III - MaNan FF : Life With Nandini [Ch46 - PG137/Thread4 Link - PG153]

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#631

The notes... it makes simple of things so much more beautiful :)

yah...before I forget to mention it..

I like the fact that Manik articulates how much he loves his baby, who is yet to come, already but I love the fact that he articulates the fact too that he loves Nandini more than anything else in this world and always will.

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Swagatika

@sws2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#632

Wow such beautiful writing.

Thanks for the update.

😊

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#633

Originally posted by: SHYPN
😳 😳 loved it.u r d best. U should show nandani's excitement; her plains;her feelings.and malhotra's child is coming; jealous people must also dere.
Loved dere talk. Post soon

LOTS OF SUGGESTIONS.. I HOPE THEY HELP A LITTLE

I agree..we need Nandini's side of story too..and not only her love for Manik but her aspirations, apprehensions and stuff.

Some cute Cabir- Nandini and Navya- Nandini moments with no one else around specially Manik.. instead of Cabir saying ki "ab toh baksh de meri behan ko" make him do something for her.

Navya is supposed to be Nandini's first best friend in SPACE, NavNi are not explored nicely in the serial too.. there are so many possibilities, they discussing Aarav and pregnancy issues..

Make Nandini go shopping with Mukti and Alya and they fussing around her and caring for her, like they did in this update.

From season 1, I actually don't like Dhruv much now.. so you will have to think for yourself what you want to do with him.

Later in the pregnancy phase, you can show that everyone is very careful with Nandini and don't let Aarav run to her and crash hug her, maybe you can show that he once did it and Nandini feels some pain and so Manik and Cabir gets hyper with Aarav and Navya makes him understand. Because I feel in getting Aarav close to his Massi Ma and Partner, his relationship with Navya is left unexplored.