My MaNan FS gallery - St2 Dare Se Pyaar tak pt-3B&4APG 20 - Page 10

Amazing updatez...i am sry i am l8..itz bcz i ws out of station..it ws amazing...i laughed alot..thnkz 4 d pm..

Yaar tumneto SRK ko bhi nehi choda 😉 Hehehe but loved this update as all r my fab actors..But its really short update a bigger part soon..

omg it's amazing

Originally posted by: riyana7

Yaar tumneto SRK ko bhi nehi choda 😉 Hehehe but loved this update as all r my fab actors..But its really short update a bigger part soon..

Thanks...

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome update. Manan's part was well written. Cc's part was amazing. Arnav,manik and knuj's part was well written. Wow skr entry.continue soon.thanks for pm.

Keep writing.

Stay blessed😊

Thanks

Originally posted by: Cooki

It's hilarious..
Thnxxx for the pm...

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Originally posted by: thamannamanan

hilarious

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Part-3B

Nandini gussa hoke kaha gayi e toh tum sab ne socha hi nehi...

Nandini gussa & thodi sad hoke chalte chalte ek chotu park pe gayi hai raat ho gayi but meri story k liye park khula tha...
Or ek ice-cream wala ko bhi uha rakh diya hai maine...

Nandini 5 ice-cream le ke ek sath khana start karti hai [A/N abhi mujhe ice cream khane ki mood hai]

Tabhi
Tabhi
Tabhi

Nandini ko sunai deti hai kisi ki murmuring...

Humesha ese hi karta hai iss bar main nehi sunungi kuch bhi bada aya ASR what the karte rehe main bhi kam nehi hu main bhi khush kumari gupta singh raizada hu...

Aap ko kya huya hai new voice ki entry ho gayi
nandini ki eyes or ek voice ki direction pe parti hai...

Phir nandini dono voice ki direction pe jati hai or nandini sunti hai dono girls apni husband ki dil khol kar burai kar raha hai...

Nandini Dur se sunte sunte apni ice cream finished kar leti hai now uski eyes khushi ki jelebee o pe parti hai so nandini paas jati hai

Khushi nandini dekhti hai & bolti hai tumhari bhi same problem ayo iha jelebee khao or dil kholke bolo...

Twinkle 1st start karti hai
Twinkle - kya bolu o Kunj hain na meri pati humesha mujhse lardte hai.. Kabhi meri koi baat nehi samjha ta hai...
Khushi - 3yrs se o toh khabhi kuch what the k bina bol te hi nehi
Or tumhari kya problem hai...
Nandini jelebee leti hai apna story start karti hai...

Suddenly
3to ko sunai deti hai meri srk ki song...

Tum Ne Na Jana
Ke Main Deewana
Lekar Aaya Hoon Dil Ka Nazrana
Mere Dil Ki Hai Jo Daastan
Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na
Humsafar Mujhi Ko Chunlo Na
Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na
Tum Ne Na Jana
Ke Main Deewana
Lekar Aaya Hoon Dil Ka Nazrana
Mere Dil Ki Hai Jo Daastan
Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na
Humsafar Mujhi Ko Chunlo Na
Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na

[song manik nandini k liye gaa raha hai ASR & Kunj iss pe hi apna kaam chala raha hai]

Arnav khushi k paas lots of jelebee k sath ata hai...
Khushi jelebee le kar kate kate ASR se gussa dikhati hai...
Kunj twinkle k paas jake explain karne ki try karti hai but manik only song gate gate nandini ko dekhta rehta hai...

Manik singer hai so Kunj & ASR ne usse gane k liye laga diya hai...
[flashback -
ASR- chalo 1st apne apne girls ko search kare nehi toh time k sath sath unki gussa or badi ho jayegi...
Kunj- par song koin gayga mujhe nehi ata.
ASR- what the main ne bhi nehi socha yeh.
Manik - main hu na
Phir ASR jelebee ko 1st search karke phir
Dhunte Dhunte park ate hai
Tabhi ASR, Kunj & Manik ko tend girls ki baatein sunai dete hai]
Flashback end

Nandini live manik ki performance dekh kar happy hoke khushi se jelebee le ke khate khate

Kunj & twinkle And ASR & khushi ki romance wala show dek rahi thi...

Tum Jo Gumsum Ho To Main Hairan Hoon
Yeh Raaz Kaise Tum Ko Batao
Tum Jo Gumsum Ho To Main Hairan Hoon
Yeh Raaz Kaise Tum Ko Batao
Tum Par Marta Hoon Main Sach Kehta Hoon
Maangke Dekhlo Mujhse Jaan
Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na
Humsafar Mujhi Ko Chunlo Na
Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na

Nandini chup chap jelebee khate khate manik ko without apni eyes ko blink karke dekhti hai

Now khushi happy ho ke ASR k sath chali jati hai nandini ko baki jelebee de kar...

Kunj & twinkle bhi dance karte karte chale jate hai[ re e manan ki story hai toh unka kaam finished]

while khushi n twinkle were happy with their partners but our nandu puffed her cheeks like shinchan and start eating jalebees 2x faster!

but something hpnd which shocked her nandini kept a jalebee in her mouth n from other side manik captured it n soon a normal jalebee session turned into a wild kiss[ dream part written by stuti]

But kya yeh sach tha nehi kaise sach hoga abhi toh only I like u bola hai... Abhi thodi na kiss ho sakta hai tum log bhi na...

Manik open his eyes smile his own thoughts...

Manik nandini k pass meri SRK ki style pe jati hai

Plzz sorry Nandini maaf kar do na...

Dekho tumne bhi toh mujhe kidnapped kiya maine kuch bola nehi na toh.

Now Nandini turn her face to him tum badla le rehe the mujhse

Nandini u misunderstanding me plzz mujhe maaf karo do na I promise u main kabhi tumse jhut nehi bolunga...manik said looking her eyes...

Nandini ko soch te huye deke hum chal te baki o k pass

SCENE Chang...

P1- dekh e ghar khali hai yaha chup te hai
P2-yes jab tak upar se koi order nehi ata ehi save place hai

Baki o ka kaya huya o bhi sunlo...

Tum sab toh mr India ki watch wale mr.Malhotra ko bhul hi gaye ho unhone sare city pe Mr. India banke bete ko search kar raha hai.

Sanjeevani 2 bed ready kar liya hai...
Ridima & Armaan ussi spl room pe romance continue kar rehe hai...

Guthi & palak raman k ghar dhaba bol diya hai

Mithun da & jai kya baat kya baat bolte huye ghar chale gaye hai...

Himash & sumit road pe song gake thodi paisa bana liya hai...

Tellychakkar pe 5 article agaya hai...
Manik ko leke

Tweeter pe #wewantmanik save trend hogaya hai...

Frederick crime spot se kuch prove le agaya hai...

CID nikal para hai manik ko search karke ne

And city pe red alart bhi jari ho jaya hai...
Yaad nehi city pe 2 terrorist bhi toh entry liya hai bhul gaye ho kya...
...
Rashi, Noor, beauty & yuga car leke nandini k paas ane ki bohot try kar rehe next 1-2 part pe farmhouse pe main bhej dungi...

And Mayra & Stuti ko bhi main drive karke la hi rahi hu wait for next part...

Back to manan

Manik ki thodi or try k baad or 2 ice cream & 4 balloons or 10 chocolate le k baad nandini man jati hai & back karti hai farmhouse...

Tabhi start hoti hai barish thoda manan romance toh banta hai na...

Nandini rain dekh kar happy hojati hai & dance start karti hai manik usse dekh kar smile karti hai and uske pass choti choti step le ke ata hai phir chalu hoti bg song and romance

Part - 4A
Toh chotu chotu step leke manik nandini k pass a hi jata hai...

Nandini already rain dekh kar pagalon ki tarah dance karna start kar deti hai...
manik and nandini enjoying rain

And [story writer matlab Purna ne bg song bhi on kar diya hai]

Yeh sajish hain bundo kee, koyee khwahish hain chup chup see -
Dekho naa, dekho naa -
Hawa kuchh haule haule, juban se kya kuchh bole Kyon duree hain abb darmaya, (dekho naa, dekho naa -)

Manik looking at nandini and she was just smiling

Manik came closer towards nandini
Manik entwined their hands

Manik came closer and whispered in nandini's ears...and she closed her eyes
[A/N kaya bola o manan hi jante hai mujhenehi pata]
Manik twirled nandini's around by holding her finger.
their foreheads resting with each other...their eyes closed and their hands entwined

Phir naa hawaye hogee itanee besharam Phir naa dag mag dag mag honge yeh kadam Ha sawan yeh sidha nahee khufia bada Kuchh toh baraste huye keh raha, (samjho naa samjho naa -2) Hawa kuchh haule haule, juban se kya kuchh bole Kyon duree hain abb darmaya, (dekho naa, dekho naa -2)

Manik kneeled down in front of nandini and forwarded his hand

Manik lifted nandini up by holding nandini from her waist and twirled nandini's around ...nandini's hands were around manik's neck and they both were looking into each other eyes

Jugnu jaise chahat dekho jale mujhe Mithee see mushkil hain koyee kya kare Hmm hontho kee arjee aaise thukrao naa Sanso kee marjee ko jhuthalao naa Chhu lo naa, chhu lo naa, chhu lo naa chhu lo Hawa kuchh haule haule, juban se kya kuchh bole Kyon duree hain abb darmaya, dekho naa, dekho naa Dekho naa hmm hmm... Hmm hmm hmm dekho

Nandini eyelock ko break karke manik se
Thodi dur ek side pe jake hide karne ki try karta hai but manik find her...

{Phir stuti ne ek romantic part likha hai o read karo}

manik pushed nandini towards a glass door her back was facing him manik kept his both hands on either side he nuzzles in her hair and shamelessly moves his hands on her bare back nandini was having tough time as nandini was wearing halter top manik was going to open its dori when nandini turned around and slammed his lips

Back to purna ki writing...

Bas kiss hogaya or jada kuch nehi dikhungi details main kyu ki meri story star plus pe ati hai itni hi milegi... Family show hai...

MaNan ko stop karke hum chalte hain

Dekho kaha kya milta hai...

Yuga - abhi iss car ko kaya huya
Rashi - car ko nehi road ko
Noor- e road kab clear hogi...
Beauty- oh god kuch karo na plzzz

Hi girls help chaiye

[Purna ki story ki god bohot active hai jaldi wish puri kar deti hai]

Main balbeer & e chota bheem lagata hai tum log problem main ho road jam or upar se e rain kuch help karde...

Yuga- plzzz help us na hume humari frnds k pass jana hai o problem main hai...
[A/N but inki frnd toh romance main busy hai]

Chota bheem - chutti laddoo do

After eating ladoo chota bheem & balbeer help them...
Chota bheem car ko utha ta hai & balbeer car pe magic karke sky pe chala deta hai...

Tabhi beauty call stuti
Beauty - hello stuti hum balbeer & chota bheem k help se farmhouse ja rehe hai tum log bhi ayo...

Stuti- dekho Purna beauty ne call karke bola unn sab ko help mil gayi hai chota bheem & balbeer help them...

Mayra - Toh hum abhi kya kare 1st jam, 2nd Purna ki driving & now e rain

Purna - don't worry agar unne help mili hai toh hume bhi milegi story main likh rehi hu...

Mayra meri phone se India ki super hero ko phone karo krishh ko or dhree dhree se humare dil main nehi jaldi se help k liye road pe ane ko bolo..

2 min main krishh a gaya or help kar diya... farmhouse a k liye chal parte hai

Outside of Farmhouse

Yuga, beauty, rashi, Noor sab balbeer & chota bheem k sath farmhouse ajate hai... Purna Mayra & Stuti ki sawari krishh k sath farmhouse pe reach karti hai...
Beauty krishh ko dekh kar excited ho jati hai & usko hug kar leti hai krishh ka dil bhi dhak dhak karne lagta hai stuti chota bheem ko dekh kar khush hoke selfie lena start karti hai...
Balbeer in sab main ignore feel karta hai so o chota bheem ko uha se excuse karke le jata hai...
Abhi krishh akela sab girls k sath hota hai itni girls ko dekh kar uska dil bang bang karne lagta hai...

Yuga, beauty, rashi, Noor, stuti, Mayra, Purna sab krishh k sath selfie le ne main busy ho jata hai tab rashi ko yaad ate hai o sab nandini ki help k liye aye hai...

Rashi- Sorry sorry krishh & meri bulakkar friends o bhul gaya hum yeha kyu aya hai...

Noor- oh no krishh ji plzz aap bhi humare sath chaliye and manik ko samjhaye na ki o nandini ki name pe case na kore...

Then beauty, Purna, stuti, Yuga Mayra sab krishh ko request karne lagti hai...

Krishh- o o o o hold on hold on girls
Full story bolo aram se ek ek karke phir toh main help kar paunga... Hain na..

Krishh pov
Itni sari beautiful girls hai inka help koi pagal hi nehi karna chahega. Krishh help karle phir ek ko date pe le jaiyo... Par krishh 1 ko kya sab ko le jana date pe... Sab hi beauty full hai but jisne 1st mujhe hug kiya mera dil shayed uske pass chala gaya ''''-'-'-''

POV end

Krishh - ok chalo main bolunga manik ko

Toh sab entry karte hai farmhouse ki garden pe jaha

Manan tabhi apni kiss ko broke karke apne eye lock game continue kar rehe the...

nandini nandini

Sab girl ki voice sunke manan eyelock game se bahar ate hai...
Tabhi
Tabhi
Nandini ki eyes krishh pe jati hai & nandini manik k hat ko chod ke krishh k pass chali jati Hai

Nandini & krishh ko ek sath dekh kar manik jealousy main red, blue k sath aur bhi color mila k full rainbow ho jata hai

Krishh se nazar hate hi nandini ki eyes apni frnds pe ati hai sab bharat milan karte hai phir krishh k sath groupe leta hai...

Manik abhi angry hoke jealousy main red eyes banake sab ke samne jata hai

Then

Krishh ki nazar manik k parta hai...

Krishh - helo u must be manik dekho iss chotu si nandu ki koi galti nehi hai

Manik pov
Itni kam time main nandini se nandu ho gayi hai.. Manik apni nandini ko isse le or dikha de o super hero hai toh tu bhi kam nehi hai...
POV end...

Manik- nice to meet u Krishh yes nandu ne mujhe sab explain kiya hai main samajh gaya hu phir bhi thanks

Krishh kuch bolne k liye mu kholta hi hai tabhi
Bg music start hota hai...
Jaadu jaadu...
Yes yes jaadu ki entry

Hello Krishh main tumhe lene aya hu humari planet pe tumhari help chaiye bolte bolte hi uska nazar Mayra pe ata hai jaadu ki dil Main ghanti bajhti hai..

Par emergency hai toh Krishh & jaadu ko jana hi hai par jaadu ne Mayra ki number le ke date k liye puchta hai & Krishh bhi beauty se cheek kiss wali promise de ke jaadu ki planet pe spaceship se chala jata hai...

Aur Hum sab farmhouse pe entry marte hai...

Phir kya hoga uss k liye wait karo next part ki...

Till then enjoy reading...
Lots of love
Purna

Awesome update. Funny one.Manik's manofy session for nandini was amazing.Hehe jealousy manik was fab.Continue soon.thanks for pm