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Posted: 9 years ago
frst toh sry fr late reply...i ws stuck smwhere...n thnx fr pm...
now coming to update...
Re chhori ye ki kar ditta tussi...ro ro kr mera bura haal ho gyaa...
dat karan...ughhh...jerk kahin ka...he killed nandini...she ws pregnant yrrr...
n ye kyaa...
karan bhaag b gya...siyappaaa...
use maar do plzzz...yaa mjhe bol do me maardungi...
or le...short circuit b ho gyaa...
haayeee mera maanik...how much broken he iss...ab jldi se mila do unhe plzzz..plzzz
continue soon...
take care..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Tum Hi Ho

Part : 60

Fab 5 n navya reaches manik home

Mukti : manik kha hai

Cabir : upr chl ke dekhte hai

They upstair see that manik bending down crying n they all having tear in eyes n cabir n druv go to manik n bend n try to console him

Mukti : yeh sb kya hai

Navya : nandini pregnant thi
N crys

All get shocked to hear this

Manik get up n say

Manik : i will not leave him ushne nandini ko hi nhi mere bache ko bhi mujhse china

Manik phn rings its inspector call

P.I. : karan pakdha gya hai

Manik : i m just coming

Manik ran down stair in anger n start the car n reaches to police station

N with police karan is standing
N he goes toward him n hold his colar n start punching him
N say tune meri nandini ko kyo mara n police is controling but he is not listening n police man hold manik

P.I. :dekhiye ushe uki shaja Milegi

Manik : main isse nhi chodhga

P.I. : dekhiye aap kanon apne hath main ligie

Fab 5 n navya comes there
N he controls manik n manik go somewhere without telling anyone n he reaches beach to spend peace tme alone n

He start walking at beach site
N start remembering nandini
He feels that nandini comes n hold his hand n put her head on his shoulder n manik trys to hold her face but she disappears

Bg song lyrics

(Hai dil ye mera
Mujhe hardum ye poochta:
Kyun hai mujhe tujhse itni wafaa..)

N than he feels somebody throws water on him n he turns nandini is throwing water on him n manik go close to him n throws water on her n he trys to hold her hand but she again disappear n he gets up n start seeing her

(Kyun teri hasrat
Hai har khwahish se badhkar mujhe
Kyun naam tera hi leti zubaan..)

Manik sits at corner of beach n he feels that nandini closes his eyes with n start remembering that when nandini say manik if i m not so feels this air i m always with u n tears comes out from manik eyes

"Saathi tera bann jaaun"
Kyun hai yeh junoon!
Har aansun tera pee jaaun
Or de du sukoon
Har din tujhko chaahun
Teri raah takun
Apni baahon mein tujhko
Main salamat rakhun

N he start going home n he is driving the car n feels nandini sitting with her n smiling n hold his hand

Tere hi baare mein, hai ab har zikr mera
Huaa hai kaisa asar yeh tera
Koi naseehat, na chaahun main koi salaah
Jo rooh ne mere tujhe chun liya

(N he reaches home n enters n in his room n sees nandini is standing in front of her n he immediately hug her n than realise he was only imagining her )

"Saathi tera ban jaaun"
Kyun hai yeh junoon!
Har aansun tera pee jaaun
Aur de du sukoon
Har din tujhko chaahun
Teri raah takun
Apni baahon mein tujhko
Main salaamat rakhun

(Manik bends dwon n start crying n nandini came n hold her hand n make him ly down on bed n come n ly with him n again disappear after some movement )

Hai dil khamakhaa pareshan badaa
Isko koi samjah de zaraa
Ishq mein fanaa ho jaana
Hai dastoor yahi
"Jisme ho sabar ki fitrat"
Wo ishq hi nahin!
Samajh bhi ja aye dil mere
Kya hai ye maajra..

(N than manik heard sound it's of nandini saying manik i m always with u
I didn't gone anywhere
I always remain in yr heart n if u will be sad na i also feel sad so u want to make me sad )

"Saathi tera bann jaaun"
Kyun hai yeh junoon!
Har aansun tera pee jaaun
Aur de du sukoon
Har din tujhko chaahun
Teri raah takun
Apni baahon mein tujhko
Main salaamat rakhun

2 days passed like this manik har pal hr ek sec. Nandini ko yd krta hai but in last he lying on bed n decided

Manik thinks main kya karu nandini main cha kr bhi kush nhi rhai skta without u
But for u only i will live
For u only becoz u always wanted but main tumhai kabhi nhi bhul paunga
Never

After 2 year

In mrng manik doing his comb n says nandini gud mrng
Uth gye tum n turns n see her huge pic hanging on the wall n say nandini kaisa lg rha hn main
Acha na
Chlo main tumhse aa kr bt krta hn office jana hai
Haan baba breakfast karke jaunga

Manik comes downstair n eat the breakfast n leave for office

**manik leaves the music from that but not completely n he joines his dad office n he finds reason to be happy but n always remain happy from outside but he is fully broken from inside same as that day n he never share his feeling with anyone but only talks to nandini photo n makes him relax
Cabir n navya got married n lives a happy life n mukti n abhimanyu also living her life happy n mukti is pregnant n alai n druv also got married n happy in their life**

Manik reach office n everyone wish him gud mrng sir n he goes to his cabin n attend the meeting n do work n evening come back home n enters in room that room is so dark n all wall is covered by nandini pics n manik picks the guitar n start singing song

Na hai yeh pana, na khona hi hai
Tera na hona jane, kyun hona hi hai
Tum se hi din hota hai, surmaiye shaam aati, tumse hi, tumse hi
Har ghadi saans aati hai, zindagi kehlati hai, tumse hi, tumse hi
Na hai yeh pana, na khona hi hai
Tera na hona jane, kyun hona hi hai
(He feels nandini is there with him n start dancing with her )

Aankhon mein ankhein teri, bahoon mein baahein teri
Mera na mujhmein kuch raha, hua kya

( manik remembering nandini talks)

Baaton mein baatein teri, raatein saugatein teri
Kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya, hua kya
Main kahin bhi jata hoon, tumse hi mil jata hoon, tumse hi, tumse hi
Shoor mein khamoshi hai, thodi si behoshi hai, tum se hi, tum se hi
(Manik start remembering their romance n feels that nandini is there with him n touching him n he singing song)
Aadha sa wada kabhi, aadhe se jayada kabhi
Jee chaahe kar lu is tarah wafa ka
Chhode na chhoote kabhi, tode na tute kabhi
Jo dhaga tumse jud gaya wafa ka
Main tera sarmaya hoon, jo main ban paya hoon, tumse hi, tumse hi
Raaste mil jaate hai, manzile mil jaati hai, tumse hi, tumse hi
Na hai yeh paana, na khona hi hai
Tera na hona jaane kyun hona hi hai

After that manik says nandini aaj ek aur din tumhre bina bit gya oh i m sorry tumhre bina nhi
Tumhri memories ke sth aaj bhi yhi sochta hn tum khi se aungi aur bologi manik it's just only a bad dream isse bhul kr ek fresh start krte hai n ab toh rone ke liye aashu bhi km padh gye hai plz come back plz
Not more

N manik goes out n manik says to himself manik tujhe aaj kya ho rha hai
Be relax nandini is with u always n manik goes out

Scene changes (disc)

One girls is entering in disc n take the glass of vine n her facw his backward n start dancing on song

Dance...
C'mon c'mon
Dance...
D d d.. dance.

(N she turns n she looks like nandini n she wearing black midi n one man came n hold her start dancing with her)

Ni gori tera thumka
bada kinky kinky type da
Ni gori tera jhumka
bada funky funky type da
Kateeli teri ankhiyaan
Jaise nouk nukeeli knife da
Ni gori tera nakhra
Bada hanky-panky type da

Kisi hit gaane pe jo
Kamar matka degi tu
Fateechar se ye dil ban jayega shehzaada
Oonchi waali heel pehankar
Dance Basanti..
D d d dance Basanti
D d d dance Basanti
Ho.. har limit ki height pe chadhkeDance Basanti...
D d d dance Basanti (c'mon c'mon)
D d d dance Basanti
D d d Dance dance dance
d d d dance..
(The girl also singinging song n also dancing on the other hand manik reaches to that disc )
When see me you go wild aaw
You want my love you want it now now
You see me dancin up *
You know you know that i'm that bold
When I pump it up on floor or..
I know the boys be goin offo..
And I'll be shakin' it up
Take in it up breakin it up
I'm gonna be funk it up, what?

(Manik enters in the disc n the girl comes running toward him n manik is shocked to see her becoz that girl look like nandini n manik thinks that he is like dreaming but the girl crosses manik n hug one man n say adi u r late n manik turns to her n he can't able to believe on his eyes he is seeing nandini n that girl snatch that boy hand n goes again to dance floor in front of manik eyes n again start dancing with him)

Hey Basanti tere ghar ka address bol de
Hey Basanti tere dil ka tu gate khol de
Basanti visphotak bas ek smile hai
Tu sar se paaon tak poori missile hai

Kisi hit gaane pe jo
Kamar matka degi tu
Poora nahi te chain mill jaaye pauna-aadha
Aashiqon se deal tu karke, dance basanti
D d d dance basanti
D d d dance basanti
Ho.. har limit ki height pe chadhke
Dance Basanti...
D d d dance Basanti (c'mon c'mon)
D d d dance Basanti

N than she sits on sit with adi

Girl : tum 2 month se yha ho aur main sirf tumhare london se yha aur r late
This not fare

Adi : sorry baby
U know how much work i do

Girl : u always late
But today i don't leave u so easily

Adi : yr ab hum itne time bt mile hai u want to fight with me
Girl : ya becoz like to fight with u
Yr punishment is to hug me tightly n never be late

Adi hug her n manik is seeing n he can't able to believe on his eyes
Tum hi ho

Part : 61

That girl name is niti who look like nandini

Niti : adi lets go (getting up )

Adi : abhi toh aya hn abhi se chlo


Niti : are chlo toh shi plz.

Manik wants to talk to her but he lost in her

She goes by touching manik hand in hurry n manik feels like that nandini touch her n she also stops for one sec. Than she ingore it n go out

Manik sit there n take the glass of drink n thinks voh nandini nhi ho skti
When she touched me than why i feel like nandini touch me

Scene change

Niti entered in kapoor mension n shouts mom dad
Where r u dekho kon aya hai

Her mom (payal) n dad (Ram) came down n adi take the blessing from them

Payal : are beta come na sit

They all sit in whole

Ram : beta tumhra km kaisa chl rha hai

Niti : dad don't talk about office now
Hum sb itne dino bd mile hai

Adi : where is akash

Niti : bro will come tomorrow

Scene change

Manik comes to home n goes to her room n he lie down on bed without changing cloth n todays incident is not going from his eyes
He says to himself no manik why u thinking about that girl
She can't be nandini
She only look like her

Next mrng

Niti get up n rub her eyes n sees one gift kept on table n she pick n unrapped n than smiles came on her face n ran towards her mom n shouts mom bhai has come where he is ?

Payal : beta voh ate office chla gya uski bhut imp. Meeting thi

Niti : mom bhai mujhse mile bina chle gye

Payal : are voh shym tk ajaega
Toh milena

Niti : mom wht should i do yha main kisko nhi. janti hn

Payal : beta
Time ke sth sb jan jaungi

Niti : yeah u r right mom
Let's see

Payal : why can't we go for shopping

Niti : yeah great pln
Main abhi ek sec. Main ready ho kr ati hn

N niti comes in white midi n she is looking so cute

Scene change

Manik in office shaking hand with someone that man is akash

Manik : so from we r patner on this project

Akash : yeah
Nice to meet u

Manik : same here

Akash : chalo ab toh hum patners bn gye hai
So aaj tumko dinner pr toh ana padhega

Manik : no no main jada khi ata jata nhi
I m extremely sorry

Akash : plz ab mna mt karo

Manik : okay i will

AKASH : so i will send u the address
So bye

They again shaked hand n manik say bye to him

At evening

Akash comes to home n niti is sitting on study n writing something n akash hold her eyes n nandini touch her hand say n say bhai n turns n hug him n say i miss u so much n than he also say miss u to
Niti broke hug n say i m upset with aap mujhse subha bina mile hi chle gye

Akash : are bhut imp. Meeting thi yr
Varna balha main apni pyri bhn se mile bina chla jata

Niti : kk ab buttering mt karo

Akash try to pull her chicks but she say no bhai plz u know i hate this

Akash : i love doing this

N she ran out from the room

Niti : no bhai plz

On the other hand manik reaches to kapoor mension
N he enters in house n bumbed with her n she fall in manik arm n they both lost in eachother eyes for some movement
N than after that niti get up

Bg song lyrics

(Khamoshiyan aawaaz hain
Tum sun'ne to aao kabhi
Chhukar tumhe khill jaayengi
Ghar inko bulaao kabhi
Beqarar hain baat karne ko
Kehne do inko zaraa..

Khamoshiyan.. teri meri khamoshiyan
Khamoshiyan.. lipti hui khamoshiyan)

Niti : i m sorry
Voh mera diyan

Manik is lost in thought than akash came there

Akash : tum aagye

Manik comes to her senses n say
Manik : hi

Akash : meet my choti chulbuli sis niti

Manik : hello

Niti : hi

They all go dinning table n sits there n niti sits beside manik

N again again both r seeing eachother

Manik thinks why i m feeling like she is nandini jb mujhe pta hai voh kabhi vapis nhi aa skti

Akash : tumhari family main kon kon hai

Manik : me n my dad n my friend n tumhri family bs tumhri bhn aur tum

Akash : no mom dad bhi hai voh party main gye hue hai

Mean while Niti thinking mujhe itna ajeeb kyo lg rha aur aisa lg rha hai main isse salo se janti ho
When i fall in his arm mujhe aisa kyo lga it's not the first time n why my heart starting beating fastly N she drinking the juice in thoughts she drop glass of juice on manik jeans manik got stand up n niti also gets up n say i m sorry

Akash : niti tumhara dhiyan kha hai main kabse dekh rha hn

Manik : no no it's k

Akash : ab ushai washroom le jao

Niti showing the way of washroom to manik n thinking yeh mujhe kya ho rha hai n they reaches to guest room washroom

Niti : so here is the washroom

N about to move but manik is opening tap something pinch him n little bit blood also come out n shouts auh...

N niti turns n hold manik hand n say manik.. n she got very tense n manik is only looking into her eyes n she try to stop the blood by holding her finger n put in mouth but she realise that wht she is doing

Bg song lyrics

( Khamoshiyan ek saaz hai
Tum dhun koi laao zaraa
Khamoshiyan alfaaz hain
Kabhi aa gunguna le zara
Beqarar hain baat karne ko
Kehne do inko zaraa.. haa..

Khamoshiyan.. teri meri khamoshiyan
Khamoshiyan.. lipti hui khamoshiyan)

Niti : r u okay na

Manik : yeah..

Manik thinks tum meri nandini hi ho n niti start going but manik say nandini n niti stops n turn n say wht ?

Manik : kuch nhi

N than niti goes to her room n sits on bed n thinking niti wht happening to u
Tu ek anjaan bande ke liye itna kyo souch rhi hai lekin
Kyo mujhe bhut jaana pachana lg rha hai
Why ?

Manik cleaning his jeans n thinking tum nandini hi aur main yeh jan chuka hn meri itni care sirf my nandini can do
Tum bs bhul gye ho but yeh family
N he came down

Akash : ho gya clean

Manik : yeah
I want to ask u something
Kya niti tumhari real sis hai

Akash : yeah but why u r asking this

Manik : bs uhi
Chalo ab mujhe nikla chiye

( again n again manik looking at stair to see her n he came out n sits in car n see in side mirror nandini is standing n looking towards his car n he smiles n start the car )

Manik reaches home n he is looking so happy n he go his room n start dancing madly
N msg. Fab5 to come at his home urgently

N manik thinks oh my god i can't believe nandini u come back it's like that my dream come true
Nandini chaye tum sb kuch bhul gye ho but main tumhai sb dire dire yd dilwayunga
N shachaeka bd main pta lgaunga (resting on bed n smiling )

So here.. is next part.. hope u..like.. this.. track.. n guyz.. don't forgot to do comment n don't worry.. eveytging will be reveal soon...

Keep smiling
Love Mehak


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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing on...finalyy nandu ki wapis entry hogyi...ehehh😉
I lykd update...manik was very good in dis...d last scene ...determined manik to bring his nandu back...reallly excited fr this new journey😊😳
Always keep writing😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely...entry with a new name...
liked the writing...ty fr the pm...
n continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
acha kiya ho tumne nandu jldi wapis le aayi... bcoz uss k bina SB adhoora h.. and its NYC update dear.. thankx for d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update
nandu is back
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hua kya tha n who is akash who is adi? ??
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
So nandini is back again a twist mehak seriously ain't u tried seriously
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Posted: 9 years ago
But till love ur story very much
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. ...too good...
Vry emotional. ..
But at the end I am happy that manik found nandini...but eagerly waiting fr the mystery to unfold. ..
Continue soon
Bye tc stay blessed. ..!😊

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