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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...
MaNan ka dinner on water...
Loved the setup...
The ship...the water... The dinner...
Their talks ...
"I like u" yehhh...
Waiting for the next part...
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
first of all I m sooo srrryyy dear..u send pm n maine para hi nahi ..but now I read it in one..it's awsm amazing story..plzzz don't mind n plzzz pm me...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dua..
Nandini realised her love for manik..
Interesting teaser..
Waiting fir next update..
Update soon..
Thanks for pm..
Bye.. Take care..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Super duper amazing ...wow u nailed it ...pic were equally amazing ...n finally manik confessed ...waiting for nandus reaction m so excited ro read more ...update soon
Love
Samyukta
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow nandani is planning evil
the promo is amazing
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow ...interesting promo...love u ...
Aab jaldi dono confess karde ...waiting egarly
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Posted: 9 years ago
It is adorable... enjoying while reading... u must not end this ... it is cute ... and ya thanks for the pm ... i just read your message today and this ss also ... and the pic sthey are awesome .. and like cherry on the cake👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a beautiful story dua
Hehehe MaNan stuck again & again in Dubai
Manik took nandini for dinner & said he like her cute part.
Waiting to know how Nandini confess.
Pm me when u update next part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 5

Manik came close to her... he was facing her back... he hold her from her waist... it was atype of back hug
Nandini wispered: "Manikkk...!!!!"
Manik being Manik can't control himself and he placed a soft gentle kiss on her shoulder
Nandini can feel his touch on her body.. his touch was sending shivers in her body
Manik wispered in her ear: "I LIKE YOU"

Nandini was shocked to hear his words
Nandini turned around and look into his eyes
Manik looking in her eyes again
Manik: "i really like you... Nandini"
Nandini was hell shocked and was not able to understand what was going on... she was only able to speak
Nandini: "Manik...!!!"
Manik: "hey.. don't get worried... i just wanted to say what was in my heart... u don't need to answer or anything... no one is forceing u"
Nandini was not able to understand what's going on or what she should do..
Manik: "i just wanted to share my feelings... u can take your time"
Nandini was having tears in her eyes it was due to happiness

Baatein kuch ankaahe si
Kuch ann suni se honelagi
Kabu dil pe raha na
Hasti humari khone lagi
woooh Woooh wooo woo wooh
Shaayad yehi hai Pyaar
Shaayad yehi hai Pyaar

She never understand what she feels for Manik... the feeling which was growing day by day for Manik was unknown for her
but when he described his feelings Nandini was happy she was now getting aware of what she feels for him
Manik: "hey plz relax don't cry Nandini... listen just imagine main ne kuch kaha nai their is nothing such... we are just friends as we were... hain na ?"

Keh de mujhse Dil mein kya hai
Aisa bhi kya guroor
Tujhko bhi to ho raha hai
Thoda asar zaroor
ho Yeh Khaamoshi jeene na de
Koi to baat ho

woooh Woooh wooo woo wooh
Shaayad yehi hai Pyaar
Shaayad yehi hai Pyaar

Nandini smiled and nodded her head and Manik get relaxed
Manik went from their giving Nandini some alone time


Nandini was standing on the side holding the wood handle closing her eyes thinking

Nandini: "me too Manik really like u... but it's too early i'm just afraid what if it dosen't end on a good note.. firstly i was not able to understand what i was feeling for u but now when u said i know exactly what i feels for u"
Nandini was smiling broadly thinking all this

Baatein kuch ankaahe si
Kuch ann suni se honelagi
Kabu dil pe raha na
Hasti humari khone lagi
woooh Woooh wooo woo wooh
Shaayad yehi hai Pyaar
Shaayad yehi hai Pyaar

Nandini: "i love u Manik... i know tum ne sab slowly start krne ki koshish ki u were afraid of my reaction... tum ne mere liye itna kiya but now it's my turn.. tum ne mujhe kaha nai k u love me but phir bhi keh kiya... ab main kahon or directly kahon gi."
Nandini opened her eyes and she was again feeling the cool breeze and smiling thinking what she should do..."
Nandini: "now it's my turn my love... kal rat ko hum wapis ja rahe hain to kyun na kal sham ko bataya jae?? yup ye bilkul theek rahe ga.. main kal ose bataon gi...but bolon gi kiya?? .. jo dil main ho ga Nandini.. os ne like u kaha because ose nai pata tha k what i fell but mujhe to pata hai na k what he feels...hehehe"
Nandini gave an evil smile thinking of her plan
Nandini was going down staires towards Manik when she found him coming up..
Mnaik: "Nandini u ok?"
Nandini: "yup i'm im fine u don't worry"
Nandini said with a smile and Manik was a bit relax now.
Manik: "good... u don't need to take anything seriously"
Nandini: "Manik jo bhi it's absolutely fine."
Manik: "acha chalo hum wapis pochane lage hain... 5 min reh gae hain"
Manik moved towards stairs and Nandini held his hands
Nandini: "abhi 5 min hain na lets stay here it's so beautiful here... open your hands and close your eyes and feel this moment Manik... it's awsum"
now Manik was sure that she is fine as his Nandini was back..
They both were now back in hotel and moving towards their room

Nandini: "Manik thank you.. i really enjoyed the dinner... like i have never gone to a like this it the best of my life"
Manik smiled: "i'm u like it"
As usual both went to room and slept one on bed and the other on couch
____________

AT BREAKFAST

Manik: "Nandini aj 2 pm gari ai gi pic krne we are going to desset saffari"
Nandini: "to aj desert saffari ka plan banaya hai??"
Manik: "han"
Nandini: "hum wapis kab ain gy?"
Manik: "rat ko"
Nandini: "likin rat ki to flight hai na?"
Manik: "flight rat ko hai bohat late.. matlab subha or dinner k bad hum wahan se a jain gy.."
Nandini: "acha matlab 2 pm se dinner tak ... humara sara day wahin p guzre ga?"
Manik: "yup... wahan bohat kuch hai pura day guzar jae ga"
Nandini: "theek hai"
Nandini selfthought: "Manik to aj wahi tumhain kahon gi... i know pehla step this time mujhe lena parhe ga.. kyun k tum nai lo gy mere reaction k dar se"
Manik: "to ready rehna 2 pm"
Nandini: "ok"
____________________

AT 2PM

a jeep came and they both settled in it...the jeep drove towards the dessert they stopped at many stops gossiping having fun eating and feeling the moments with each other
they reached desert and the they driver changed the tyres
they entered the dessert and as instructed by driver everyone tighten their seat belts (there were also other people in the jeep as it was supposed to bhi 8 people, 1 driver 2 manan 5 other)
now the ride starts there 6 other jeeps with them...


the jeep was going round and round on the sand of the dessert and they were bumping into each other they were getting jolts
whenever it takes a sharp turn both fell on each other sometimes Manik on Nandini and sometimes Nandini on Manik
they enjoying their cozy moments and the crazy ride...
Nandini selfthought: "Mr.Manik Malhotra u will never forget this day... it's gonna be really fun"

Now due to the countinous ride now Nandini's head was going round and round she was feeling like to vomit
Nandini: "Manik... mujhe kuch ho raha hai... this ride is really getting on my head..."

so update is here...sorry pehle hi... mujhe pata hai dono ka confession sunana tha ek sath likin vo or bhi beautiful way main ho ga so plz wait and i'm sorry
their desert saffari tour starts and it will also bring some cute moments...
what will happen After desert saffari?? their Dubai tour will end ?? this SS will end?? what u think??
if u think this will end then let me tell u that their is many more to come after this...
so tell me how was this chapter?? i know it was not that good but plz tell han criticism is also welcome...
and guys i want the same response as chapter 1 plz...

keep smiling
stay blessed
take care
love
Dua...
Edited by dua_arafat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update,i was just looking at ur thread and read it in a few minutes...and its really amazing

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