Manan ff --TWO PASSIONATE LOVERS ...THREAD 2 LINK PG-1 12TH JAN - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for late update!!!!
Chap- 2 A


A new day was ready to shine upon Manik and Nandini. It was 8 a.m.in the morning when Nandini's peaceful sleep was broken due to the constant banging on the door.

The noise was really getting on my nerves, I picked up a pillow and kept over my head and irritatedly shouted- " who the hell is there?"

Abhi- "it's me sweety, please open the door; otherwise you will be late on the first day of your college"

After hearing bhai's voice, I immediately sat straight- " bhai I will be there in 30 minutes".

I wanted to go to the washroom but due to the severe headache and pain in my body, I ended up sitting on my bed with both the hands over my head. And I started recalling yesterday's events and suddenly I was shocked with the image that flashed in my mind. "Aiyyappa,no,no...no, what did I do, I slapped two boys and also kissed one of them, how can I behave like this...bhai is always right I should seriously stop drinking..I am a maniac definitely ..O God why didn't you made a remote to control my actions ha...what the hell they must be thinking...and how badly I was sucking his lips but at least he was handsome as far as I remember thank god!! No no..what are you thinking??...chi chi Nandini you should be ashamed of your self...when will you learn to have control over yourself ha.." I talked to myself and after making weird faces, I went to take shower to calm myself and convinced myself saying that it's nearly impossible that I will come across them again in such a big city. As usual, I picked up a simple dress for myself. I got ready in baby pink long skirt with a white tank top along with a pink crochet scarf complementing my look. I kept my hairs half tied with the help of a clip, slid pink studs into my ears and applied a little kohl under my eyes. I looked myself into the mirror for last and immediately rushed down to the dining table. I could sense bhai's gaze over me as I was eating the breakfast.

Abhi- " Nandini about yesterday night ...I am really...sorry..."

I could see guilt in his eyes, he just looked down after telling this..may be he could sense that I was still mad at him and why shouldn't I be after all he was at fault, how could he not come when he has promised me and I really don't like when someone just back out from their words. But I knew that I was his world and there must have been something important otherwise he wouldn't have mess with me, knowing well my so called temper. I took deep breaths and in a stern voice said to him- " I am forgiving you fort the last time, ok". And I couldn't speak further because he took me into a bone crushing hug and I also smiled whole heartedly on his gesture.

"ok Bhai bye I am leaving for college.", I stated

Abhi- "what?? You can come with me also when we both are going there only"

" Bhai, I have already told you that I don't want the attention in college of being a sister of a popular rich and handsome senior and moreover I don't want like always girls become my friends so that they can come close to you and also I prefer not showing off money unlike you ...so I have decided that I will not tell anyone that I am your sister"

Abhi- "but sweety...

"no I have decided and its final", i replied sternly

Abhi- " ok as you wish my sweety, but if there will be any problem then I am not going to listen to you ok"

" done!"... " and Bhai I will be going to college in i20 and not in my Audi but don't you dare to touch my car, ok" I told him in an ice cold tone.

Abhi- "ok baby" and he kissed my forehead

"ok see you...I am going to pick up Naina", saying this I bid him by giving a hug.
Around 9.p.m

A constant buzzing of the phone was disturbing the dream of Manik. Finally he got irritated and without opening his eyes, he answered the call- "who the bloody hell is calling me at this hour?"

Mukti- " you duffer, it's me ..where are you both jokers, we have been waiting for you both from that time"

Manik, in a sleepy tone- " are Mukti let us sleep na..please"

Mukti- " Manik have you forgotten that today is the first day of our college..now you both are coming on your own or shall I come to drag you...just tell me"

Manik, got up with a jerk - " oh shit! I forgot. Wait we are coming ok"

Manik saw that Cabir was sleeping on his stomach beside him and continuously snoring so he pushed him with his legs. Cabir fell down on the floor and started screaming- " please don't slap me again please I am really sorry...please na don't slap."

Listening this Manik started laughing holding his stomach and this is when Cabir opened his eyes and realised he was just dreaming.

Cabir- " laugh you will to laugh only na because you were happily enjoying kisses with her and I was the one who was suffering ...no no actually my cheeks were suffering because of her slaps, see it's still red yar"

Manik after suppressing his laugh - " Cabir stop your drama and chal lets get ready fast FAB3 are waiting for us in college..it's our first day remember"

Cabir -" ya lets go, I hope after a dreadful night, we... sorry I mean I could get beautiful morning because you to have already experienced a beautiful night yesterday..right Manik"

Manik chuckled on Cabir's statement and without replying anything went from there to get ready.

Cabir thought to himself- "Manik has not protested..this is for first, let's see" and went away to get ready for college.
Please do comment you all its a request...appreciation and criticism both are welcome whole heartedly..!!!
Edited by ishy12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: music_manan

Hi when u update dear.

Sry for being late !!! But was busy in college
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mairaallauddin

Plz update the next part

Sry I am late but was really busy in college..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
i loveeedd it nd thanku for d PM nd ya thanku for buddy me too...u r mah 1st buddy yaiee love u..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
Watng to know wat wil happen wen manik nd nandini cum face to face
Update sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
awesome chapter
n thanks for the PM
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Awesome update
But short update
But still awesome update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Wow updte.. Wating fr MaNan clg encountr..
Cabir s too hilarious 😆
Thnx fr d pm waitn fr ur nxt updte... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Really i loved the storyline
The 1st encounter of mananbir was hilarious
Wanna read more
So pm me too if possible 😳 😳


Lots of love
ANUKY SHARMA
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Very interesting and funny at the same time😆. Very well going dear. Your nandni is drinking. ...so it will be seen her different side. Like a drunk nandni. 🤣. So manik get his first kiss😳 and first slap at the same time. 🤣 what a coincidence. You are a fab writer. ..👏👏. Continue with more updates. ..Thanks for sharing this story.

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