HIS LITTLE BRIDE-a manan story part 11 pg 87 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
age difference,,,

it will b interesting..\

i can smell it... 'keep going...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
contine it...
n yeah i trust u if its dark it must be surely neede then
n plzz pm mi whenever u update nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Please update soon
I think manik fall in love with nandu at first sight
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
ehyyy thats a nice starti can re-live manan thru ur story
plz continue it and PM me the updates !
i am interested !! :)
all d bst !
:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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dr. plzzz post the nxt prt as now its 10:15 plzzz post na cant wait plzzz... plllzzz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Interesting story...
Do pm me nxt tym
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
we trust u with this new story ,their first encounter ...they met
let's see what u have stored for us 😊...thanx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Arrey its 11 now. Update kro na plz.
Nd i am having some prob in sending buddy request. Can u still pm me whenever u update d next chap. Please :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59

The story is grey shaded plz refrain from reading if u don't like such subjects...don't come n bash me later...

...and their story begins:

The same morning...

Principal's office...

Manik is standing by the huge glass window looking at the playground. Nandini is playing hide n seek with her friends. He is already mesmerised by her...her long hair is tied in two ponies, she is wearing her school skirt a bit shorter than usual probably folded it at the waist, he lets out a chuckle at the thought. He likes looking at her.

Principal notices Manik's gaze...he noticed it in the corridor earlier...how could he not afterall he knew the reputation of Malhotra men for quite sometimes now. He is serving in this post for nearly 3 decades. He have at one point seen Manik come here as a young boy with his father. He have seen the young boy turn into a cold man. He felt a shiver run down his spine just with the thought of Nandini. He prayed to God to prove his intensions wrong.

M: Call Nandini here now...

P: why sir anything wrong...she did any mistake??? (though he knew the reason)

M: now ...

He asks the peon to call Nandini in...

Principal goes out as instructed by Manik.

N: may I come in sir?

M : yes...

N: sir u called?

He walks towards her like a predator that walks towards its prey...he is looking at her intently...he stands really close to her entwines his fingers with her...she is shocked she tries to move away but his holds tightens.

N: what are u doing??? Move away...she is angry..

M: don't use that tone with me ...

I WANT YOU...

She feels like someone have slapped her...she looks at him in disbelief...

N: are u mad??? U rascal!!(she is going to slap him but he holds her hand at the right time)

His face red with rage..he feels insulted by her rejection...

M: don't..ever use that tone with me again..

Suddenly Manik's ph rings he gets a bit distracted..she takes this opportunity to push him away...she runs out.

He smiles at her action...

M: kitni door jaogi mujhe chod kar ...

M: yeah say my so called mother(his voice laced with venom)

N: what is this Manik again u played ur sick games with me...

M: oh come on this is nothing new...listen I don't have time for ur crap I've better business to attend...

Before he can cut the ph princi walks in...he forgets to cut the ph..

P: sir u called me?

M: yes I want all of her details...Nandini, including her family everything about her...

Principal is scared for nandini...but sir..

M: aapko jitna bola gaya hai utna hi kijiye

Neonika is shocked...her eyes suddenly tears up as something starts haunting her...she suddenly feels intense hatred towards Manik Malhotra.

Precap: Nandini opens up to her girls...

Manan meets again...

Ab tho I made lamba wala update...comment lamba wala...

Aditi:)

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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
okkk
this seems scary !!
but itz manik na..matlab he wont harm nandini na??
i hope so !!
i am so curious !!
now waiting for the next update !!
thank u for updating and sending a PM aditi :)
keep writing.. :0
tk cr ! :)

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