhi lelungi khush??

Muklya: Boht zyada

Mr Malhotra: Sab ko navya pasand aayi na??

Dhruv: Ji chote papa

Badi bhabhi: Haan papa ladki acchi thi

Mr Malhotra: Manik??

Manik: Mujhe toh bhabhi boht pasand aayi

Mr Malhotra: Toh theek!


MURTHY VILLA

Sailesh: Kya khayal hai aapka kavitha cabir ke baare mein??

Kavita: Mujhe toh pasand hai par kal jab aapke behena aayeingi toh ek baar un se bhi puvh lenge bicharo ko aaj subah hi khabar ke baad nikalna pada

Sailesh: Sahi baat kahi tumne Navya tumhe cabir kaisa laga??

Navya: Papa hamein toh accha laga ab sab aapke upar hai

Sailesh: Bacchon tumhe kaisa laga??

NanBhi: Boht accha papa

Sailesh: Acchi baat hai pasand aaya woh!!


So guys hows the update i know its a bit hatke as i have changed it but do tell me cuz i wanna show some arrange marriage drama guys
Plz post ur views
All chappals and tamatars are welcome
Will be waiting!!

Edited by Mananholic982 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
So cute!!!
So glad you continued.
Brother and sister love was soo awsome.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
NYC starting...: D...keep it up!
Cont spoon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
interesting start...👍🏼
awesome...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
awesome story...
navya and abhi are in love...
can't wait to see how manan fall in love...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
mast start hai plz continue fast
👍🏼

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