Manan ff -Tum hi ho (part :73&74pg -139) thread 2 pg-1 - Page 73

Created

Last reply

Replies

771

Views

159.8k

Users

82

Likes

2k

Frequent Posters

Sjmanan thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Happy diwali! Amazing update. Loved these parts thanks for the pm.
Cute_Inaya thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear...
Update was awesome.. superb...
Holi part was awesome...
Manan romance was very beautiful... lovely...
manik is very caring... very nicely describe...
again twist ... i hope manan separate na ho ... aur babies bhi save rahe..
Happy Diwali dear... enjoy...
Thanks for pm...
keep it up...
keep smiling... take care.
lots of love..

Entwined_Fates thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Wow mehak it was super update
I loved it...thanks for pm
Take care stay blessed
windowseatbug thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update.
Holi party was so much fun.
Manik & Nandini all romantic.
Nandini is weak.
Their gestures towards babies were so cute.
Thanks for update & pm.
Continue soon.
Happy Diwali! :)
Pari_mananholic thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Wow update...
so again ur twist...
pls ha dont make it much dark...
luved the update...
thnx for pm...
sorry for being late..
update soon...
Tanu.m thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Happy Diwali to u to dear
assuuu thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
lvd it...

thanksbfr the pm...

abh kya twist aane waala hai
Sakshi_maheta thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Love update
Awesome dear
Thanks for the pm
Keep writing
Update soon
Happy Diwali dear
Take care dear😊
manikmalhotra2 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
It's amazing ...awesome ...superb
The family time... that is the Holi scene was amazing ...awesome

And Manik looks so sweet and adorable while being so caring for Nandini ...

Loving it .
Really excited for the new twists and turns

Thanks for the pm
Mehaklovely thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago

TUM HI HO

Part : 73

Night time nandini waking up manik

Nandini : manik utho

Manik in half sleep say " nandini... kya hua "

Nandini : manik utho na

Manik get up n rub his eyes n yawning n say wht happen nandini

Nandini : i m feeling very hungry
Becoz of this i can't able to sleep

Manik : nandini maine kha tha sote vqt kuch khalo but tum meri sunti kha ho
Nandini : plz manik..

Manik : kya main apni wife aur babies ko bhuka sone dunga
Main kuch lekr ata hn wait

Nandini : i also want to go

Manik : k

Manik hold nandini in his arm n they reaches to kitchen
He puts her down

Nandini : i cut the onion
U take out bread from refrigerator k

Manik : no nandini u stand here i will make the sadwich

Nandini : like omlet
No manik mere vaise kuch khane ka mn nhi plz..
Tum meri help krdo bs

Manik : ho gya tumhara
Madam aisa sadwich bnaege
Tum ugliyan chti rhai jaogi
Aisa kuch nhi bolna chta main
Main bs ek simple sadwich jo khane layk ho bs

Nandini : kk
Let's see

Manik making the sadwich n nandini feels sleepy n sit down in kitchen n seeing manik

sandwich get ready n manik say "nandini... sadwich is ready Nandini say something kya hau"

Manik turns n see nandini is sleeping on floor with support of wall
Manik smiles n say "yeh dekho phle bol rhi thi ki kuch khana bhukh lgi hai ab khud so gye "

Manik holding nandini reaches to bedroom n put her on bed n cover her with blanket n hair coming on her face he sets it n sleep with her
Next mrng
10 am

Nandini get up n see manik is sleeping till now n sees him n smiles n hold him n than thinks oh my god mujhe yd aya maine toh kl manik ko rt main uthaya tha ab manik mujhe bhut naraj hoga
Dekha babies apki vjha se mummy ko dath khani padhigi
Muma apse bhi sorry hai aap log rt ko bhuke soe na

Nandini say "abhi uth kr mujhe kuch khana chiye "

Nandini goes to washroom

11am

Manik gets up n see the time n say 11 bj gye manik says to himself
Manik jldi uth u r getting late aaj teri bhut imp. Meeting hai
Yeh nandini kha hai

Manik goes down n see nandini is in kitchen n making breakfast n manik hold her from back n kiss on her chicks n say nandini gud mrng

Nandini turns n say

Nandini : manik i m sorry
Maine tumhari rt main need disturb kari aur mein khudh so gye
Aur tumhari mehnt bhi waste ki

Manik : haan ab glti ki hai
Toh punishment bhi milegi (come close her )

Nandini : manik i m serious

Manik : nandini
U don't need to be sorry
Tum mujhe jb chahe rt ko utha skti ho
Main bol rha ho daily uthaho isse i will learn cooking

Nandini smiles n hug her n both lost in each other

Nandini : oh shit manik sara pasta jl gya
Maine tumhar liye bnaya tha
(Nandini become sad)

Manik : nandini it's k
Leave it na

Manik pull nandini closure to her n say "nandini i don't want pasta i want u nandini "

Nandini : manik...

Nandini phone rings

Manik : kya tumhare phn ka humhre romance se connection hai

Nandini : manik koe imp. Call ho toh

Manik : than pick it

Nandini : how can i pick it
Jb tk u will not leave me

Manik drag nandini backward but not leave her n nandini pick th call

Nandini : hello mukti

Manik moving her hair trying to disturb her

Mukti : hello
U know aaj cabir aur navya ki anniversary hai
So we are planning for a party
In different style

Nandini : different style means

Mukti : bollywood style party

Manik again disturbing her

Nandini : manik kya kar rhai ho

Mukti : nandini..
U r busy i think
I call u later

Mukti smiles n cut the call

Nandini : hello mukti
Manik kya hai

Manik : nandini.. kya hai wht

Nandini : u know aaj cabir aur navya ki anniversary hai
Mukti was telling ki party hai bollywood style

Manik : oh that's great



Part : 74

Nandini : u know aaj cabir aur navya ki anniversary hai
Mukti was telling ki party hai bollywood style

Manik : oh that's great
But bollywood style means

Nandini : manik tumhne mujhe bt krne di hai properly

Manik : Oh shit i forget today i have very imp. Meeting wid clients

Nandini : so go get ready manik i made the breakfast

At breakfast table

Manik : nandini i drop u to mukti house

Nandini : u will be late
I go myself

Manik : no i will drop u

Nandini : okay

At evening

Manik entered in house n see nandini is setting in whole on couch reading magzine

Manik : nandini..

Nandini get up n hug manik n say i missed u so much

Manik holding her n say me to

Manik break the hug n say "nandini than wht's the pln today night "

Nandini : haan bollywood style party
Manik... u know humhai kisi bollywood movie couple bn kr jana hai
Aur pta maine decide bhi kr liya ki hum kya banege
I decide everything our dress also our dance everything

Manik is admiring nandini excitment releated to this party by seeing her like his all stressed removed

Nandini : manik..

Manik : hmm..

Nandini : kya hua

Manik moves her hair n say " nandini plz always remain like this "

Nandini : i m always be same
Yr nandini

Manik smiles n say chlo party ke liye ready hoe

Nandini : chlo i tell u everything

Party venue ,Cabir house

All guest start arriving n all looking different n navya wearing south indian style saree n cabir wearing jeans n simple coat (movie Chennai express navya as meena n cabir as rahul )

Navya saying to cabir "humhai bhut dr lg rha hai ki hum apne dialogue achae yd rkh paenge ya nhi "

Cabir : navya calm down
This is not any exam going on

Navya : cabir...
Tum smjhte nhi ho our performace should the best becoz it's our day na

Cabir : dekho mukti abhi agae

Mukti wearing pink gown n abhi coat suit n their hair style are like om n shanti in movie om shanti om

Mukti n abhi wishes them

Mukti : u r looking so cute in south indian dress

Navya : u r also looking so beautifull

Alai n druv also arrived ( alai as kavya n druv as humty movie humty sharma ki dhulaniya )

Alai n druv also wish cabir n navya

Alai : where is manik n nandini
Navya : see they are arrived
Nandini wearing blue saree n manik wearing black coat suit
(Nandini as naina n manik as bunny movie yeh jawani hai deewani )

Everybody meets eachother

Abhi comes on stage n say hello everybody I wish cabir n navya they remain like this happy forever so aaj moke pr hum sbne kuch chota mota thi tiyari ki may u guyz like
So first me n my darling wife mukti

Abhi n mukti do a romantic couple dance on song
(tumko paaya hain to jaise khoya hoon
kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahoon[2]
kisi zabaan mein bhi vo lafz hi nahi ki jinme tum ho kya tumhe bata sakoon
main agar kahoon tumsa haseen
qayanat mein nahi hain kaheen
taareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi tumko paaya hain to jaise khoya hoon)

Everybody claps

Now alai n druv dance on song Lucky Tu Lucky Me

Everybody sitting n enjoying the dance

Manik n nandini again n again seeing each other n smiling

Abhi says oh great
Now is turns of our love birds nandini n manik

Manik n nandini comes on stage

(Nandini standing alone on stage n manik comes from her back n come close to her n start singing song)

Ek din kabhi jo khud ko taraashe
Meri nazar se tu zara, haaye re

(Nandini turns n manik hold nandini hands put them on his shoulder n his hand on her waist n start dancing )

Aankhon se teri kya kya chhupa hai
Tujhko dikhaaun main zara, haaye re
Ik ankahi si daastaan daastaan
Kehne lagega aaina Subhanallah...

Jo ho raha haim pehli dafaa hai wallah
Aisa hua, Subhanallah..
Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa hai wallah
Aisa hua

Meri khamoshi se baatein chun lena
Unki dori se taarifein bun lena (x2)

(Nandini go to manik back n hold him from back n start dancing)

Kal nahi thi jo aaj lagti hoon
Taareef meri hai khaamakha
Tohfa hai tera meri adaa

(They dance so romantically n lost in each other)

Ek din kabhi jo khud ko pukaare
Meri zubaan se tu zara, haaye re
Tujh mein chhupi si jo shayari hai
Tujhko sunaaun main zara, haay re
Ye do dilon ka waasta waasta
Khul ke bataaya jaaye naa
Subhanallah...

Jo ho raha hai, pehli dafaa hai Wallah
Aisa hua.. Subhanallah (x3)

Jo ho raha hai, pehli dafaa hai Wallah
Aisa hua..

In last they realise that they r not alone n everybody claps n nandini is blushing n manik is seeing nandini. N smiling n they come down

Abhi says wao wht sizzling performance given by them now ab voh perform karege jiske liye yeh party organise ki hai

Navya n cabir do a romantic dance on song ban ke titli dil udha song

After sometime all doing couple dance n everybody face r covered with face mask

Manik says to nandini while doing couple dance "nandini u r looking hot tonight "

Nandini looks down n blush


Suddenly nandini start coughing

Manik : nandini r u okay

Nandini : I want water

Manik make nandini to sit on chair

Manik : wait I m just coming

Manik goes

N she saw one servant coming with water n she take it n now feels relax n she start going afterward manik but somebody snatch her hand n he is looking like manik wearing same dress n covered her face with mask

Nandini thinking that he is manik say "manik wht r u doing "

He take her out of party

Nandini : manik tum mujhe party se bhr kyo le ae kuch bolo

He drag her to the car

Nandini : who r u
Manik...

The man put his finger on her lips n say" sh..."

So i said twist are waiting... whowz the man.. n wht he wants will be get to know in next pqrt so keep commenting
keep smiling
Love Mehak




______________________________

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".