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cutypie04

@cutypie04

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#561

Amazing superb update dea. ...

Nandu slapped aryaman

Drunk nandu n her cute antics awww

Superb mind blowing

Loved it

Beautifully written

Continue soonnn

Tnx fr d pm

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Urvashimanan

@Urvashimanan

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#562

as always dhasooo part. i liked nandini's hair band. n orphan kids, they were funny. n jiju. but ya manik is a future jiju. n that karoos part. in car, manik fulfilled nandini's wish of listening music. n in party jealous nandini n aryaman slap. this slap I wanted in kyy but its ok, jo waha nai Hua wo yaha ho gaya. n then soha n nandini encounter awesome. n nandini's feeling for manik. then nandini's confession for being orphan. n the kiss. cheek kiss it's ok. but lip wala that was unexpected in this part, but still u did it. manik is regretting for what he did, but nandini being drunk understood manik's situation, that was cute. but still manik has a doubt., if she left him the next morning, she slap him. but manik jo v soch raha h, I think uska ulta hi hoga. n ya u have the calibre to gv long part that too, too soon. for that hats off to u. beautiful update as always . n u know what u can make ur career in this writing field. just a thought. updated soon.

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Rasna

@princi_tia

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#563

Hey, awesome update dear. I enjoyed a lot reading it. Talli nandu is the must dight to watch and her taunts for manik that he doesn't know to praise a girl. Oh shit!! aryamann got a slap from nandu n her faceoff wid soha was mindblowing.
okay, now update next part soon.

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Naj91

@Naj91

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#564

Kya awesome update hai Mawara.I loved it.ahem ahem! !!!!!! ho gaya first kiss.I will not thank u but ur typing system...kyun ki u only said na u did nothing...apne aap type ho gaya...hehe...

Ok the orphanage scene was awesome..jeju ??? Seriously ??? Haha it was too much fun.jeju toh thik tha but kharoos boss...awesome.Nandini's accessories were really very beautiful.

Car scene was so awesome.best part was "Ankhoon main ankhain daal kay..!"...I fully enjoyed it.Manik was laughing...not bad.another best thing was "Nahi ji..!"..."Acha ji?"...I loved it so so so much.

Party was amazing.Manik was feeling proud to be with Nandini..my love Cabira scene was awesome.drunk Nandini is a treat to watch always.but this time it was something more beautiful."MY Manik Sir..!"...aww so cute yar.Nandini's conditions were really superb.Manik ne Nandini ki tareef ki...it was so awesome.

MaNan scene was awesome.their kiss..their hug...Nandini's emotional dialogues..it was really awesome.I loved the emotional part where they became really close.

I wish Nandini ko sab yaad ho and wo regret na kare.
Thanks for pm Mawara
Please update soon
I will be eagerly waiting...