MaNan ff 'RelationshiT to RelationshiP' Updated Part 4 pg5 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
as usual i loved your update
thank you for the long update
now cont ASAP

I'M DYING TO SEE THEIR FACE OFF
PLEASE MAKE IT IN THE NEXT UPDATE
CAN'T WAIT
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: vaishnavi911

as usual i loved your update

thank you for the long update
now cont ASAP

I'M DYING TO SEE THEIR FACE OFF
PLEASE MAKE IT IN THE NEXT UPDATE
CAN'T WAIT

Thanku 😆😆 but the response is tooo low infact nobody seems to be interested ppl r reading dis but no one is even sharing der views M really upset about the fact 😕😕 n if dis continues den I will have to stop writing dis 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
wow awesome update...
loved the determination of both the bands...
can't wait for their face-off...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Nice...
Whn u gonna update nxt part????
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: qqq

Nice...
Whn u gonna update nxt part????

I don't know I wanna write but der is no gud response n if it continues den I will stop writing dis
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just came across ur ff nd its nice concept vry different i really liked it specially modern navni but plz make d2 stronger than fab5 nd smart too eagerly waiting for their faceoff ... when will u updatw nxt part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Awsome yaar really very nice update...


plzzz...update jaldi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
PART 4


D2 enters in SPACE wid der "guys beware becs we r here look" n obvio cool attitude

At dat time Fab5 wer going from der n n n Nady bumped with Manik
Nan: hey u bimbo dikhta nai kya??
M looks here n der
M: r u talking wid me??
Nan: no no I was talking wid myself Can't u see here u r the only bimbo
M: ohh really u shd have seen n watch ur words Do u even know who I m??
Fab4 n NAS comes der
NAS: wat hpnd Nandy??
Fab4: kya hua Manik??
Nan: nothing guys looks like space is full of idiots
M: yeah u r right n u r the xample
S: hey bro watch ur tongue it will be better for u u have no idea who we r
M: really ohhh guys we r scared hu hu hu
Nav: u guys shd be scared baby
D: guys let it be na
A: yeah bro let it be for ur gud
M: aagar Ek aur word bola na toh dekhlena
Nan: Abhi shhh bimbo ko bolne do warna Hume v usske jsa blind bimbo banadega hai na bimbo??
D2 laughs
S: yeah bro do sumthing na plzzz we r already watching
C: wse who r u all unwanted ppls?? Aajanak se kahase tapak pare
Fab3: yeah who r u??
Nan: awww baby tooo much excitement is not sooo gud have patience u will know urself who we r
M: yeah Mu Al looks like we r dying to know
Nan: so bimbo sach v bolta hai
M: Ek aur baar bimbo bola na toh...
D2: toh dekhlena
Nan: Arre dikhaoge toh dekhenge na kabse toh dekh hi rai hai u bimbo n she hi five wid NSA
M glares at nan
M: ok den if m bimbo den u r potato face
N: seriously potato face look at my face sweetheart n look at urself u will get ur answers
D: plzzz guys leave it
D2: ok guys lets go den
Ab: yeah wse v humare paas faltu logo k lie pura din nai hai
D2 goes
M: innko Mazaa chakhana hi padega
Al: yeah but who r dey?? So much attitude dey have huhhh
Mu: woh baadme dekhte hai for now we need to go Nyonika has called us
Fab4: yeah let's go

Principal's room
Nyon: so guys all the bands has arrived in India dey all r in der respective places but dis band D2 dey wanted to see der destination so dey r here n I don't think I need to say anything becs sumtimes ago the crowd outside proved dis so meet the famous band all over the world D2
Fab5 looks at dem n dey r shocked
M: so u guys r D2
Nan: any doubt??
Nyon: looks like u know each other
Ab: yeah mam we didn't know dat space is full of poor fellows
Fab5: listen u
Nyon: ok D2 n meet the heart of space Fab5 dey r also the best whn it comes to music
Nav: guys wse practise toh hum karte nai but song prepare ka idea g chhodo I mean aagar aise competitors hai den hum aisehi jitjaayenge hahaha
C: cut the crap babes u still have no idea abt our talent
S: As if we care n dey leaves

Fab5: ufff dey r sooo irritating lets go to music room n prepare sum music we need some peace

Music Room
Outside the room
Al: what's dis noise?? Looks like sumone is practising
Mu: who have the guts to enter in our m.room lets see

Dey enters n see D2 practising
Nandy was tuning her guitar n singing kabhi jo remix
M was mesmerised n one word came out of his mouth Beautiful
His trances brok with navi's voice
Nav: see guys the unwanted ppl r already here
Ab: look guys now don't start again
S: yeah we need sum peace so go n let us practise
Al: really u r asking us to get out from our m.room it's hillarious
Nan: yeah right u guys r hilarious n kab chhodoge humara peechha karna?? Jaha v jaate hai chale aate ho mu uthhake
M: don't cross ur limits n trust me u guys r gonna regret dis
N: awww bimbo so sweet of u plzzz do sumthing na we wanna regret
M: u bloo...
AS: hey u watch ur tongue n Sid goes der n fight starts btw Manik n Sid
Fab4 n NNA stops dem
Fab5 goes from der saying dat u guys r gonna regret dis


Guys I think u r not liking my story ppl r reading dis but no one is even bothered to share der views or like or cmnts This is my first ff so I want all ur sujjestions n support but looks like no one is even interested n if dis continues den I think I will have to stop writing dis So plzzz if u r liking dis den atleast hit the like button share ur views n All the Sujjestions criticisms r welcome n sry for the crap😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
It was indeed vry good really good nd really liked d2 nd fab5 face off plz dont stop it its vry nice
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Hey nice update... i lyk d2 band... bt fab5 is d best...
Continue soon

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