MaNanSS: Dheere Dheere Chap5/PG91/ Link to Thread 2/PG1 - Page 39

do cont soon...just waiting fr ur update

Good work mawara. No matter how sensitive you show Nandini, it feels justified. Bcoz that how you've been potraying the character from the beginning. And its all good and in fact awesome.

The way manik is dealing with his feelings and how cute nandu is being. Now tho I cant wait for the party. Aryaman nandu n manik in the same room... Haha. Very interesting its gonna b. I'm sure you'll make it a good update.

A small request. Don't show that aryaman tried something on nandu n she again cried helplessly n all Na. Bcoz this scene of manik protecting nandu in a prty is there in almost every every ff in this forum. So the whole party n saving scene became too mundane and boring. So pls try anything else.

ThanQ again for wonderful update. You are an awesome writer. Keeg going gal.

It was so cute

Amazing.

superb.

mesmerizing.

fab

full of emotions

I love it you penned it so beautifully.
aww her character is so cute baby doll she is really a innocent soul ...

amazing update
she brought tulips for him
but he scolded though he is happy
rat wala scene is too cute
nandu is listening what his bhai says
I hate that arymann he is staring at our nandu
and making dis comfortable for her
after the meeting manan talk is heart touching
he can't see her crying
she is so innocent dont know anything
I liked nandu's party wear its awesome
he is feeling sad that she is orphan
I think cabir will make him realise and confess his feeling
I am just loving the story
waiting for the party wala update
thanks for pm
cont soon

Awww nandy is so cute that rat scene was amazing
Manik kitna danta hai phir bhi she smile
Cabir bhai is osm
That aryaman i hope he is nt evil yr
Soo emotional talk between manan
Dress was perfect for nandu
Cont soon
Lots of love

Awsum update... luved it... hope nandu teaches a lesson 3 aryaman... luv this child nandini.. poor manik he hve to bear all her tantrums... hahaha...

Diii awsome update!!
Kya update tha...
lovveellyyy!! ❤️ ❤️
Cutesa...thodu emotional sa... adorable wala update tha yeh...
D way manik consoled her... ❤️
Her chotu cute antics...
Everything was jus Adorable...
jys llooovvveseddd d update! ❤️ ❤️
Eagerly waiting for d next 1!
Update soon!
N tyssm fr d pm!
😊