Manan SS: Always Yours (( EPILOGUE: PG 91 )) 24 Oct (PMs later)

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divtan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#571

hi...sorry for the late comment...something was seriously wrong with the website or netwrk connection,...i typed a huge comment and it din get posted :( :( :(
anyway finally the fab5 confrontation...awww..everybody went through soo much !!
your song selection was perfect to describe the moments :( :(
yesss..them u and i...all miss cabir even now !!
i cantotally feel mukti right now !!
she is hurt the most !!
dam !!!
Isha it was a very sentimental update !!
well written :)
thank u for the update :) :) :)

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Isha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#572

Originally posted by: divtan
hi...sorry for the late comment...something was seriously wrong with the website or netwrk connection,...i typed a huge comment and it din get posted :( :( :(
anyway finally the fab5 confrontation...awww..everybody went through soo much !!
your song selection was perfect to describe the moments :( :(
yesss..them u and i...all miss cabir even now !!
i cantotally feel mukti right now !!
she is hurt the most !!
dam !!!
Isha it was a very sentimental update !!
well written :)
thank u for the update :) :) :)

No problem sweetie. :*

Thankyou so much! <3

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@kimnana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#573

lovely update ...emotional update remembering kyy season 1

...manan r together they can handle everything ...fab 5 rocks their friendship is beyond comparision as manan love n trust is beyond imagination ...mukti has to be happy

ty for pm... song was 👏👏

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@kimnana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#574

emotional update ...i knew they will react like this ...awesome dude

everything fall into their right place ...mukti double shocked her best friend n lover together

wow celebration time

ty for pm

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asmi.6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#575

Originally posted by: Ishaaa

Mai soch hi rahi thi where are youu :o
Aww, last time you only told me na 'Dont spoil your mood for others'? Toh ab you also dont! Keep smiling :*

And, yes, thanks a ton! :* :*

Yes yes. ! Thank you ! ^_^

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Isha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#576

CHAPTER 12:

After some while, Manik was finally a little calm, thanks to nandini ofcourse.

He was lying on the bed with his head in Nandini's lap. Nandini was running her fingers through his hair.

"Nandini? " Manik said.

Nandini : Hmm?

Manik: Agge kya karna chaiye?

Nandini: Maltab?

Manik: Mukti ...kaise manaau usse?

Nandini : Just give her some time. I'm sure vo maan jayegi.

********

After a while, Alya and Druv approach MaNan. Manik gets up seeing them.
He thought even they are angry with him.

Manik: guys please...please try to understand. I completely realise that it was my fault..but darr gaya tha yar mai. I..I just became selfish. Mere liye tum logon se zyada important koi nahi.

Alya and Druv looked at each other.

They together hugged Manik with a smile. Manik closed his eyes to feel the moment.

They broke the hug and alya hit manik on his shoulder "If once more you do this na..toh i swear I'll actually kill you!!" They all laughed.

After a while, they all sat down to have a chit chat.

Nandini : guys vo mukti ko kaise?

Manik: han..She hates me..Mai ab kaise..?

Druv: Manik tu pagal hai. We're fab 5. Problems atti hai problems jatti hai..but we'll stay together forever.

Alya: and jahan tak Mukti ki baat hai..C'on Manik you know her..vo sensitive hai bahaut...We're her world, she loves us. Vo tumhe hate nahi karti...bas gussa hai tumse!!

Manik: Jungli billi is angry...hmm..Manana padega. (He thought to himself and smiled a little)

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Mukti was sleeping peacefully at Alya's place.
She woke up with a jerk. She was sweating badly. She had a pathetic dream. She lost Manik and Cabir again in the dream.

She was cursing herself for such a bad dream.

Mukti's POV:

Phew. Calm down. Essa kuch nahi huaa hai.

She took out her phone and read Navya's text:

"Tum ghar nahi ayi toh humme tension hone laggi. I know tum issiliye nahi aayi kyuki Manik aur Nandini hai yahan. Mukti!! Kya ho gaya hai tumhe? Humne dekha hai tumhe 4 saal rooz raat fav5 ko yaad karte hue. Humm jante hai tum unhe kitna miss karti ho. Aur ab jab Manik wapas aaya hai toh tum esse muhh phoola ke beethi ho. Yeh kya baat hui bolo?
Accha ek baat batao, since tum usse baat nahi kar rahi ho vo wapas challa jaye na? Bolo?
I'm sure tum nahi bologi. Toh tum essa kyu kar rahi ho? Ek baar thande dimaag se socho. Now is the time Manik ko fab 5 ki sabse zyada zaroorat hogi. He has been deprivated of tum sab ka pyaar 4 saal tak.
Anyways, Hum jante hai tum zaroor samjhogi.
Ghar jaldi anna. Bye. :) "

Mukti just read the text and door bell rang. She opened it.

[[ Tune into "GULABOO- SHANDAAR". You'll love the song!]]

[[Background music. ]]

(She opened the door and found Fab3, Nandini and Navya standing ther there. Manik forcefully got in followed by others. )

Hey surma lagaa ke
Latein uljha ke
Haath jiya pe mal-mal

(Manik sang leaning on Mukti. She shrugged him off and started walking the other direction)

Tere chhajje ke niche khade hain
Phans gaye jaise dal-dal

(Druv held her hand and blocked her way and sang)

Tere chhajje ke niche hi khade hain
Phans gaye jaise dal-dal

(Manik comes forward and twirls mukti around. She gives him an angry glare and looks to the other side. )

Gulabo.. zara itr gira do

(Druv and Manik together sang running behid her)

Gulabo.. zara itr gira do

(Navya ruffled Mukti's hair and sang)

[[Lots of bg music]]

Tauba tauba tu to mitha sa murabba

(Nandini came forward and sang)

Tauba tauba tu to shehad ka dabba

(Manik winked and sang)

Bhen ki takki oye

(Navya sang in a typical bollywood way)

Wow so lucky oye

(Nandini patted Mukti's back and sang)

Sab ki dain aur tu bole dhabba

(Druv followed)

Cocktail menu me bas tera naam

(Alia danced around her and sang)

- in the bar (all repeated )

Poster chhap gaye nikle

(Navya sang)

- ishtehaar (all repeated )

Abki baar (manik sang)

- oye (druv repeated )

Teri sarkaar - oye

Chipak chipak lets kiss you pooh in the car
(alya sang with a full on chirpy expression)

Gulaabo...

(Navya and Nandini sang together)

zara gandh phaila do
(Manik circled his arms around Mukti's shoulder and sang)

Gulaabo.. zara gandh phaila do

Surma lagaa ke
Latein uljha ke
Haath jiya pe mal-mal

(Nandini, Navya, Alia, Druv and Manik formed a group and started dancing together and having fun)

Tere chhajje ke niche hi khade hain
Phans gaye jaise dal-dal

O tere chhajje ke niche hi khade hain
Phans gaye jaise dal-dal

Mukti's POV : Sabko dekho...kitne khush hai...they're laughing together after so long..mai kaise itni saddu banke ghum sakti hun..these people are my life...koi apni life se gussa hota hai kyaa?

Gulaabo.. zara gandh phaila do

(Mukti just came and hugged Manik tightly )

Gulaabo.. zara gandh phaila do

(Others also joined and the group hug reflected smiles everywhere. ) :')

********************

Hello everyone! I know I'm super late with my update. But it's not my fault. College is getting on my nerves, life has seriouslyyy become super busy.
Upar se to be honest I've lost the motivation to write. You guys gave me a splendid response in the beginning of the story, but now it seems you've lost interest. I had a really good track regarding Cabir in mind but then chordo.
i really mean it when I say I've lost all my motivation.
Sorry. But it's fine, I understand :)

Anyways, so this SS ends on a happy note here. :)
Will soon give a longgg epilogue where you'll see Mukbhi and Cabir's tack ka closure.

Thankyou for your support so far.

Also, recently I came across a post in this forum where the person says that writers give dhamki to comment. And people actually wrote crap about this issue.
Guys, really?
I felt hurt by this.

Ps- won't ask you to comment, because its just like raising your expectations and getting nothing in return. :(

Love,

Isha :*

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Mamiza

@kitkat5756

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Posted: 9 years ago

#577

Oi tu yeh story end nahi karne wali hain ... Pagal hain kya ???... We love the story ... Tune cabir ki track ko lekar Jo socha hain we want to read ... Atleast humari kya galti hain yaar ?? Hum regular comments dete hain ... Hum kis baat ki saza mil rahi hain ???? We loved it... Plz do continue with the story plz ...
The update was awesome ...mission Manofying mukti starts ... Manan's moments were very nice ... Aliya-dhruv- manik's moment were very nice ... Uff the song I just loved it ... Superb ... Really loved it ...
Please do contInue ... I really wanna read the thought that u has decided for cabir ... Then reunion of mukhbhi toh baki upar se manan ja romance adhuri reh gayee... So continue kar story ko ...plz sochna bhi maat end karneki wo bhi itna jaldi toh bilkul bhi nahi ... Love u itna Sara ..tc... With lots of love and hugs