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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the pms dear ...
N the update was too good. ...full of love...
Manan r soo adorable. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for pm!
Thank God operation n went well
N finally manan are like officially married
N loving how.manik is taking care of her
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shanuqureshi

Hey dear...

Thanks for ur pms... and um really really sorry... um not able to
reply ...
In this days um very busy... i just start reading ur story... plz give me some time ... yes i like ur story... soon i will comment on it too..
and i'll back to comment very soon
Once again thanks for ur pm...
See u soon..
Lots of love..


It's okay.. dear..
I will wait
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fab update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Tq for this beautiful update
Will be waiting eagerly for your next update
Tqvm for the pm dear
Take care and stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
too emotional...
finally manan married...
Nandu will be fine na soon...
don't separate them...
Manan...😭
thanx for PM😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Soo Emotional
But finely nandu is fine
Manik care for nandu, is soo cute
Tahnks for the PM
Take care Dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was fantastic update. Thanks for the pm. Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#Tum__hi__ho

Part : 46

manik n nandini sitting in cabin wid doc.

doc. : nandini
i must say
u recovering very fast

nandini smiles n look at manik

nandini : all becoz of manik doc.

doc. : i know manik is over protected for u

manik : doc. aur nandini ka head pain kb jaega

doc. : main abhi yhi bt krne wla tha
dekho nandini this pain will minimise as the time pass

nandini : pr doc. jb yeh pain hota
i just want to kill myself aur kill somebody

doc. : nandini..
u don't need to take tension
bs joh pain killer i prescibed u only take that immidiatly n than the pain will gone in 5 min.
khi bhi khi bhi jao plz keep this medicine with u
n baki sb thik hai na

nandini : ya doc.

manik : no doc. problem hai

doc. :manik relax.. n say..

manik : nandini na yeh smjhti hai that she is perfectly f9 n do all the work

nandin : manik... (said making face)

doc. : manik thats good she is doing work but nandini plz take proper rest k

manik : suna tumhne nandini take proper rest

doc. smiles n nandini make faces

doc. : Nandini take care
i have to go for operation

they both reaches to home

they entered the house all is dark

nandini : sari lights kyo off hai

n suddenly manik also disapper

nandini : manik

lights gets on all shouts suprise

(the whole decorated n big party suprised party organiad by fab 5 n navya n all guest are arrived )

all hug nandini n wishes her birthday

nandini : guyz seriously u all suprised me

mukti : yeh sb manik ka pln tha
nandini blushes

mukti : manik hai kha n tum jao nandini go n get ready fast

nandini go upstair n sees on table that red rose n with one bag kept

nandini pick up the red rose n bag n she find one beautiful white dress in it n with the note In note written today i want u should wear this dress n want to see my star shinning like a star in this n today is yr day nandini n i want it is special for u..

nandini smiles n go to wash room n change the dress

scene change

manik comes downstair

mukti : tu kha chla gya tha

manik : to change my cloth n nandini gye change krne

mukti : yeah ruko main nandini ko dekh kr ati hn

scene change
nandini sitting in front of mirror
thinking aaj kuch glt nhi hona chiye phle bhi manik ka birthday meri vja se spoil ho gya tha becoz i was become unconcious

mukti come inside

mukti : wao nandini u r looking so preety
chle

nandini : yah

they both come out from room

manik see nandini n can't keep his away from her

nandini n mukti reaches to stair n somebody call mukti

mukti : nandini tum jao i m coming

nandini about to go down but suddenly nandini feels immense pain in head n manik sees her n nandini is about to fall

manik shouts : nandini...
n start running to save her

all looked toward manik

but on time manik reaches upstair n hold her

manik : nandini tum thik toh ho na

manik make nandini sit on stair only n hold her again very tightly

nandini : manik i feeling little bit weakness

manik : tumhne voh medicine nhi li na i puted on table

nandini : i m sorry manik
maine aaj fir sbka mood spoil kr diya (start crying)

manik : nandini..
isme tumhri koe glti nhi k
agr tumhe kuch ho jata toh

manik hold nandini n brings down n she sit on couch

navya brings medicine n give it to nandini

manik : r u okay now

nandini : yeah

mukti : chlo guyz lets cut the cake...

servant brings the cake n kept in front of nandini

nandini blow the candle n cut the cake
n she feed manik first n than navya n fab 4 n everyone wishes nandini

Manik sees that on nandini finger cake is there n than manik hold her hand n lick the cake from her finger n they have eye lock

than somebody call nandini n wishes her nandini start talking to her

after sometime

nandini is sitting on couch alone looking not well n manik notice her

manik : nandini why u sitting
alone
r u okay na

nandini : i m feeling suffocation here

manik : tumhne mujhe phle kyo nhi btaya

mukti comes

mukti : nandini yeh party tumhre

liye rkhi h tum yha kyo bheti ho

manik : mukti actually nandini ko suffocation ho rhi hai becoz of crowd
So we r going out

Nandini : I m sorry mukti
U organise the party for me n I m going

Mukti : nandini it's ok
Yr tum dono Jao I manage here

Manik : chale nandini

Nandini : hmm..
Pr kha

Manik : Tum Chalo toh Shi
(Holding her hand )

They sitting in car

Nandini : manik btao na kha ja rhai hai

Manik : nandini wait na

(Manik hold her hand n say nandini everything will be f9 ok nandini nods yes )

Manik stop the car at beach n come out n open nandini door n give her hand n nandini come out from the car holding his hand

They remove their footwear n start walking on stand holding each other hand nandini take manik arm n put on her back n she hold manik back both r walking n than nandini put her head on his shoulder n Manik kiss on her head (they have a romantic walk on beach ) water coming n touches their feet again n again n they loss in each other..

Bg tune (aashiqui 2 love theme)


#Tum__hi__ho

Part : 47

At nite manan reaches at home

Manik : now go straight to the washroom n change yr cloth n than go to bed

Nandini : okay... okay...
Going
My caring manik
(She hold his cheeks so cutely)

Manik give cloth to nandini
Nandini hold manik hand

Nandini : manik ...
Look at me I m okay why u taking tension of me

Manik hold nandini face n say coz I..
I am afraid to loose u
Nandini
Tumne itne month main jitna
Pain Dekha more than that mujhe hr waqt hr pal iss bt ka dr lgta khi tumhai kuch hogya toh (having tear in his eye)


Nandini : manik...
I know that pr manik ab toh main thik hoon na
Aur tumhne hi toh kha tha ki jo bit gya ushe bhul kr ek new start kre aur ab no sadness only happiness

Nandini smiles n manik hug her tightly nandini too hold him tightly

Manik break the hug n nandini go pick the cloth n go to washroom n after changing her she come outside

Manik : chlo sleep (holding her shoulder )

Manik make nandini to ly down on bed n covers her with blanket n kiss on her forehead
N say gud nite n nandini also kiss him on forehead n say gud nite

Manik : nandini u sleep
I have to do some imp. work

Manik about to leave nandini hold his hand

Nandini : manik plz come n sleep with i want to sleep in yr arms
Km toh kl bhi ho skta

Manik : so mrs. Nandini Mahlotra is stopping me from doing work

Nandini : manik... come na

Manik : okay...

Manik ly on other side nandini put head on his shoulder n hold manik n sleep n manik kiss on his head n nandini smiles

Next mrng

Nandini get up n it's 5 am n manik is not there n say manik...

She get up n check the wash room n came outside n ask from servant

Nandini : ramu kaka manik ko dekha apne

Ramu kaka : haan sir bs abhi bhi bhr khi gye hai
Nandini come in her room n thinks manik itni subha subha kha gya hoga aur ushne mujhe btaya kyo nhi main manik ko phn krti hn

She see that with her phn one note is kept
She open the note
Nandini i have to go for recording urgently becoz maker wants now that song n this is the vedio song so where i m going there is no network i know tumhai pta chlaga itni subha subha main ghr nhi toh u will take tensin so don't take tension i will be reach home at 2 pm so take care do the breakfast n take ur all medicine n plz don't go alone anywhere.
Love u my star ...

Nandini thinks manik ek br mujhe utha dete tum i need u
N nandini ly down on bed n goes in a deep sleep again
After 2 hour her phn rings

Its ashima call (nandini's old frnd from maglore )

Nandini : ashima tumhai meri yd kaise ae

Ashima : tum toh mujhe bhul hi gye mubai ake socha main yhi yd karlo

Nandini : wht the reason behind it hm..

Ashima : i m in mumbai i need yr help so come to holel star plz

Nandini : kk i m coming

Nandini reaches at hotel star n thinks manik ne mna kiya tha ki main akele khi na jau but main ashima ko mna nhi kr pae

She asked from receptionist room of ashima n get in the lift n suddenly the lift stops n she is alone in the lift n she start draging the door with hand n start shouting koe hai kholo iss lift ko kholo n start crying n start feeling restless her body start sweating n she screaming kholo koe n she notice the time its 1 : 45 n thinks manik abhi raste main hoga n she call him but manik phn was on silent n she continuously trying his no. n becoming more n more restless on the other hand manager informs to check the lift to worker n they go n tell lift block at 3rd floor n i think there no one there in lift so bd main repair krwalenge

Scene changes nandini condition getting more n more worst n screming open.. plz...

Scene changes manik is driving car n thinks ab toh network agya mujhe nandini ko call krna chahiye

She pick his phn n see nandini 25 miss calls n thinks nandini ke itne sare miss calls n mere phn silent pr tha n he call nandini n nandini pick the call

Manik : nandini toh mujhe tum itna miss kr rhi thi

Nandini (low voice ) : manik...
Takes long breath

Manik : tum thik toh ho na kha ho tum

Nandini (crying): manik plz jaldi ao hotel star lift khrb ho gye hai ...

Manik : nandini stop crying tumhai kuch nhi hoga main aa rha hn na just take long breath

Nandini : manik... (crying n collapse on floor )

Manik start driving so fast
N side by side controlling nandini

N he reaches to hotel n angerly entered in hotel n start shouting at reception

Manik : kha yha ka manager

Manager : sir.. relax... tell me wht happened

Manik hold his colar n say lift main koe fasa hua hai aur tum sb yha aram kr rhai ho open the lift

Manager immidaily call somebody n manik reaches at floor where the lift stuck n start dragging door by his foot n hand n shouting nandini...

Nandini : manik ...
Plz mujhe bacha lo..

Manik on the phn : nandini tumhai kuch nhi hoga main agya hn na

Manik start singing the song to control her

(Oooh ho...
Tum ho
Tum ho paas mere
Saath mere ho
Tum yun
Jitna mehsoos karoon tumko
Utna hi paa bhi loo)

Manik put his head on lift n nandini too Manik put hand on lift n nandini too n feeling eachother n nandini is crying n manik having tear in his eyes

(Tum ho mere liye
Mere liye ho tum yun
Khud ko main haar gaya
Tum ko, tukmko main jeeta hoon)

Lift open they both see eachother n nandini having n little bit smile to see manik n manik having so much pain to see nandini like this but having relief to see her safe n she come above n manik hug her so tighly n nandini too n nandini is crying n manik break the hug n kiss on her face again n again n hold her n put her on the couch n give her water n pain killer

Bg song lyrics

( Kis tarah chheenega aa
Mujh se ye jahaan tumhe
Tum bhi ho main
Kya fiqar ab humein

Tum ho mere liye
Mere liye ho tum yun
Khud ko main haar gaya
Tum ko, Tumko main jeeta hoon

Oooh hoo ho...
Tum ho
Hoo aa... )

Guyz tell me howz my story n do comment plz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
manik is soo caring...
Manik's song can calm nandu down...
manik was sok reatless...
luved it...
thnx for pm...
update soon...

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