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ateeqa

@ateeqa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Awesome hope the next update will be long n u will update soon coz u know suspense kills n I can't wait

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love_manan

@love_manan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

heya...i am new reader of ur ff...just came across to ur ff the day before yesterday...i love the concept...and ya i can understand ur prob abt commenting...yeahhh..some ppl dont comment even after reading...but chuck it na...u have got some very good readers yar...thats y...u have started ur second thread that too in such a less chapter...okkk...let me come to the story again...shock...what...shock...eager to know...update soon..and ya plzz pm me...and yeahh...i promise i'll comment in each chapters ...bt nxt time do lamba vala update...

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AMAR_LOVE

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

nice update...just want to know what will happen next

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AAVANI

@vani86

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

hey...
awesome part...read last two chapters together...
manan arguments..and nandini's stubbornness...u penned it perfectly
so nandini wants to end this relation...
manik understood his feelings for nandu...but nandini is still the same...
hoping that soon she will realize her feelings for manik...
so after harshad again a new entry...yuvraj...and he too behind nandu...oho...poor manik...and loving this jealous mode of manik a lot...

but i think nandu should also taste the same medicine of jealousy...then only she will realize his place in her life...this is just my opinion...hope u don't mind ...

anyway loved it a lot...really yaar...ur writing skills ...its awesome...keep up the good work

and this chapter...ended in cliffhanger...oho...

I think she is in his arms that's what shocked manik...lets see

thanks alot for the pm
continue asap
take care
stay blessed

sorry for the late comment for chapter 17...was busy with official commitments...!!!!