2# Devil's bride manan ff prt30 on 143 #3link on 1

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myjaan1

@myjaan1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#591

Yaar this part was awsame i realy like it i am waiting for next part 😃

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prathiksha

@prathi3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#592

am i breathing??

no m not

i am officially dead

wat was dat ??

phew i took few minutes to digest it

but mind blowing

by the way u better update da next part fast and dont make us wait ok

love u 😃😃

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millie

@millie17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#593

Amazng updt...it wsso hot n passipnate...
But mukti became d kabab mai haddi...
Manik finally realised dat nsndi is a pure soul...
Nw he wl bcm a gud husband too..wow..
Plz gv us more of manan romance

Continue soon...
D story is superb..n going vry well..
Plz don't keep us waitng fr too lng...

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aarzooarora

@aarzooarora

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Posted: 10 years ago

#594

U nailed it .

So much intense drama, i was just hooked up in reading in one go.

But u wnt change ryt?? phir se mukti ko romance ke time mein laa dia. 😆

Manik bechara 😕

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S.h.e.e.t.a.l

@S.h.e.e.t.a.l

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Posted: 10 years ago

#595

Superb update
loved the way u penned down manik's guilt thinking
nandu's innocent confession awww
what a way to sooth the bruises
mukti bich main ayi firse ufff
continue soon

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priya

@priya_sejwal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#596

Wow.. Such a superb chp

Uh penned down it very beautifully...awsumm

Nandu took all blame on her n thn manik's care n love for her...awe he was so much worried for her...n aftr all tht when she told why she done tht ...becoz she trust him..ohh loved this part manik's POV was amazing

Quite emotional chp...uh nailed it..superbbb

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deepanksha

@deepanksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#597

How can someone be so romantic and a great writter,m dead like really dead,it was more than awesome,just out of this world

Awesome is like really a small word in front of this update

Hatts off to u

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Vidushi

@chocopie26

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Posted: 10 years ago

#598

Shittt!!!! Missed it...an pehli baar mujhe v Mukti par gussa aya...

Nic update continue soon

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srija-n

@srija-n

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Posted: 10 years ago

#599

Oh god !!!! Wow wow wow !!!!
Its just really amazing ...
Manik's emotion...
his concern ..
His vows ...
All r just Beautiful...!!
Police station to hills ... awsm
Start to end wow !!!
Magical update !!! 👏
And a big thank u for long update ...
Eagerly waiting for next update ...
Plz update soon .. :-) and plz pm me ...

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Nusrat Peeroo

@nusrat300895

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Posted: 10 years ago

#600

Heyy I've some confusion...In the present its shown tht nandini is pregnant but manik and nandu are not in good terms...Nandini thinks manik cares only for the baby and manik thinks nandu loves dhruv. But here its shown there differences are being solved...can u plz explain this to me about how they are again having differences in the present??? Plz

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