III - MaNan FF : Life With Nandini [Ch46 - PG137/Thread4 Link - PG153]

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Mawara_Ejaz

@Mawara_Ejaz

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#681

Sab say Pehly tou hellooo..! hahahaha Feeling low na? I know..! Koi ni yaar chill maar..! hehehe..!

Dekha dekhaa aa gai na 1000 watt wali smile..! Toba kitne flirty types smile day raha hai ya smiley ni? hahaha..!

The parts were awesome..! Marvellous..! Aur jitne bhi dictionary main praising words sab tery liye meri jaan..! ur vocabulary is awesome tou MashaAllah hai tou u know better..!

Aacha bohat bakwas ho gai na hehehe thora update discuss kar lain hain?

Part1

Aye hye wah kya picture the..! mjy bhi jana wahan..! yaar banda jaye bhi tou tab jab Manik jaisa hubby ho hyeee..!

Main Khwb dekhty reh jana milna phupho ka beta he huhhh.!

Then comes the food eating session yummm..! Nandu itna spicy kaisy kha liya..! Pregnancy ka asar..!

Phr Manik ka haal bura ho gya awww..! Nandu ro pari yaar..! Aisy he hota mery Dad ko just hiccups aa jty thy tou Mom tension say pagal ho jati the..! MEMORIES..!

Then Manik aur us ka romance pay control hye ray baba kitna sweet tha sab..!

Aur OT main Nandu sath rehny ki baat shooo cute..!

Then Hospital session was so cute..!

Aray yaar Mr.Malhotra knows already MaNan ka surprise spoil ho gya..! Aur Mr.Malhotra started dancing in between the conference..! These Malhotra Men na kya kahoon in kay bary main their only world is our pari cutie si Nandu..!

Part 2

MaNan talk was so emtional..!

Mani Loves his beauties alot..!

Then comes our gang...! Bechary Manik ko tou sab aik side pay kar kay undar bhaag aty oh God i can Imagine MAnik's Face and the ManBir talk hahahahaha can't stop laughing..!

Then MukLya were so cute..! Itne care Nandu ki...! then our Aarav aur us ki demand k baby kab aye ga..! Angels and heaven wala thing is so cute..! I loved that..! Then Manik went and he came back late so tired but Nandu ka surprise wah wah..! Sari thakan utaar gai naughty Malhotra ki..!

And their romance tou bus out of the world..! Kya baat hai..! butterflies in my stomach..! I hope myny lambaaa lambaaa comment kiya..! Bari mehnat say kiya hai..! Insta pay will wait for the reply..!

Aur yeah thanks for the comment on Dheere Dheere means alot..!

I Love you so Much Juhi..!

I hope mery comment say tery face pay big wala smile aya ho please let me know..!

Lots of Love..

Your Mawa

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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#682

Sorry didn't comment on the last part as I just came across these part today. My exams are going on and all I can think about is your FF. your work had such an effect on me! I was stalking your old updates and suddenly saw this new one and found that you are feeling low, I am sorry if any action of mine has hurt you and as for the writers block even I have experienced it and you over it eventually just need inspiration. And as for new ideas I really missing your flashbacks, you could write about the proposal and then about Amms and about some of their college memories that have been stopped due to these idiota who run the serial! 😡 but you can bring it back as I see manan through your story and it will give us a continuation from where they left it. Please update soon and read my suggestion if you think it makes sense. I hope I'm not being rude. Anyway, I love your work so don't talk about ending it, that makes me sad. 😭 please write soon! 😳

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Safina Akhtar

@safinaakhtar199

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#683

❤️THANK YOU SOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!LOVE YOU TO THE MOON & BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗

Edited by safinaakhtar199 - 9 years ago

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Saddy12

@Saddy12

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#684

Awesome update

You nailed it yarr...

Manik-arav bonding is too cutee

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#685

Awesome update as usual

loved it

its so romantic

suprise was awesome

manan always adorable

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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Lizbeth

@Lizbeth

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#686

Kill me , slap me, put me in d waste bin , do nythng for being soo late.. Am sry really very sry.. I gt stuck wid thngs, nd i cant read ds wid a messy mind.. So i waited.. Nd pls dont thnk, its coz v lost intrst.. Dat will never happn. U r my second MANAN. U dont evn knw hw mch i adore u..
I really luvd MANAN date. The arrangements n evrythng ws a bliss. Wen Manik said na, dt his heavn z in her hair.. I ws lyk Awww. Soo romantic..
Hospital scene ws funny yaar.. Desperate manan..
Fab4's gfts fr nandini..awsm. Mera bachha aarav, too cute. Thn cums manan date, nandini in saree nd those notes.. Soo romantic.

Am luvin evrythng.. Joh bhi tum likthe ho na, its truly truly rocking amazin fantastic.. Bt still yaa, i didnt wantd nandini to gt pregnant ds soon. I dont knw y.. I want fun outings lyk dey usd to go, craziness.. Nw manik dont evn let nandini to step out frm bed.. Aftr baby cums na,full attention ll b gvn to baby na.. I want MANAN nly.. Hw greedy.. Bt wt to do..
Dat doesnt mean dat am nt luvin ds phase.. Nd am waitin fr mre

I
LOVE
YOU

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#687

Lovly update 👏

This is the cutest story I've read on manan

Purely based on love n happy moments

I don't think people are losing interest

Coz ur story gets better with ur every update..

😊 😊

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vaishnavi911

@vaishnavi911

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#688

really amazing update as always

my favourite part was manik's care towards nandu

loved manik aarav convo as well

you write very nicely

love your story , girl

cont soon

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Shivani Agrawal

@shivi07

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#689

i am exhausted after repeating myself again n again bt still i would say
This Is The Best Fiction i have Ever Read😃
Seriously yaaarrr everything here in this story is just like a fairytale nd i just wish ke kaaash i would have been at nandini's place
The way you have shown Manan's relationship is very beautiful nd pure
The Way he takes care of her❤️
The way she takes care of him❤️
The way they give surprises to each other❤️
The way he talks to his baby❤️
Their belief that they would have a baby girl only❤️
The way their father loves them❤️
The bond between fab5 nd navni❤️
The love between Manan nd Aarav❤️
The way he loves her❤️
The extent to which he can go for her love❤️
The way she loves him❤️
The extent to which she can go for his love❤️
Though now we dont get to see manan offscreen but I can feel them in your story
sorry bahutt zyada bol dia🤪
Love you for this story 🤗
nd dont worry about people losing interest in this story caz m sure that once a person reads even a single chapter they are bound to get addicted to your story