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Posted: 9 years ago
itsss nice ..I just love it .actually this story us so much funn.. really nice story ...I just love it ...ittsss tooo awesome ... seriously . but ts kyu...inni choti ...ss bnaa do na..itss gonna be fun... but that's obvious ur decision... just love it .. keep updating like this ... update soon...waiting for next update eagerly impatiently ... thanks for this update...thanks for efforts too.. .lotsss of luv ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Grt update dear
Manan r cute
Nandani's thoughts were like awwwhhh nandu no baby aesa nhi sochte wo b itni jaldi...hehe
Update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 2B

It was evening now

Nandini: "Manik mujhe fountain show dekhana hai"
Manik: "han mujhe to koi problem nai...waise bhi hum ne or kya krna hai.. chalo"
Nandini excitedly: "han chalo chalo...yes"
Manik: "tum to choti bachi ki trh excited 'ho rahi ho jo pehli dafa fountain show dekhane ja rahi hai"
Nandini: "to main first time hi ja rahi hon
Manik: "tum ne pehle dekha nai? I thought tum ne family k sath dekha ho ga"
Nandini: "dekhana tha likin rishab ki waja se... khair choro na abhi chalo?"
Nandini dragged Manik with her...

Now they were out of Dubai Mall were fountain show is gonna start...
Nandini was excited like a kid
Fountain Show started and it was amazing


Nandini was amazed by it
Manik: "u like it"
Nandini jumping excited jumped on Manik and kissed on his cheek
Nandini: "Manik i love it... it's so beautiful..."
Manik was shocked by his sweet gesture but he was loving it...
Manik: "chalo dinner time"
Nandini: "but itni jaldi kyun? abhi to time hai na?"
Manik: "abhi dinner kr lete hain na phir bad k liye bhi plan hai"
Nandini: "tum ne subha kaha tha k rat k liye plan hai... are u talking about that?"
Manik: "yes"
Nandini: "to batao na"
Manik: "main ne kaha tha na abhi nai rat ko"
Nandini: "to rat to ho gai hai"
Manik: "acha chalo surprise hi samajh lo..."
Nandini with sad face: "acha... chalo dinner krte hain"

After dinner Manik took her to a place (actually it's a night club)


Now that I have captured your attention
I wanna steal ya for a rhythm intervention
Mr. TSA*, I'm ready for inspection
Sh-sh-show me how you make a first impression

Nandini: "Manik ye kaha lae ho?"
Manik: "Night Club"
Nandini: "kyun?"
Manik: "tum pehle kisi night club gai ho?"
Nandini: "Nai"
Manik: "mujhe pata tha isi liye laya... family k sath to gai nai ho gi to socha mere sath chalo u will enjoy"
Nandini: "to ye tha tumhara RAAT ka plan?"
Manik: "yup..."

Oh, oh
Can we take it nice and slow, slow
Break it down and drop it low, low
Cause I just wanna party all night in the neon lights 'til you can't let me go

Manik: "didn't u like it?
Nandini: "waise ek bat bataoon?"
Manik: "han"
Nandini: "mujhe aesi jagah ane ka bohat shok tha likin kabhi ai nai...hehehe"
Manik: "i knew it... u would like it..."
Nandini: "thanks"

I just wanna feel your body right next to mine
All night long
Baby, slow down the song
And when it's coming closer to the end hit "Rewind"
All night long
Baby, slow down the song

Oh oh oh oh
Yeah, baby, slow down the song
Oh oh oh oh
Yeah, baby, slow down the song

Manik: "hey... would u like to dance??"
Nandini: "i love dance... to obviously"
Manik forwarded his hand towards Nandini for dance
Nandini took his hand and both went on the dance floor

If you want me I'm accepting applications
So long as we can keep this record on rotation
You know I'm good with mouth-to-mouth resuscitation
Breathe me in, breathe me out
So amazing

Both were dancing, enjoying the moment
Enjoying each others presence

Oh, oh
Can we take it nice and slow, slow
Break it down and drop it low, low
Cause I just wanna party all night in the neon lights 'til you can't let me go

Nandini was dancing, enjoying the moment
and Manik was adoring her
A smile appreared on his face

I just wanna feel your body right next to mine
All night long
Baby, slow down the song
And when it's coming closer to the end hit "Rewind"
All night long
Baby, slow down the song

Manik held Nandini by her waist and pulled her towards him
he then entwined their hands and Nandini put her hands on his shoulder
she can feel his hot breath on her neck

Oh oh oh oh
Yeah, baby, slow down the song
Oh oh oh oh
Yeah, baby, slow down the song

Manik twirled her and gathered her in his arms


Breathe me in, breathe me out
The music's got me going
Breathe me in, breathe me out
No stoppin til the morning
Breathe me in, breathe me out
You know I'm ready for it
For it, for it!
Yeah!

Both were so close to each other
Both were just inches apart
Both were lost in each others eyes

Breathe me in, breathe me out
The music's got me going
Breathe me in, breathe me out
No stoppin til the morning
Breathe me in, breathe me out
You know I'm ready for it
For it, for it!
Yeah!

And they both end up kissing each other Passionately

I just wanna feel your body right next to mine
All night long
Baby, slow down the song
And when it's coming closer to the end hit "Rewind"
All night long
Baby, slow down the song

Oh oh oh oh
Yeah, baby, slow down the song
Oh oh oh oh
Yeah, baby, slow down the song


so finally ch 2 lamba wala (A+B) updated
it took me so long to write
hit like button
or bohat mehnat ki hai likhane main
so do tell how's it and cz i love reading your comments
and what u thing of RAAT??? unexpected haan??
and sudden kiss... think think age kya kiya ho ga??
is update main bohat mehnat or time laga so plz ab koi ye na kahe next bhi jaldi karon kyun k kal bohat busy day hai or school bhi open so next update jaldi nai
and i love u so much my lovely readers jo itna wait krte hain
or lovely wishes dete hain
this song is of selena gomez slow down the song and the previous one was her lambha tera mera from zanjeer
Stay Blessed
Take Care
Love
Dua...

Edited by dua_arafat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear
U r such cuttie yr
U took so much effort to write dis for us so its our gesture to return u dis love by commenting on it and on ur efforts ...
We will wait for ur next update...
And ya nandu's excitement can amaze anyone she is so sweet and bubbly... :)
Keep smiling
Stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
Raat :D
What song is that?
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

Raat :D
What song is that?


song is slow down the song by selena gomez
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome...update...
Mindblowing...
Superb...loved it...
Nandu is so exicted...and happy...lovely...and song was superb...loved it...
koi baat nhi...next update der se dena...we don't have problem...😉
U are Awsome...Love u
Thanks for PM...
Cont Soon
CutiePie_Me thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Liked the update very much
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome dua
waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heyy dear... U r writing amazing...
Nandu character is amazing...
Let see what else u have for US..
Thanxx for pm

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