Manan SS: Always Yours (( EPILOGUE: PG 91 )) 24 Oct (PMs later)

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Isha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: puccha
Hey ishu..
I msorry very very very very very sorry...
M bohot late hu.. Maine last update pe bhi comment nahi kia.. Par I will compensate..
Coming to updates..
Part 11 :
Fab 4 is back.. Yayyiiee.. So happy..
Mukti outburst zaroori tha..
Feeling sad for mukti n about others..
Mjhe rona aa gaya..
Song perfectly fit ho gaya situation pe..
In short loved dat update..
Now chapter 12:
Pehle to m gussa inni jaldi khatam kar dia story ko.. Gandi bachi.. Arre atleast mukhbi ko to mila deti..par koi na epiloufe mein mila dena.. Hehe..
Now coming to update..
Hmm.. Sochna padega.. Hehe..
It was awesome yaar as usual..
Loved their bond.. D way they all understand each other..
In last tune mera abhi favourite song attach kia gulabo..
Just love wid dis song..
Thank u thank u thank u thank u so much..
Love u so much..
Meri taraf se ek tight wali jadoo ki jhappi..
Ab jaldi se epilouge de..
Chal bye.. Take care..
Thanks for pm..
Lots of love..
Puccha.. :)

Haha I know the reson for your delay of comment. Khud jo likhna shuru kar diya hai madam ne. ;)

Hehe, kidding. It's cool. :*

Olalala, I'll miss your long comments man. Thankyou so so much, lots of hugs and kisses to you. :*

Love,

Isha :*

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Posted: 9 years ago

#592

lovely dear ...mukti u can't live without ur best friend

the choice of song 👏

ty for pm

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asmi.6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: Ishaaa

Talking about regular commentors? Really?
As i said, the story started with a bang, got a great response. But slowly people left.
Only 3 regular commentors I had asmi, only 3.
Even you're in college and even you know it's internals ka season abhi. I barely get time to sleep properly and relarelaxation toh bhul hi jao. And in the LITTLE time I get, it becomes impossible to clear my mind and write sosomething meaningful.
Trust me ch11 and 12 I only wrote for you three. I know fest noone awaits it.

I'm sorry. I know its unfair to you.
Think about my side of the story aswell. Anyways,take care. :*

Love,
Isha :*

Ps- Being honest, bura laga tumhare comment ka. Sorry.

I wanted you to feel bad about my comment but not in a negative sense. I'm sorry for being so impulsive and sorry. I really am.

It's just that you started this story with a thought of bringing back Manik even before parth actually came back to the show you have me a ray of hope. And then, you agreed to bring cabir back too which I am afraid would still not happen in the show. Reading your story and just the mere thought of seeing everything getting fine through your story always brought smile on my face ! :) that's the soul reason I had put that comment. J seriously had no other intension. I really really sorry.

Because yes, I can put myself in your shoes. The college is actually being too hectic these days. I know it totally. I don't even get time to read the stories in time, so how could I expect you to write and that too when the response wasnt as much as you expected. Infact, i myself started a fanpage on instagram few days bavk but i almost thought of giving it up in just 4 days when the response wasn't good and also because I don't get enough time to keep with it.

But of course, I didn't think or care about all of this when I wrote my comment earlier. That's really stupid of me. I feel so bad about it right now. Please please forgive me.

And all the very very best to you.

In case you plan to begin with something new, just let me know :)

Sorry again!

Lots n lots of love.

Ashmita <3

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Isha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#594

Originally posted by: asmi.6

I wanted you to feel bad about my comment but not in a negative sense. I'm sorry for being so impulsive and sorry. I really am.
It's just that you started this story with a thought of bringing back Manik even before parth actually came back to the show you have me a ray of hope. And then, you agreed to bring cabir back too which I am afraid would still not happen in the show. Reading your story and just the mere thought of seeing everything getting fine through your story always brought smile on my face ! :) that's the soul reason I had put that comment. J seriously had no other intension. I really really sorry.
Because yes, I can put myself in your shoes. The college is actually being too hectic these days. I know it totally. I don't even get time to read the stories in time, so how could I expect you to write and that too when the response wasnt as much as you expected. Infact, i myself started a fanpage on instagram few days bavk but i almost thought of giving it up in just 4 days when the response wasn't good and also because I don't get enough time to keep with it.
But of course, I didn't think or care about all of this when I wrote my comment earlier. That's really stupid of me. I feel so bad about it right now. Please please forgive me.
And all the very very best to you.
In case you plan to begin with something new, just let me know :)
Sorry again!

Lots n lots of love.
Ashmita <3

Finally! :p thanks a ton for understanding :p

It's fine don't say sorry, I understand that the story is as close to your heart as it is to mine. I totally understand.

I'll always cherish the fact that 'Always yours' gave me a friend like you. <3

Will be giving an epilogue soon and also, I already have a plot for an OS/TS in mind.

So yeah, I love writing, would keep doing so in some form or another. ;)

Love you too :*

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Posted: 9 years ago

#595

Originally posted by: Ishaaa

Haha I know the reson for your delay of comment. Khud jo likhna shuru kar diya hai madam ne. ;)

Hehe, kidding. It's cool. :*

Olalala, I'll miss your long comments man. Thankyou so so much, lots of hugs and kisses to you. :*

Love,
Isha :*

Hehe... Ab maine socha ki q na tjhe shock dedu khud likhna start karke.. Btw maine reply kar diya he tjhe.. 😆

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asmi.6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#596

Originally posted by: Ishaaa

Finally! :p thanks a ton for understanding :p
It's fine don't say sorry, I understand that the story is as close to your heart as it is to mine. I totally understand.

I'll always cherish the fact that 'Always yours' gave me a friend like you. <3

Will be giving an epilogue soon and also, I already have a plot for an OS/TS in mind.
So yeah, I love writing, would keep doing so in some form or another. ;)

Love you too :*

Thanks to you for accepting my apology :)

And yeah, you keep writing and I promise to keep supporting ! :D

After all, that's what friends are for ! :')

Will be waiting ... :*

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Isha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#597

Sneak Peak 1:

Jisse dhoondta hoon main har kahin
Jo kabhi mili mujhe hai nahin
Mujhe jiske pyaar par ho yakeen
Woh ladki hai kahan

(Cabir sang in his fultoo nautanki andaaz to tease navya)

Jisse sirf mujhse hi pyaar ho
Jo yeh kehne ko bhi taiyaar ho

(He next came and sat next to Navya and sang to tease her more)

Suno tum hi mere dildaar ho
Woh ladki hai kahan

(He looked at her and she wasn't getting teased at all)

Jo tumhaare khwaabon mein hain basi
Woh haseen murti pyaar ki
Milegi tumhe kabhi na kabhi
Zara dekho yahan wahan

(Navya sang in a proud tone because deep down she knew where this was going)

Chalo dhoondte hain hum kahin
Woh pari woh hoor woh naazneen
Jisse dekho to kaho tum vahi
Arre yeh to hain yahan

(Nandini circled her hands around Navya and sang smilingly winking at Cabir)

Jaane kyoon khayaal aaya mujhe
Ke woh ladki kahin tum to nahin

(He came close to Navya, scratched his head and pointed towards her)

Tum mein hain woh saari khubiyaan
Tha jinko dhoondta main har kahin

(Cabir finally smiled and sang these two lines directly from the heart..Navya windened her eyes at such public flirting of Cabir)

Tumhe dhoka lagta hai ho gaya
Mujhe hain samajh liya jaane kya

(She sang hesitantly)

Na main hoon pari, na main apsara
Karo tum na yeh ghumaan

(She turned towards him, hit his head with her hand lightly and all laughed )

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Sneak Peak 2:

Manik's POV:

Oh dear god. She looks heavenly beautiful. I..I just can't stop gaping at her.

He was staring at her with an open mouth.

Nandini did notice this.

"Hmm, Mr.Malhotra, lots of surprises waiting for you tonight. It'll be the best day of our life, I promise." She smiled thinking this to herself.

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Oh ek min ek min. Cabir? CABIRR?

Yooo. He is alive. Kaise kab kahan
Hahaha. Lots of questions naa.
Epilogue mein sab milega babies.
Also, MaNan consummation scene. ;)

Stay tunned. Lots in store for you guys. ;;)

I wish we could have continued all this through chapters and now I will have to fit in all this in one update. Anyways. :p

PS: This is the epilogue. I've planned a lot for you guys. If the response to this post isn't satisfactory, I'm really sorry, I'll be forced to PM it to the ones who comment. Extremely sorry if this sounds rude, but when I work hard for you guys, i do expect some response from you. Waise bhi last bit naa. Pleaseee. :)

Puccha, Aasmi and Kitkat, Love you guys. *hugs* <3

Love,
Isha :*

Edited by Ishaaaaaa - 9 years ago