MANAN FF- IT HURTS ALOT...(chp12A-pg147 / link to thread 2-pg 152)

First Previous

Page

108

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Mamiza

@kitkat5756

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#521

Baiby I just ur story in one go ... Sorry I didn't know about this story so couldn't give comments...thanks for the pm and for this beautiful story ... It touched my heart ...u made us cry with ur story like seriously it's so beautiful baiby ... U are just awesome writer ... I will say one thing don't let nandu forgive those idiots especially that gadha manik 4 years she had suffered they don't deserve for forgiveness I really like manik but now he is wrong... Even navya I didn't expect this from her ... Make her more strong and don't let her fall weak infront of others ...am in love with ur story just loved it ... Love u for writing this beautiful story ... Plz update really soon I know u are busy still addicted ho gayee hu Teri stories ka ... Love u ...update jaldi jaldi ... Tc...with lots of love and hugs

Quote

ruchi116

@ruchi116

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#522

Awesome n emotional update it I jaldi to nandu maaf nhi karegi she has suffered a lot but at last maaf to Kar hi degi after all he is her monster manik. She still loves him manik KO bas thodi mehnat karni hai mafi k liye. Waiting for their romance. Manik be bhi nandu KO maaf KIA tha nandu bhi kar degi. Waiting to know manik kaise manaega use.
Update soon dear

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

cleonebby7

@cleonebby7

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#523

It's such an emotional update I literally cried. I'm waiting for next update need to know whether nandini will forgive manik

Quote

risik

@risik

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#524

This story is my favorite story...
I liked it very much
Plz jaldi continue karo

Quote

Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

@_Myrah_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: kitkat5756
Baiby I just ur story in one go ... Sorry I didn't know about this story so couldn't give comments...thanks for the pm and for this beautiful story ... It touched my heart ...u made us cry with ur story like seriously it's so beautiful baiby ... U are just awesome writer ... I will say one thing don't let nandu forgive those idiots especially that gadha manik 4 years she had suffered they don't deserve for forgiveness I really like manik but now he is wrong... Even navya I didn't expect this from her ... Make her more strong and don't let her fall weak infront of others ...am in love with ur story just loved it ... Love u for writing this beautiful story ... Plz update really soon I know u are busy still addicted ho gayee hu Teri stories ka ... Love u ...update jaldi jaldi ... Tc...with lots of love and hugs

Thanx for liking my story... N haa tumne bilkul sahi pakdaa m so bzy .. Avi tak kuch likhna vi suru nahi kiyaa.. Bt i will try my bst to update asap..

M glad to hear that u r addicted to my story.. It means alot to me...

Loads of love n hugs to u too..

Take care n stay blessed

Quote

Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

@_Myrah_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#526

Thnx to everyone those who commented... Love u all n keep showering such comments...

Chapter-10(A)

A new morning started wid a new planning...

Nandu woke up.. She notice herself sitting on floor leaning against door... She then once again remembered wat happened at night.. Bt she chucked all her thoughts n went to bathroom to get ready..

Here manik also woke up n went to get fresh..

After a shower of an hour nandu came out of washroom n went near her mirror.. She notice her eyes hv swollen up due to constant crying at night...

Nandini Murthy yeh kya halat bana rakhi hain apni haa..?? How could u be so weak... U cried... Woh vi for that person.. Like seriously...??

No u hv to control ur emotions... U r not nandu u r the strong nandini murty jiski paas there's no anykind of emotions.. Not happy,not sad... Not love n not even hate... Right... Tum manik ko hate nahi karti coz he doesn't deserve ur feelings n emotions.. Chaahe woh hate hi kyun naa ho...

U jst hv to behve normal like always.. His existence doesn't even matters to u got that...

Tum bohot aagey badh chuki ho nandini n there's no way u can turn bck coz there's no u turn... Sab khatam ho chukaa hain jst accept it.. Bas kuch aur din ki baat hain then after he will be gone... Gone forevr..,

Be strong enough to stand infront of him... Be strong...!!! After composong herself she applied some make up to hide her swollen eyes...!!!

Here manik also woke n got freshed... He was also seeing the mirro n remembering night incident...

I know nandini meri galti bohot badi hain... Its beyond forgiveness.. I hv hurt u alot.. Pehle toh i didn't trust u i didn't trust on our love n then i left u widout informing u... Bcooz of my stubborness u lost ur family.. Yes nandini agar uss din i would hv let u explain everything toh sayad aisaa kuch vi nahi hotaa...!! Mainey apni haaton sey apni khusi..tumhaari khusi barbaad kardi... Bt i promise i will do watevr it take to seek ur forgiveness.. Main har woh mumkin kosis karungaa... I knw yeh bohot hij muskil hogaa.. I will hv to bear ur rudeness.. Mujhe tumhaari nafrat sehni padegi n u knw wat m ready for it... Main taiyaar hu... Tumhe wapas nandu banane ke liye m ready to do anything... I knw u will try to be more harsh on me bt koi ni i will take it chaahe yeh kitni vi hurting ho i knw its less than the painu r going through... I will hv to be strong ...strong enough to stand to ur hate... I will be strong to bring u bck to get u bck... Nandini m sorry n i love u HUMESHA... Murmured manik composing himself...

Composing himself manik went to cabir's room as they hv to discuss the plan to get nandu bck...

Everyone were already present there..

Navya:Lo manik aagaya.. Now let's discuss ki humey aagey kya karnaa hain...

Manik: Hmm..!! Let's make a plan...

Cabir: Par karey kyaa.. Yaar mujhe toh kuch samajh nahi aaraha.. Nandini is hurt alot.. ...!!

Dhruv:Lets ask for a sorry together.. Sayad woh kuch react karey...

Manik: I think dhruv is right.. Kal raat it was only me sayad she is expecting a sorry frm anyone..

Cabir:Okay then lets do it...

All in unison " Let's do it.."

Everyone left for the practice room..

Here nandu also came to practice room...

Dhruv was standing at the door..

She entered inside in a calm manner..

Dhruv called her"Nandini...!! "

N:Yeah..!! Wat is it..??

Dhruv : M sorry..

She didn't answer anything n jst came toward a chair n place some file which she brought..

Dhruv gesture towards mukti to speak..

Mukti came towards her..

Mukti: Nandini..

N: Wat..??

Mukti: Woh i wanted to ask for an apology.. M sorry..

She ignored it n behave like she didn't even heard anything..

Mukti made a bad face n went bck to her place..

She gesture alya to speak..

Alya: Nandini we r really sorry.. I knw humney tumhe bohot hurt kiyaa hain bt plz forgive us... Plz ..!!

Nandini kept on fliping the pages of file n said " So everyone listen to me carefully.. As kal practice nahi hui n we didn't even made any progress to kal ki vi work cover karni hain.. Today we hv to do some extra work.. It could be tiring bt we hv less time to complete n more work to do.. So jst get ready n tune ur instruments..." She said it in a little bossy tone...

All were really upset seeing her ignoring them.. All of them were standing wid a helpless look except manik coz he knew it would be her reaction n more over he hv to be strong.. Nandu ignorance was hurting him bt not as that much as nandu was hurt...

He then gestured navya to speak..

Navya nodded in a yes n walk toward nandini..

Navya:Woh nandu..!! Bt she was cut off in btn by nandini's voice...

Nan: Nandini... Its nandini my name.. She said maintaining a cold tone in her voice..

Navya: Nandu plz humey maaf kardo.. Humey pata hain hum sab sey bohot badi galti hui hain.. Hum sab ney tumhe bohot dard diyaa hain.. Aur iss sab ke liye hum maafi maangte hain.. Sorry..!!

Nan: I think i made u clear my name is nandini.. Keep it in ur mind.. Firstly m really not interested in this sorry session of urs n secondly today we hv lot of works to do so lets not waste the time in this nonsense..

Navya: Nandu plz..

Nandini: Ms.Navya Naveli will u plz stop it.. U r wasting our time.. Mere paas muft kaa waqt nahi hain... So plz ..

Navya bcked off in disappointment...

Now cabir walk ahead n spoke..

Cabir: I knw nandini its not easy for u.. Hum jaantey hain u r hurt.. Hurt beyond to repair bt plx ek baari humey maaf karke toh dekho.. We will try our bst to make it up..

Nan: Mujhe nahi lagta ki anyone of u r i interested in this album.. So ek kaam karte hain.. Let's take a break of few mins aur jab main wapas aau toh apna yeh sorry session band kardena okay.. For now a brk of half an hour... Saying this she left the room..

All were sad frm her response... They were giving each other a disappointed look...

Don't worry guyz.. It's jst a start... Everything will be alright if we try som more...

All gve him a weak smile..

Cabir: Toh guyz aage kya karna hain..

Dhruv: Actually i hv an idea.. Listen ... He told everyone his plan..

Everyone in unison" Ok guyz then let's do this..!! "

Nandini was sitting in her room..

She heard a knock on the door..

She went to open the door..

It was cabir standing with a big chart paper written sorry on it...

Nandini gve him a deadly glare n closed the door..

Few minutes later she again heard a knock...

She opened the door.. This time it was navya n mukti.. They were standing wid a sorry board in their hand..

Sorry ..!! Both mukti n navya said in unison wid a smile..

I don't need ur sorry.. Jst get lost..!! She shouted on them n closed the door on their faces...

Few minutes later she again heard a knock...

Ab kaun hain..!! Murmuring to herslf she opened the door..

It was dhruv n alya... They were standing wid big sorry cards..

Sorry nandini plz accept this... Saying this dhruv forwarded the card..,

Nandu took the card n tore it..

Happy.. Now jst leave saying this she again closed the door..

Again few minutes later she heard a knock...

Oh god .. Stop all this.. M getting hell frustrated... Ab chahe koi vi ho main darwaaza kholungi hi nahi... Saying this she didn't open the door..

There was continuous knock on the door... Accepting her defeat she went to open the door...

This time it was manik... He was sitting on his knees n catching his ears..

Sorry.. Plz forgive us...!!! Manik pleaded her..

Hogaya now leave.. Aur ab agar kisi ney vi mujhe pareshaan kiyaa toh i swear i will kill u all..!! Saying this she shut the door on his face..

Few minutes later she heard some noise frm outside.. It was fab5 n navya... They were wishpering standing outside the door bt it was clearly heard by nandu,...

Mukti: Dhruv mere sher chal darwaaza knock kar..

Dhruv: Arrwy didn't u listen she said she will kill us... Cabir tu knock kar..

Manik: Stop all this main knock karta hu...

Bt bfore he could knock nandu opened the door..

Kisiko knock karney ki jaroorat nahi hain...samjhe naa... Now stop all this drama n plz leave...said nandini folding her arms...

All were still standing there...

Thik hain tum logo ko nahi jaana mat jaao bt m leaving... Saying this she went inside her room brought her car keys n left ...

Arrey guyz yeh toh chali gayi now wat..?? Asked alya

Manik: Thodi naa humesha ke liye gayi hain... She will be bck till then lets make some more plan...

It was dinner time when she returned... Rohan had to attend some party so he was not at home..

Fab5 n navya were already settled around dinning table...

Nandu came down to dinning area after getting herslf change...

She sat on her chair when she noticed a plate of food infront of her..

At a side of plate "SORRY" was written with the help of ketchup...

She looked toward everyone n all of them gve her a smile... She gve them a deadly glare...

Ramu kaka mere saamne sey yeh plate hataao... Shouted nandini..

Ramu kaka came n took away the plate..

Soon the dinner got over n everyone headed toward their rooms..

A new morning began...

Nandu woke up due to the sun rays falling on her face which was disturbing her beauty sleep...

She notice a cup of coffee at her side table...wid a note.. She picked up the note n read

" Good morning... Hve this coffee... I hope ur day today goes well... N ofcourse we all r really sorry..."

She took the cup frm table n take it washroom n pour all the coffee in sink...

She got freshed n came out... She was jst arranging today's schedule when her phn buzzed..

It was msg frm manik written" SORRY... Plz forgive us plz..." She jst ignored it n again started to get bzy in her works..

Later she again received a msg of sorry frm everyone one by one...

She just ignored all of them...

3days passed ... They all were trying their bst to seek forgive ness through various planning..

Bt nandini jst used to ignore them... She didn't pay attention to wat they r doing...

Quote

Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

@_Myrah_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#527

Chapter-10(B)

Navya: Nandu ko toh kuch fark hi nahi padh raha.. Arrey nandini toh iss baremey baat karne ke liye taiyaar vi nahi hain...!!

Mukti: Yaa guyz our sorry its not affecting us..

Manik: No mukti its jst she is ignoring us.. Bt we r not really sure that whether our words or our presence really don't matter to her...

Alya: Matlb..??

Cabir: Matlb yeh ki we hv to knw ki whether our presence is affecting her or not.. Right manik..??

Manik: Hmm..!!! She is definitely noticing us n our each move.. We hv to jst make it sure..??

Dhruv: Bt guyz how r we gonna do it.. Matlb kaisey karenge..??

Cabir: Actually i hv an idea...

N he told everyone abt it..

Everyone in unison" Let's do this guyz"

Nandu was sitting in the hall when navya came wid her baby..

Navya: Arrey mera baby.. Meri angel bhuk lagi hain.. Chalo lets do some pet pujaa.. Hmm kuch khaate hain..

(Now pari is abt 3 yrs n 9 months so she definitely can speak..)

Pari: Okay mumma... Jaldi kalo( karo) naa bohot vuk lagi hain..

Navya: Okay mera baccha toh aap naa milk piyo issey naa aap bohot jada strong ho jaao gey..

Pari: Wow mein stlong( Strong) ho jaaungi.. Yeah.. Fir main cabil( cabir) papa ko vi halaa( haraa) dungi..

Navya: Hmm..!! Okay... Aap yehi betho main aati hu milk lekar..

Saying this she left pari there wid nandu..

Actually pari was playing wid a doll sitting on sofaa beside nandu..

Mistakely the doll fell down frm her hand..

Nandu saw this n picked the doll up

Nan: Yeh lo apna doll.. She said wid a smile on her face..

Pari: Thnq.. Waisey mela(mera) naam pali(pari ) hain aul(aur) aapkaa..??

Nan: Mera naam nandini hain..

Pari: Aap mumma ki dost ho...??

Nandini didn't knw wat to answer... She was looking here n there..

Pari: Kyaa huaa aap mumma ki dost nahi ho..??

Nan: Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hain.., main aapki mumma ki dost hu..

Pari: Pal(par) mainey toh kavi aap ko unsey baat kalte(karte) nahi sunaa.. Aap log baat nahi kalte(karte).. Aap mumma se katti ho..??

Nan: Woh.. Darasal.. ..she was thinking of an answer...

Pari: Agal( agar) ho naa toh aisaa mat kalo.. Aap mumma se baat kallo( karlo).. Mumma bohot acchi hain... Aul (aul) waisey vi mumma kehti hain naa ki kisi sey jada del(der) gussa nahi lehte(rehte)..!!

Nan: Accha aur kya kya kehti hain aapki mumma ..?? She asked her wid a smile..

Pari was abt to answer bt was stopped by navya's voice" Arrey mera baccha.. Chalo dudh aagaya.,. Let's hv it.. Aur strong grl bantey hain okay..??

Seeing navya nandu again got engrossed in her file...

Navya was abt to make pari drink the milk bt was stopped by nandu voice..." Navya stop... Yeh kya kar rahi ho tum..??"

Nav: Kya kar rahi hu..

Nan: Pagal ho gayi ho kyaa.. Dudh se vaaf(vapor) nikal raha hain.. It means its too hot... Tum pari ko yeh pilaaogi..

Nav: Woh actually hum phn pe baat kar rahe they toh pata hi nahi chala ki dudh itna garam kardiyaa... Thnx..

Nand: Its alright par agli time se dhyaan rakhna..

Saying this she left frm there..

As soon as she left all came towards hall..

Manik: Dekhaa mainey kaha thaa nah nandini notice our each n every move.. Chaahey woh jitni vi dikhaaley ki she ignore us but she still do care abt us..

Nav: Haa humey toh laga thaa ki nandu apni file main bzy hogi par woh humaari saari harkat yaad kar rahi thi..

Cabir: It means we still do hv some hope..

Manik: Yaa we hv... Thodaa saa hi sahi bt we hv ,...

Mukti: Toh guyz aagey kyaa karnaa hain..

Navya: Humaare paas nandu ko manaane kaa ek tarikaa hain,,

Cabir: Kyaa..??

She told her plan to everyone...

Manik: Guyz aisaa karney se nandini aur naraaza ho jaayegi..

Mukti: Arrey manik its our style of asking for apology so let's do it.. Aur tuney hi toh kaha thaa u don't want to miss any of the chance to get her forgive ness.. So lets give it a try..

Cabir: Yaa manik lets do this..

The brk got over n nandu came to jamming room..

As soon as she entered she saw dhruv standing infront of her wid his guitar...

He slowly started to play it... N also started to sing...

One, two, three!

I am a fool, I am a fool

I am a fool fool fool!

You big heart, you big heart

You got very big heart!

I come near, I come near

I come near near near

You go far, you go far

You go very very far

( Dhruv sang the 2 lines n then alya n mukti join him n sang together)

Arey thanda rakh kaleja

Thoda baraf pe ghis le bheja

Sorry le ja, maafi de ja humko free

(Nandu avoided them n walk towards her chair... When cabir came wid a sorry card n sang these lines..

He gve her the card.. Nandu was holding it in her hand..)

( Manik came near her n gve her a rose.. She didn't take it bt manik made her hold it... )

He than sang..

One, two, three!

Sorry Sorry Sorry

Pakde hum dono kaan kya ( he sang this line catching his ears..,)

Sorry Sorry Sorry!

Bache ki loge jaan kya

Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya ( he sang this line gesturing her to smile..)

Sorry Sorry Sorry

Bache ki loge jaan kya ( he sang making a dead face)

I know you love me and You know I love ya

Hai apne understanding to phir locha-lafda kya

I want a big big smile and

I want it only only now

Are! andar se tu okay hai upar se khaye bhav

(Now dhruv brought a teddy n made her hold it... He sang this line n ask her to smile by his act..)

Aise kaai ko atka

Tere ghar ka jhadu katka

Tu jo bole kar denge daily free!

( Navya came near her n gve her chocolate n sang this line..)

Now everyone came at a place n sang together..

One, two, three!

Sorry Sorry Sorry

Pakde hum dono kaan kya.. ( all sang catching their ears..)

Sorry Sorry Sorry!

Bachche ki loge jaan kya

Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya ( all sang gesturing her to smile...

Manik came to near her a showed a wall in the room fully covered wid papers in different shape written sorry in it..

One, two, three!

Sorry Sorry Sorry

Pakde hum dono kaan kya

Sorry Sorry Sorry!

Bache ki loge jaan kya

Mehangi hai ek muskaan kya

Sorry Sorry Sorry

Bache ki loge ...

They were stopped by a voice" Jst stop it" ... It was nandu's voice..

Band karo apna yeh natak..

Enough is enough.. Main keh kar gayi thi naah ke jab i will be bck i want to all to stop all this crap but nahi...

Yeh yeh sab dekr ..aisey gaaney gaakar... Yeh chocolate.. Roses...card dekar kya faidaa... U think tumlog mujhe ye sab dogey aur sab kuch thik hojaayegaa toh tum log yeh galat faimi mey jee rahe ho... Let me clear u that ab in sab chizoo kaa koi matlb nahi hain... Plz mat karo yeh sab...

Navya: Par kyun nandini..?? Hmm maante hain ki humsab ne bohot badi galti ho gayi hain.. Par ek baari humey woh galti sudhaarney kaa maukaa toh do..

Nan: I said nah stop this topic.. Tumlog nah kuch vi karo it doesn't affect me so..

Mukti: It affects u... It do warna woh thodi der pehle pari.. ..??

Nan: Oh so it was all ur plan.. Like seriously tum log apni matlb ke liye.. Ek nanhi si jaan ko tum log woh garam dudh pilaa rahe the..

Manik: Its not like that nandini ki hum pari ko woh dudh pilaa dete... Agar tum nahi rokti toh navya khud hi ruk jaati ...

Nan: Woh toh i knw.. Bt still how can u involve a small child in ur stupid plans...

Manik: Toh aur kyaa karey nandini.. We needed to find whether our action our move u r noticing it or not..??

Nan: Aur uske liye tumne yeh sab kiya.. Oh god u guyz r really gone...

Tumlog nah ek galti sudhaarne k liye dusri galti kiye jaa rahe ho...

Quote

Jyoti

@bhagupur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#528

Amazing amazing update.

They are desperate need of her sorry.

But nandni is a one strong girl. .

She can't give her sorry like that.

They all hurts her now have face her disappointment.

I want manik face more ...

You penned each and every word amazingly

Beautiful.

Stay blessed dear.

Thanks.

Quote

Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

@_Myrah_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#529

Chapter-10(C)

This is all how u guyz do it right..??

M: Nahi toh aur kya karey.. Bolo na wat should we do haa..?? He said in a louder n angry tone,.

N: Mr. Malhotra watch ur tone okay.. Mujhse iss tarah se baat karnekaa haq nahi hain aapko... N do u knw wat tum logo ko joh karna hain naa karo wanna make music make it wanna do smthg else go ahead.. Main nahi rokungi..bt don't disturb me... For today m done wid u guyz.. M leaving first then...

Saying this she left the room..

M: Guyz i will be bck... Saying this he also left behind her..

Nandu was abt to enter her room... When some1 pulled her n brought her to another room..

It was Manik... He brought her to his room which was jst opposite of her n locked the door..!!

Nandu was hell angry after this move of his..

N: Manik open the door..

M: No... I won't..

N: Manik i said open the door..!!

M: No use of shouting coz aaj tumhe meri baat sunni hi hogi..

N: Koi jabardasti hain..

M: No bt i want u to listen me..

N: Aur naa sunu toh..

M: Plz...!!!!

N: Manik u knw sab kuch its over... Mainey khudko samvaal liya hain.. So don't start this topiv once again..

M: Par main khudko nahi samvaal paya hu nandini..!!

N: Toh main kya karu...?? Haa kya karu main..?? Manik tum mujhe chod kar gaye they main nahi gayi thi... It was ur decision of not trusting me... Mainey toh kitnaa bolaa thaa ki plz trust me but u didn't.. U hurted me u hurted urself.. Manik utnaa sab kuch honey k baad vi main aaithi tumhaare paas..aaithi naah...!! But u didn't let me to say anything.. Arrey tum toh mujhse milney k liye vi taiyaar nahi they..

M: Toh aur kya karta Nandini..?? Joh kuch vi mainey dekha uske baad kya kartaa main..??

N: U should hv trust me.. Tumhe aisaa lagnaa chaahiye thaa naa ki meri nandini aisi nahi hain.. Woh aisaa kar hi nahi sakti.. Jaroor kuch naa kuch hua hogaa.. Bt no... Tum aisaa kyu socho ge... Tumhe toh bas itnaa hi maan naa thaa jitna tumney dekha right..?? Today manik we r not together naah toh iski wajah tum ho,.. Sirf tum... Coz u didn't trusted me.. It was ur fault..

M: Agar fault ki hi baat karni hain naa nandini toh galti tumhaari vi thi..!!

N: Meri galti..??

M: Hmm.. Agar tumhe pata thaa ki vivaan was like this toh u should hv told me earlier naah.. Ek baari sab kuch bata kar toh dekhti ... Bt no sayad tumhe mujh par varoosaa hi nahi thaa right..??

N: Oh god manik.. Tum naa... Tumhe pata vi hain y didn't i told u coz mujhe pata thaa agar main tumhe sab bata ti toh u would hv say ki mujhe jaroor koi misunderstanding hui hogi coz i knw he was ur brother n u trust him.. Its not like ki u didn't trust me.. Bt the fct was tum ussey vi utnaa hi trust kar tey they...

So meri misunderstanding clear karney k liye u would talk to vivaan aur iss tarah se he would hv knwn ki i knw his plan..aur iskey baad he would hv chnge his plan... Aur fir fir woh kuch aisaa kartey joh mujhe pata vi nahi hotaa.. Bt no u r right.. Galti naa meri hi hain.. Its all my fault that i trusted u n tried to protect u...protect us...protect our love.. Sab galti meri hain.. Main toh har waqt galat hoti hu naa.. Chaahey woh 4saal pehle ho yaa fir aaj.. Yaha par koi galat hain toh its nandini murty..right..??

M: Nahi nandini i didn't mean to say that.. U r taking me wrong...

N: Par avi avi toh tumne kaha naa ki its all my fault..

M: Woh bas gussey mey nikal gaya,,

N: Yahi toh problem hain tumhaari Manik jab tum gussey main hotey ho naa toh u didn't see anything... U don't care abt wat other r feeling.. Yeh gussa naa manik it will destroy u to the worst oneday...

M: M sorry nandini.. Frm now i will control it... N i knw nandini mainey bohot badi galti ki hain.. I raised my finger on ur character.. Main samjh sakta hu how hurting it must hv been.. It's not easy for u.. Even m shameful on my own.. Matlb how could i..??

Joh hogaya naa nandini wog main thik nahi karsakta bt i can promise ki aaj k baad aage jo vi hogaa woh main thik kardunga.. Plz give me a chance.. Plz give us ...our love a second chance..

N: Manik aaj vi u r not getting me n my words... Tumhe lagta hain hai ki doing all this u can reduce my pain...?? No not at all.. Infct its hurting me more.. So let it go n let me go..

N yaa agar tum sach mey sorry ho naa than stop all this n baaki key din vi jst ignore me n my existence.. Once this album gets over jst go away frm my life... N for now open the door coz ur presence is suffocating me alot..

Manik didn't knw wat to do so he opened the door n let her go..

Nandu came out of the room and went inside her room.. She sar on a chair.,

Nandini pov:

Kaafi strong ho gayi ho tum... Today u didn't cry... Good jst maintain this.. Crying is not wat u r allowed to do.. Aaj sayad manik par meri baaton kaa asar hogaa.. N he will go frm my life once this all gets over.. And this is wat nandini mrty deserves.. Joh galti mainey ki hain naa iske baad its all wat i deserve.. No love no care no one... Jst loneliness n emptiness..

Manik was standing all quiet n blank in the same position..

(Song playing in bg... )

Tera yakeen kyun

Maine kiya nahi

Tujhse raha kyun judaa

Mujhpe yeh zindagi

Karti rahi sitam

Tune hi di hai panaah

Tera mera rishta purana

( He was remembering the incident of that night..how he didn't trust her..

How harsh word they spoke to her..

Tears were rolling down on his cheeks..)

Hai kya tadap

Hai yeh kaisi saza

Tu kyun mujhe aaj yaad aagaya

(He was remembering how he find all the truth n he asked nandu for a sorry n how she asked ki how does he auddenly want a sorry how suddenly he remember her..??The words nandu told him were roaming in his head.. )

Bechain din mere

Bechain raat hai

Kya mein karu kuch bataa

Hai mere paau hi

Khud meri bediyaan

Mujhse mujhe tu chudaa

Tera Mera Rishta Purana

( Manik pov:

Kya karu main nandini to get u bck plz tell me.. Main sab karney k liye taiyaar hu plz jst tell me..Main har woh cheez karne k liye taiyaar hu which will reduce ur pain trust me...)

Jo mujh mein hai

Shaks woh keh raha

Aaa Ab mein tu

Karz tera chukaa

( Manik pov:

Main puri tarikey se haar chukaa hu nandini.. Itne success ke baad vi m the one jiske paas kuch nahi hain.. Aur main main insab se tha chuka hu.. Main na ab bas tumhara har dard mitaana chaahtaa hu.. Har karz chukaanaa chahtaa hu..)

Aankhen hai num meri

Saasein chubhan meri

Zakhm hua phir hara

Dil ke viraane mein

Mere phasaane mein

Tuhi to har dum raha

Tera Mera Rishta Purana

Ooohoho...

Aaahahaha...

Aaahahahahlalala...

Oh tera mera...ah ah ah...purana

Nandini plz maaf kardo naa plz.. !! He was shouting

Mainey sab kuch kharaab kardiyaa.. Nandini tum sach kehti ho..this anger n it will destroy me n today it had really destroyed me to the worst.. Aaj tumsey baat kar kar aisaa lag raha hain ki sach mey everything is over.. Main tumsey baat karney aaya thaa bt sayad mainey sab kuch aur kharaab kardiyaa.. Par main iss tarah sey haar nahi maanungaa., kavi nahi at least not till my last breathe...

Ab tak hum jo vi kar rahe they it was a wrong plan.. The first thing we need to fo is not to ask for a sorry its to reduce ur pain..reduce ur guilt u hv inside u.. Tumhaare dil mey jo bojh hain naa humey woh khatam karna hogaa..

Main jaanta hu nandini ki tum chaahe jitni vi khoyi raho..jitni vi hurt raho u can't risk ur family life.. I hv seen ur love for them... It's smthg else joh hum nahi jaantey n i need to find it to make everything right.. N i knw ki mujhe ab kya karna hain..

He made a call..

Person: Ji sir boliye..

Manik told smthg to him..

Person: Okay sir kaam ho jaayegaa..

M: Mujhe aaj raat tak hi puri information chaahiye

Person: Don't worry sir hojaayegaa.,

M: Good jst get to work now,.

Saying this he hung up the call..

Other all came to his room..

Cabir: Kya hua manik nandini se baat hui..

Navya: Kya kaha usne..??

Manik: Nthg she won't accept our apology right now..

Mukti: Toh wats our nxt plan.. Kya karnaa hain aage

Manik: Kuch nahi.. No plans not now.. Kyuki right now smthg else is important..

Cabir: Wat do u mean..??

Manik: Nthg.. waqt aaney par i will tell u

Cabir: Manik par..

Manik: Jst trust me.. I will do everything yo make it correct par right now lets go n make some music... I will call nandini

Cabir: Thik hain..!!

Quote

Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

@_Myrah_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#530

Chapter-10(D)

Everyone left for jamming... Nandu also came.. They didn't raise sorry wala topic... This amazed nandini... After a lot of hours today's work got completed.. It was night now.. Everyone went towards their room to get fresh n came down for dinner but manik didn't came...

Everyone settled themself around dinning table..

Rohan asked the servant abt manik to which he replied that manik didn't want to eat today...

In manik's room:

Manik was roaming here n therw in his room waiting for the call... Finally his phn buzzed seeing thw caller id he received the call in no time..

Manik: So mainey joh pata karneko bolaa thaa woh pata chala..??

Person: Ji sir..

Manik: What is it..??

Then the person told him smthg which left him in shock... He didn't utter a single word

Person: Sir aap meri baat sun rahe ho naa

Manik: Hmm.. Thnq.. Tumhe tumhaare paisey miljaayenge..

Downstairs

Soon everyone finished their dinner n left for their room.. Bt still rohan n nandu were left..

Rohan:Choti plz ekbaar jaakjar manik ko dekh lena... He didn't came for dinner... So take some food to his room.. Actually main kisi servant ko hi vej detaa lekin accha nahi lagta naa we should show them ki we definitely care abt them aakhir guest hain woh humaare..

Nandini: Ji vai u don't worry main dekhti hu..

Rohan: Thnx n sorry for troubling u..

Na: Vai u don't hv to say thnq or sorry to me...

Main dekhkar aati hu..

Saying this she left wid a plate of food..

She was standing outside his room..

Nandu pov:

How will i do this... Manik ke paas... No i can't main kisi servant ko vej deti hu.. Bt vai ko pata chala toh unhe bura lagega.. Don't worry jst go inside n give him food aur waapas aajana... Yaah u can do this.. U r strong..!!

End of pov

After composing herself she knocked the door bt there was no response...

She then noticed ki the door was unlocked.. So she opened it n enter inside..

The sight infront of her eyes was really hrt breaking...

The whole room was a mess... All the things were broken n scattered on the floor..

There were drops of blood on floor n it was falling frm manik's hand.. His hand was hurt..

N he was standing wid a blank expression.. He was continuously staring on the floor.. His eyes were red due to continuous crying n still tears were rolling down frm his eyes..

Nandini called him bt he didn't said anything..

Nandini once again called him..."Manik r u okay...?? Kya hua.??

This time his trance was broken n he noticed nandini.. He ran frm there towards nandu n hug her tight as tight he could...

The plate fell of her hand due to this sudden hug...

Manik wat r u doing plz leave me..!! Nandini tried to protest...

Bt he he didn't leave her..

Infact he started to sob more n more harder...

Manik shhh... Kya hua..?? Y r u crying..?? Avi thodi der pehle tak toh sab thik thaa naa..?? She was patting his bck n trying to console him

Still hugging manik spoke " M really sorry nandini ... M sorry for getting u involved in my dark life full of mess... It all happened bcoz of me... Bcoz u were connected to me... M sorry...!!!!"

Precap: Thodi badmaas hogayi hu ...so avi nahi bataaungi.. Agli updates diwali ke baad tab tak...hmmm..!!!

Firstly main naa yeh puri chp apni pyaarisi dearest frnd😳 DUA ARAFAT😳 ko dedicate karungi... as u knw ki mujhe updates main song add karna bohot accha lagtaa hain... N i was hving so tough time to select the song ... Then she suggested me abt the song tera mera rista purana... N jaisey hi i listen the song i was like the lyrics its definitely suits to my ff... Its the song frm awarapan... It would be more connecting once if u listen this song... N thnx to DUA for suggesting me this song... Thnq so much for suggesting me the song. So this update is a return gift for u frm my side.. I hope u enjoyed it...love u alot dear...!! God bless u yaar..!!

N thnx to didiash for ur suggestion regarding pari i tried to use it... Aage vi suggest karte rehnaa...

So here's comes one more mystery... There's one more page one more truth to get unfold... I will let u knw soon.. N haa i knw u must be feeling ki sab kuch kitna jaldi ho raha hain aur days vi itney fast jaa rahey toh let me say ki there's much more interesting to come issiliye wrapping up this fast

So guyz finally its updated ... So kaisa laga... Do cmmnt yaar...plz...!! Ur cmmnt appreciates me more

Aur iss baar toh itna lamba updates diyaa hain toh plz haa lamba cmmnt dena.. Okay naah..??😉

Chalo mainey apna kaam kardiyaa now it's ur turn frnds to shower ur love through cmmnts.. N silent readers ko toh kya bolu...

Bye..

Take care...

Stay blessed

Loads n loads of love

...MYRAH...

120

Quote