#2 She resides in me.Manan ff(THREAD 3 PG 1) 24 nov

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CutiePie_Me

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Posted: 10 years ago

#321

I liked the update.. nd Get Well Soon Kajal..

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#322

Oh dear I hope you will fine soon. 😛❤️.

Awesome update as always up to the mark.

Nandni can't see him in pain. .

His condition is also the same.

It's heart wrenching convo. ..between them. 💔.

Yeh kaisa pyar hai jo dard deta hai. .

Or sakoon le leta hai..😭.

Your poem was very beautiful.

Ab dono main pyar or dard ka rishta hai. ..

Ek ek word es chapter ka dil ko shoo gya. 😭.

In flash back. ...she save manik. .

But still he betrayed her.😭💔. I can't believe it.

Dear your story is reached too my heart. 😛👏👏.

I love this story from bottom of my heart.

Thanks for sharing this very emotional and beautiful

Love story.

Get well soon. 👍🏼😛

God bless you.

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millie

@millie17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#323

Nice chp..
Manan r in so much pain...
Feel like crying fr them..seriously...
D flashbck is nice... plz gv sm tashan in d flashbck...
Although it hurts hr..but nandu cn nvr stop hrslf frm lvng manik...
Hope manik corrects his mistk soon n evrythng n evry1 bcms hpy hpy...

Plz continue soon...n thnx fr d pm...
U tk cr of urslf...bye...

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Partholic_Girl

@Partholic_Girl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#324

Beautiful update dear
Their past memories were really beautiful
Ab mujhse vi manik ka dard saha nahi jata
hope to see them together
Maa and kid both are in deep pain
do something so that they feel of sharing their pain to eaxh other together now
But the update really touched me
Stay blessed
Love u
N continue soon

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kiranmai_angel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#325

awesome update

loved it..

both manan can feel each other pain but yet cant get together.. so sad..

but waiting how they will be unite again...

continue soon

and get well soon...😊😊😊

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anya

@anya21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#326

Fabulous update!!!

loved it ...

how manik's one word "MAA" affect nandini soo much?

nd d past sequence r awesome...

nd in present...nandini can feel manik's presence..no matter how much she hates him...

nd she can't bear his pain...

u expressed those feeling soo well...

nd back 2 past...

i love dat mahira's part...

how nandini wanted 2 help manik...

nd wat happened wen she entered room aftr mahira left?

excited 2 know abt dat...

cont soon...

nd take care of ur health also...

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Pragya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#327

as alwys jz awesome...

i love it wn Manik call her MAA...it sweet thng u added t ur ff...

lovely updte wd flashbck...

bth in pain bt hurt...

loved d poem...

waiting to noe hw mahira gt trapped n wt xctli hapnd...

take care of ur health...

thnx fr d pm...

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Danny92

@Danny92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#328

Nice update

Both manik nd nandini r in pain but one is determinant to get back nd the other so hurt that she cannot take a chance nd forgive him but her love fr him is so pure

H wil manik get back her ?

Nd the flashback was gud nd how did manik nd cabir came to know that his drink is spiked

Continue sooonnn

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Inaya

@Cute_Inaya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#329

Hello dear...

Plz take care of ur health... Inshallah u will fine soon...

Weather is too bad plz take rest...and take medicine on time..

Plz next update tab krna jab puri tarha healthy ho jao...plz its a request ...ur health is more important.. plz take care of urself...no need hurry okk take ur time..

Coming to ur update..

Update was emotional...amazing..

First half very emotional...😭 u always made me cry..

Both are in pain...Both equally hurt...

Beautifully describe their state...

Poem was superb...

Flashback scene was amazing...but cabir waha kaise aa gaya...???

Take care...

Get well soon...

I'll pray for ...

Thank you soo much for this update..

Thanks for pm..

God bless u...

lol..

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Mehaklovely

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Posted: 10 years ago

#330

It osm part part ...
Poem r too... god
N last main suspense main chodh diya vaise i think manik ne hug krte vwt drink exchange krli hogi
Eagerly waiting for next part

Edited by Mehaklovely - 10 years ago

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