Manan ff- Trip to your heart. part 29 pg 148 17 may pms later' - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
awesome update...
penned down the family bonding really well...
loving this new side of nandu...
can't wait for what's gonna happen next...
keep up the good work and update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
AWESOME
LOVE IT
THANKS FOR PM
LOOKING FORWARD FOR UPDATES...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Next part plz I'm eagerly waiting
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Chapter:4

NANDINI'S POV

"Beep"

"Beep"

"Beep"

My beauty sleep was disturbed by the constant buzzing of my alarm. Making me jump on my skin I lazily starched my hands towards my phone and saw the time oh creep!!! 8:00 a.m oh god today I have to go to collage to fill some documents as its last day of submission and from tomorrow any how I have to go to collage as I had already miss first weak of my collage I hurriedly went inside the washroom and after 10 mins of cold shower I came outside wrapped in a towel.

Something beautiful is about this morning I am feeling so happy my heart is smiling after so long i am feeling like this. May b bcz today I woke up without having a headache or bcz I meet those ppl who love me lyk anything chacha, chachi and rishu they showered me with the love I always craved for. I wonder how my so called father had such a lovely family . I open by cupboard all thanks to the chachi she really helped me out, if it wasn't she it would taken me 5 decades to settle my clothes.

" ur the light ur the night

Ur the color of my blood"

Don't freaked out its only my ringtone I am kind of obsessed with this song.

Me(answering the call): hello

Naina: hi did u slept well

Nandini: yes I have slept well and before u ask me I am fine there is no problem chacha chachi r nyc and don't worry today I'll go to space to fill my documents and I will keep my self away from alcohol any thing else

Naina: hahahhaahaha looks lyk my daughter is getting intelligent day by day

Nandini: thanks so have u got your answers or something else is left

Naina: yup the driver will be there soon ok so u don't have to take taxi's bcz I know it will horrible ride for u.

Nandini: no taxi drive is not that bad although they r not air conditional but its really fun.

Naina: look's like india has caught its spell on my daugther ok listen ... blah blah blah

Uff mothers I tell u. I think Naina has been caught by some spirit. What the hell is wrong with her yar!. Plz god save my mother I really want my old Naina back.. ...I "chuckled"

After dressing my self in white knee length frock with white earnings and a red scarf around my neck. I put some light pink colour lip gloss and kajol of course. No make up at all that's how I lyk myself.

I went downstairs and had my breakfast, Almost thanking thousand of times to God Almighty! that chachi didn't did any experiment today but the "parhantas" and "green chatni" made by her were "yummy"I almost eat 3 of them I was never been this foodie but chachi's original food is making me one. We had a really good time I told them about myself and my friends after so long I was blabbering this much with someone. "Strange". But I feel good. The driver had arrived so I bid every one by giving a hard kiss on rishu's and chachi's cheek and a side hug to chacha I left for my new future "SPACE".

THE SPACE ACADEMY

I enter inside the collage it was quite fancy just like my types I start walking inside and saw everyone in the collage looking towards me especially boys who were ogling at me I pass by them and a smirk was constantly playing on my lips at my popularity on very first day of my collage. "the bitch is back"mummer I to myself.

I saw a boy wearing black shirt and paints with brown jacket leaning on bike he was quite hot and handsome but I can bet behind his decent face a big devil lies. like others he was also awestruck by my appearance I made my way towards him.

Me: excuse me

He:yes

Me: ahmm! can u tell me the way towards the principal office

He: yes go straight then take first right and at the end of corridor u will find principal office

Me:oh thanks

He: and by the way my name is Harshad Saxena

Me: nyc to meet u Harshad see u soon

Harshad: same here pretty lady and yeah just be aware of FAB 5 ok

I made my way towards principal office but FAB 5 this word was stuck in my mind I have heard this name before where. Chucking all my thoughts I went inside the Principal office.

AFTER SOME TIME

Uff thank God! The principal was quite helpful really Naina and her influence she never told me the trusty of the collage is her friend. I was lost in my thoughts and suddenly

"puchak"

Me: oh I am so so sorry r u ok (said I trying to help her in standing)

Girl: dikhti to itni choti kamzor si ho par ek hi dakhe main hume neche giradya

What! was that a compliment or insult how dare she. Nandini control ur anger, its ur fault. Uff

Me: I am sorry I didn't see u

Girl: re koi bat nahi hum theek hai

Me: hum? par tum to ek hi ho is there any one else with u

Girl(pointing towards herself): re nahi hum apni bat kar rahe the hum matlab me

Me: oh! by the way I am Nandini

Girl: hy mera nam Navya naveli hai

Navya what??? "Forget it"

Me:ohh

Navya: tumhra phela din hai

Me: ha matlab kal phela din hoga aj mai documents fill karne ayi thi

Navya: oh hamara dosra din hai or hum itne khush hain...

She was full on chatter box but sweet she offered me to show the collage to which I said yes. On the way she told me about freasher's party tomorrow night in which freshers have to show their talents this announcement was done a week ago but I am late.

We met her friend Shahid he was sweet and little bit of shy he asked me about myself and we talked a little and then he went to attend his class leaving me and Navya alone.

Navya: acha ek bat btao tum nai space q join kya hai.

Me: bcz I always wanted to be a great singer,

Navya: ohh hum ne space apne idol ki waja sai join kya hai

Me: idol

Navya; re FAB5

Me: fab 5????

Holly shit! This name is getting on my nerves where have I heard it I have definitely heard this name before where

Navya: Nandini

Me:yes

Navya:yeh mat khana ki tumhe pata nahi FAB 5 kon hai

I just shrugged my shoulder.

Navya: re hum bata te hain fab 5 phanch(5) logon ka group hai yeh panchon bachpan k dost hain or india k leading band mai se ek band hain her ek teanager inka dewana hai inka style, attitude wagaira sab sai hat k hai wo humare idol hain hum jab sai space ahein hai unhe dundh rahe hain par hum nahi mil pae or pata hai is group main kon kon hai oh tumhe kaise pata hoga hum batate hain

Suddenly there was hustle and bustle in corridor we saw everyone in corridor running looking lyk there is a fire on the floor Navya caught some random boy's shirt and make him stop

Navya: re yeh sab bhag q rahain hain kya huwa

Boy: gane do fab 5 parform karne wale hai thori der mai

Navya(exclaimed): fab 5

She left the boy and turn towards me

Navya: Nandini chalo hum tumhain fab5 dikhate hain chalo

She held my hand and dragged me from there

Me: Navya aram sai yar mai ghir gaon gi Navya aram se

But my screams fell in deaf ears she was really thrilled even I was anxious to know these FAB5 just then we reached at the audi where the performance was going to start I don't know y but with every step my heart was beating at the speed of light I was feeling weird I don't know y my eyes wanted to cry my heart was pumping so loud and faster, as my blood pressure is raising. We stand between the crowd Navya push them off to make her way as close as she can but due to crowd she left my hand my feet were having no energy to follow her or neither it had energy to move back what was happening I cant get anything just then all light went off and a light fell on stage I saw a girl wearing knee length frock on keyboard a boy near her in yellow shirt and a cap on his head holding a guitar and a boy in black vest and blue jeans on drums in between and a girl wearing black shirt reaching to her waist and black torn jeans she was also holding a electric guitar just than I locate a tall boy coming from behind his face wasn't visible due to dark but I don't know y I cant move my gaze from him my eyes were not in my control.

He come in between holding his guitar towards the mic a light fell on his face makingme froze on my place my heart which was beating so fast some tyms back had now stopped beating my eyes were widened in shock it was about to come out of its socket I was froze on my place my whole body was cold. I turn my face other syd and squeezed my eyes harshly with all the force I had and again turned towards the stage thinking its just a dream.

But no it wasn't any dream it was true he was standing infront of me. The only word that escaped from my mouth at that tym was

"MANIK".

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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Chachi cooks tasty food ... Yayyy finally lol sorry I couldn't stop myself there hahah
Update was just too good ... Loved it to the core
Nandu was so happy ... But now I can't say that ... She just saw MM
What will be his reaction ... Hmm ...
Give me another quick update on this dear ... I m just so hooked on this one ... Eagerly waiting for the next update
And ya do take a bow :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
nice update...now the fight will begin
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Loved ur update...
Want to know what's going to happen next...
Update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Mind blowing update dear it was awesome but pls don't make nandu bechari type manik use chod k gaya that she should show tasan to him n pls don't let nandu get affected by manik she should compose herself n show a great personality in front of him when he will get to know that she has dated so many boys that will be fun to read. She should fete someone pls show her like she was in London so that he will regret for leaving her like this
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
awesome update yar!!!
loved it...
naina's care 4r her daughter...its lovely...mother's care...
will always b special!!!
navya -chatterbox ...haha...
is manik is d guy who cheated nandini?
wana know wat gona happen nxt...
cont soon ...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Ohhh... now things are bout to get interesting...

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