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AsthaVerma92

@AsthaVerma92

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Wow yaar wat a promo plz update chapter doon

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Shilp_s1

@Shilp_s1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Ohhh.. M loving ur storyeee veyii veyii muchh.. 4 d first tym m commenting..
U r sooo full of words yarr.. Loving d way u r sketching mature understanding full of life MANIK n our sweet
Cute curious, want 2 know abt lyf n most imp very fast learner NANDINI. The definitions u r giving abt lyf, feelings, love r BEAUTIFUL .
M eagerly waiting 4 next update n so on d trail of nexttt...
I 9 good writing take some tym... Phir bhi pls don't take much tym.. Here we r waiting ..

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Yashu

@yashu_varshney

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Very nice update kavyuuu...

So sry bacha...

Now my dad is ill..

And he is behaving like a kid..

He wants everyone around him..

And we all r like..

Dad plzzz...

Stop behaving like a kid...

So na sorryyy...

And I missed u so much re...

Abhi I read the story and now I have to go jaldi se..

But waittt...

I still haven't said anything about the update..

Manik is being so stubborn and all in love lover boy..

His tactics to please nandini are too much seriously..

How can someone be like that stubborn..

Oh God...

And nandu..

She is toh amazing girl..

Not crying but eating chocolates and ice cream..

And dressing up beautifully..

Making ur friends wait outside so u can dress up first..hehe.

You go girl...

I like u so much ms. nandini moorthy..

And then comes that walk..

Manik again trying to be with her..

He is seriously too much..

And that restaurant CID wala dimag..🤣

Then his all time favourite thing..to do philosophy talking..

Like u and me..hehe..

And his reason for her girl..

Wowww..

Adorable..

Chooo cuteee...

Manik would have been in front of me na at that time..

I would have pulled his cheeks so hard..

Plzz na kavyuuu make me meet this manik..plzzz...:P:P

And nandini blushing blushing..

U can't resist her girl..

Admit it..

Thanku sooo much for the update princess amidst all the thongs happening..

I hope this comment will be able to make u smile thoda sa..??????

Everything will be fine soon..

Don't let go ur hope..

Miss u so much re..

Keep writing..

Stay blessed..

Loads of love..

Yashu..

P.S.: Will comment on you become my story thodi der baad or kal pakka promise..:D:D

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@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

nice yar. I like the promo... itsds just amazing. . let's see now what happens... u r just a mindblowing beautiful writer. ...wat a dialogue u write.. just fab.. I hope now ur health is fine... be healthy. ... n yaa all the best for examss.. :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) ;-) lotsss of luv...