MaNanSS: Dheere Dheere Chap5/PG91/ Link to Thread 2/PG1 - Page 35

Wow beautiful brilliant wonderful update

Manik wanted to control himself around her and stay away from her as possible but she is always in front of him to amaze him with her cute antics and everytime he fall for her innocence yet he dint knew about her and when he saw aryaman staring at her he dint like it and so as she started complaining about him and manik make promises to her and she trusted him and when he knows her reality he just went numb he didn't know what to do now and when he will see her he will be mesmerised

Continue soon and thanks for pm

Wow...der aaye par durust aaye...
Nice chp dr...liked it a lot...
Will manik accept his feelings...?
D way manik said dat nandu isa child ws so cute...
OMG ..nandu lso hv sm feelings fr manik...wl b fun..

N aaryaman...hope he gets a gud punch frm manik..

N d dress n accessories r damn butiful. .
Plz continue soon...
N thnx fr d pm

Oh My God girl you create magic...i mean u make me laugh you make me cry and you make me fall in love with your stories! I just LOVED this update...especially those dheet moments of nandini! Showing him his tongue, calling him karwa, the flowers...everything! And u know even im a complete dheet like you apparently! Just love how manik is falling for DHEERE DHEERE :P when he wanted to console her and protect her...and when they hugged and he said all those wonderful things i was just like AWWW!! cabir is right...she needs him just like he needs her! Though i know the name is dheere dheere i hope they fall head over heals in love super fast and then confess it too...i cant wait for that!! Waiting for the wonderful super romantic manan scenes...hopefully jaldi ayenge :P Dying to know what happens next! Love your work!

this ff is very beautifully penned down
..this has become one of my favorites in this forum in this short span of tym..looking forward to read the coming parts of the story as am sure they will also be as beautiful as the previous ones...
nd I also lyk this version of nandini a lot cute and innocent just lyk a kid..
CONGRATULATIONS for this beautiful new story..

Nice story.

Update was super just loved it

Very very emotinal

Awww so cute n emotional update. Rat scene was so cute. Such mai nandu buhat dheet or cutieee hai. Manik ko karwa bola hahaha bilkul shi bola. Nandu ka drsss tu buhat pretty hai.
Nandu tu full time chocolates khati rehti hai I loved it.
Waiting for next update.
U penned it beautifully dear
Lots of love