#2 She resides in me.Manan ff(THREAD 3 PG 1) 24 nov

ayush

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Posted: 9 years ago

#391

Hey kaju..first of all let me ask u warna m fir bhul jaugi how r u dear..
I hope u r fine now..
Ok this is going to be my 200th post which I saved for ur story bcoz it was ur story on which I posted my first comment so I thought to complete my 200th post on ur story only..
Update was good..
I feel lyk crying sometime seeing manan lyk dis..
Kabhi kabhi to lagta h ki manan ka past hi acha tha..
Like srsly so emotional update.. Present wala..
Poem is too good..
I read ur stories on insta too but kya karu aaj kal mere boss cum dad ne meri jaan le rakhi h ki main comment hi nahi kar paati sirf padhke like thok k bhaag jati hu to sorry for late reply..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm..
Get well soon..
Bye.. Take care..
Lots of love..
Puccha.. :)

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shruti_soniii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#392

very touchiii...

plzzz... disclose the suspense yaar...

I feel like crying...
when I see manan in this state...

plzz bring them back...

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pujadas187

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Posted: 9 years ago

#393

Awsm update...
Maa-kid thing ws beautifully written..nd whn manik address himself as a stranger..tht ws soo emotional..feeling lik crying...
Manik hurt nandu beyond repair..thts why nandu cant forgive him..though they love each othr vry much...
Nd coming to flasback..mahira's plan back fire..kaise hue ae..waiting eagrly.. Continue soon...

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Sm0405

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Posted: 9 years ago

#394

U know it was as usual ... Amazingly awesmmm ...

I loved the whole thing ... Specially the poems both said fr each other ... Really felt bad fr Manik ... His words ... " mai nhi chahta..ap ..ek ajnabi ki wajah se pareshan ho jae..".

Showed how much hurt he is by the way Nandini jst addressed him ... N Nandini was also shocked to see his this side ... When he started going, pain was clearly visible tht he was bearing due to those burns ... Bt Nandini was helpless ... He refused to take her help ...

Then the flashback ... It was again superb ... Matlb Manik as already planned everything fr his so called "girlfriend " ...nd Nandini she was concerned fr him ... As she knew the intentions of Mahira ...

She went to save him, bt when she reached the room Manik was nt there ... She searched fr him bt he was nowhere ...

This was becoz Manik was fully ready to execute his plan ... He his plan succeeded ... They caught her red handed ... With Cabir replacing Manik in the bed ... He he he he ...

Now toh she is gone fr sure ... Coz Manik se panga, is nt gud at all ...

Waiting fr the nxt update to know what happened further ... Plz post sooonnniishh ...

N thanks fr the pm ...

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Sm0405

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Posted: 9 years ago

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U know it was as usual ... Amazingly awesmmm ...

I loved the whole thing ... Specially the poems both said fr each other ... Really felt bad fr Manik ... His words ... " mai nhi chahta..ap ..ek ajnabi ki wajah se pareshan ho jae..".

Showed how much hurt he is by the way Nandini jst addressed him ... N Nandini was also shocked to see his this side ... When he started going, pain was clearly visible tht he was bearing due to those burns ... Bt Nandini was helpless ... He refused to take her help ...

Then the flashback ... It was again superb ... Matlb Manik as already planned everything fr his so called "girlfriend " ...nd Nandini she was concerned fr him ... As she knew the intentions of Mahira ...

She went to save him, bt when she reached the room Manik was nt there ... She searched fr him bt he was nowhere ...

This was becoz Manik was fully ready to execute his plan ... He his plan succeeded ... They caught her red handed ... With Cabir replacing Manik in the bed ... He he he he ...

Now toh she is gone fr sure ... Coz Manik se panga, is nt gud at all ...

Waiting fr the nxt update to know what happened further ... Plz post sooonnniishh ...

N thanks fr the pm ... Sry fr late commenting also ...

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Addrita Islam

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Posted: 9 years ago

#396

after many days..had to read 4 updates together..emotinal..but past events were awesome
And ur poems..what to say abt them..they are so touching
Take care
Get well soon

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manan_0711

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Posted: 9 years ago

#397

Ty for d pm...am so sorry am again late to lyk n comment...

cumin to d update...

dat was really emotional before d flashback...

"Maa n kid" aww I really love it...

but I hope everything 'll b fyn soon between manan...

nw flashback...

Woh manik malhotra ko koi apne control mai nai kar sakta...

nyc planning mahira..

but he is manik malhotra she is playing with...

hehe nandu didn't lyked manik but still was concerned for...

haha manbir rock...

can't wait for d nxt update...

but plz take care of yourself...

recover soon n update a bang on chapter...

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Sonalmanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#398

Woo congratulations dear... I m really fond of ur ff... When ever I take a break from my studies,I always open if and read ur ff... Pls do send me pm...

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divyagarg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#399

Its been a very very long time more than 10 days...u have updated innayatein, y aren't u updating rest of the 2 specially she resides in me...plz update asap

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Kajal

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Posted: 9 years ago

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