My MaNan FS gallery - St2 Dare Se Pyaar tak pt-3B&4APG 20 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Thanks.
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Originally posted by: _Samthanian_

Asum ending dear...
kaash aisa hi kch S2 mein ho jaye...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

happy ending...try to write more story


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Edited by Angel_manan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikki.smiley95

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">it was amazing dear...👍🏼</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">you have lovely end to the story😊</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">write some more stories like this😊</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">tc</font>



Thank you so much..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nandu00sr

Hey u ended it really well.. But yeh os hogaya 😭 .. As u assured that u l be back with another one.. Pls do it soon.. And loved ur work in this os.. All the beat.. Take care...



Thank you so much. I fulfilled my promise with MaNan Pyaar Ek Intezaar...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
This story is all my pagalpanti
Main bore ho rahi thi so e likh diya
Plzzz ignore all mistakes



Dare Se Pyaar Tak
Part - 1

Nandini Pov

U all know rashi & noor, yuga k sath manik ki concert pe ja rehe hai stuti Infrom us angrily...
Mayra- o log ko houseful show ki passes kaise mile
Stuti - unhe V. I. P passes mile hai.

Iss baat ko sunke main toh sad ho gayi hu aare abh hum kaya karenge...
Baad k baad main dekhenge abhi toh truth & dare khelte hai Purna give us idea...

Last half an hour we playing our fav game...
Now phir se meri bari agayi...
Stuti - nandini iss bar toh dare le le kitne truth Bolegi hum toh bore ho gaye hai teri truth se...

So I agree for dare but when I saw Purna & Mayra's evil eyes...
Phir unhone jo dare diya sunke meri hosh hi urr gayi

Next day...
Nandini's house
Nandini kaise karegi puri e dare soch soch kuch toh soch...

Kaise karegi tu kaha mujhe manik se milna tha pehle toh show houseful ho gayi mujhe ek pass nehi mile upar se rashi, Noor & yuga o kaise ja rahi hai ek bar bhi mujhe nehi bola.
Sab ko pata hai main kitni pyaar karti manik se.. Phir bhi...

And Purna, Stuti, & Mayra kaise dare de diya mujhe
Ayiappa plzz help me...

Suddenly her eyes fall on hot news...
Kumkumbhagya ki aliya jail se bhag k kokila Modi ko kidnap karge ishita ki car pe ghus gayi tab ishita shimar ki ghar patali devi ka dental check up k liye ja rahi thi abhi full shimaar ki sasural & ishita, Aliya kokila ki dat ke niche kayet hai kon bachayega uhe...Jane k liye dekhte rahiye SBS

Wow nandini kya idea aya hai main ehi karungi Manik ki kidnapping... Yes kidnapping se hi main Purna, stuti & Mayra ko manik ki autograph & selfie de sakti hu...
Par nandini tu akeli kidnapping kaise karegi
RE budhu tv ka super damage se help ke le
Hello Roshni didi Sid jijaji hai mujhe help chaiye. Phir maine sab didi ko bol diya
Roshni didi- very sorry Nandini sid yeh nehi tu ek kaam kar nagin no se help le le o teri help zarur karenge...
Roshni didi ki phone cut k baad maine Shivanya didi ko call ki unhe Sesha didi ko bhej degi bol ke mujhe promise kiya...

Evening action time
Sesha - dekho nandini meri paas jada time nehi mujhe sab se zahrila koin game show k liye jana hai mujhe uha jitna hai. Phir sabko pata chal jayegi main best nagin hu...
Oto shivanya k liye tumhari help kar rahi hu...

Thank you so much didi ok app thodi help kar di jiye baki main manage kar lungi...

So humare plan ki hisab se Sesha didi manik ki bodyguard banke une meri car tak le ayi main driver ki dress penkar diver sit pe pehle se hi ready thi...
Manik ne car pe enter kiya Sesha didi ne uhne thodi neend wali zaher se sula diya...

Abi main main road pe car driver kar rahi hu...
Main Nandini Murthy ek college student Purna, Stuti, & Mayra ki dare puri karne k liye.
India ki most favourite Rockstar The Manik Malhotra ko kidnapped kar liya hai...

Manik jise banani thi meri yaar
Aaj main ban gayi uski kidnapper

Ayyiapp plzzz help me...


Scene shifts
Purna - pata hai tum donoko abhi beauty ki call aya Manik Malhotra abhi tak venu pe nehi aya."
Mayra - Beauty di uha kaya kar rahi thi.
Purna - main toh bhul hi gayi thi usse manik ki pic edit k liye reward mila tha toh use bhi passes mili hai... '
Mayra-kaya yaar sirf hume hi Jane nehi mila
Stuti - acha hi huya hai nehi Mila kyu manik concert PE aya hi nehi hai... Abhi rashi ne update diya hai fb pe
Purna - what the kaya kiya iss girl o no.
Mayra & stuti unison kya huya.
Purna - what's app check kar nandini ne Manik ko kidnap kar liya hai usne Manik ki pic bhi send kiya group pe..
Stuti - e ladki pagal hai kya?
Mayra- usse hume bhi bulaya hai selfie lene farmhouse. '''
Chale kya?
Stuti - Mayra pagal hai kya hum bhi phasnge kidnapping k charge pe...
Mayra - toh hum kya kare???????
Purna - suno socha toh maine bhi tha selfie lenge autograph lenge main India forums ki frnds k liye manik ki msg lungi but e kya hogaya.
Mayra - hume nehi milega kuch
Stuti - milega na jail.
Purna - nehi na hum toh writers hai hum story likhte & post karte hai story pe nehi hote hai toh e Story toh nandini & uski pyaar manik ki hai o samal legi hum new story likhne chalte hai...

Concert hall
Rashi - kaya yaar V.I.P pass mila phir bhi manik ko nehi mil paye
Noor- OMG kaya kar diya nandini ne.
Yuga - kaya huya????
Buauty-jo main dekh rahi hu kaya yeh sach hai.
Rashi- kaya huya?????
Noor- what's app par group chat check kar.
O no nandini ne Manik ko kidnap kar liya hai...
Noor, yuga, rashi & Beauty ki shoking face pe scene freeze ho jati hai...

Out side of farmhouse

Nandini pov
Ayiappa abhi main kaya karu itni dar ho gayi hai na isse hosh aya na Purna, Stuti, Mayra ayi...
Kya karu mai agar isse hosh ajaye toh main kaya karungi kaya bolungi...
Nandini tu kaha phasa gayi hai kisne bola tha tujhe truth & dare khelne.
Na rashi noor yuga ko concert ka passes milti na hume sad feel Hota na hum game khelne na main dare leti na mujhe Mayra Purna & Stuti ki selfie ki chakkar se Manik ko kidnap karti...
Manik Malhotra jiski main sab se big fan hu meri 1st love
Meri pyaar meri manik jise mujhe filmy style pe milne ki dream dekhti thi aaj usse hi kidnapped kar liya...

Ayiappa abhi kya hoga manik mere bare main kya sochega?
Abhi mujhe kabhi mera pyaar nehi milegi...

Aiyapaa kaise frnds diya hai?????

Her non stop convo with ayiappa broken of manik sound...

Manik- kaha hu main????
koin hu main??????

Nandini - kya manik ki yaadas chali gayi par shesa di ne toh sleep wali zahar diya Tha yeh kaya hoga??????

Manik pov
Off my head
Main sleep se headache le ke utta
RE kaha hu main samjhane ki try kar raha tha
tabhi mujhe kisi ki non stop murmuring ki sound ayi...
Tab mujhe nazar ayi font sit pe ek chotu si ladki... Ok
Now I understand so e meri fan hai or apni dare
Puri karne k liye mujhe kidnapped kiya hai..
Itnu chotu hoke mujhe kidnapped kiya hai...
Abhi ayga asli mazaaa


Manik - koin hu main?????
Kaha hu main?

Nandini - tume hosh agaya.

Manik pov
Nehi meri bhoot baat kar raha

Manik- tum koin ho???
Nandini - Manik tumhe kuch yaad nehi hai?
[acha hai koi story suna deti hu agar usse yaad hota toh mere bare main kaya soch ta..]

Manik- mera nam manik kai wow so cool and tum koin ho meri mom...
Nandini - kya tum hara yaadas gayi hai common sense toh nehi kaha se main tumhe tumhari mom dekhti hu?????

Manik - ok toh sister hogi.????
Nandini - big no...
Manik - wife ho.
Nandini pov
Abhi toh nehi hu but future main hona chahti hu.
Pov end
Nandini - no
Manik - gf ho...
Nandini pov
Ayiappa e kya hai yeh mujhe wife & gf soch raha hai or main yes bhi nehi bol sakti...
Ayiappa u know na main kabhi cheating nehi karti...

Manik pov
Iski body ki size k sath dimag bhi chotu hai main isse wife & gf sab banke bola phir bhi no bolti hai...

Manik - toh tum kaya ho???
Nandini - fan hu tumhari crazy fan...sayed sabse jada pagal fan... Basss or kuch nehi hu... Nandini told him with sad face " " " " " " "

Manik in his mind...
Kitni cute se bol re hai...

Opposite side of road...
G1-didi mujhe bhuk lagi hai plzz kuch khilao na
G2- tujhe toh humesha hi bhuk lagti hai iss main new kaya hai????
G1- Ooo didi basss hoga mujhse aur bhuk
Nehi saha jayegi main ape char jaungi bol deti hu...
G2- RUK o dekh car k samne 2 log dikh raha hai uha chal
G1- but kaya o hume food denge...
G2- kyu nehi main apni song & tu apne dance dikhana or hum itni beautiful hai koi bhi hum pe fidaa hoke jaan de de food kyu nehi???
G1- O TOH hai didi

They start to going e to manan.
G1- didiii dekho e toh manik hai o singer.
They run to them...
G2- Manik manik u remember us...
Manik & nandini looking them with shock...

G1- didi e hume kaise remember karga aap intro do na apne style pe...
G2- ok...
Now she start their intro
Hum aye hai iss raste pe
Hum aye hai iss raste pe
star chamka hai twinkle twinkle ...
Hum aye hai iss raste pe...
Hi manik
Guthi manik manik palak palak chotu si girl. Chotu si girl Guthi...

Palak - abhi yaad aya Manik...
Nandini - Manik ki yaadas chali gayi hai o tumhe nehi pehchaan ga...
Palak with excitement didi manik ko kuch yaad nehi hai...
Guthi- haa maine suna chal try marte hai kya pata hume manik mil jaye...

Now they goes to manik
Palak - Manik u forget us hum tumhare girlfriend hai...
Nandini - kya?????
Manik - dono?????
[manik tera plan toh tujh pe hi bhari par gaya]

Bolo bolo kaise lagi meri pagalpanti

So ek dare k liye nandini ne kiya manik ki kidnapping??????

Main toh bhag gayi meri frnds k sath...

Abhi manik bhi nandini k sath
Kya kare ga????
But
Guthi & palak ne le liya story pe entry???

Manik ka plan kaya par jayga uspe bhari???

Nandini bacha payega palak & Guthi se manik ko?????
Jane k liye bane rahiye sirf yaha...

Lots of love
Purna
Edited by Angel_manan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Damn it was hilarious

serial mixes were awesome
simar ki patal devi 🤣 hahaha wat happened to sasural simar ka serial writer patal ki bahu 😆

nagin it was quite interesting

aisa dare wish i could do that
i would to try it but i don't have any bonding with nagin 😆

gutti palak indono ke naam hi kafi hai to make me laugh like till my stomach ache 🤣
aap aye phool khile hai gulsan gulsan 😆 aaj na chodugi tumhe (manik) dum dama dum..hihi

poor manik trapped in his own plann

thanx
keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update🤣.lol Combo of all serials was mindblowing and great idea. Wat nandini kidnapped manik.manik's memory loss acting 😆was phenomenal and funny.manik's words of tum dono 🤣was amazing. Totally an funny update. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for. Pm.
Keep writing.
Stay blessed😊

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